Group 4 Padlet by Nur Umaiza Sharil https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88 en-us 2023-08-11 02:27:02 UTC 2023-08-11 09:49:18 UTC hello@padlet.com Storyboard 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659873920 2023-08-11 02:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659873920 final video https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659877666 2023-08-11 02:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659877666 ideation / storyboard draft 1 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659878642 2023-08-11 02:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659878642 A roll B roll Activity 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659879715 2023-08-11 02:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659879715 Script writing https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659885435 2023-08-11 02:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659885435 Casting https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659886290 2023-08-11 02:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659886290 Started filming some scenes https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659887645 2023-08-11 02:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659887645 raw footages 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659890583 2023-08-11 03:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659890583 consultation feedback 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659893020 scene 1 : 
shoot diff angles 
-close up on face /hands 
-show feelings /make scene dramatic

scene 2 :
-use b roll to show emotions
-shoot guy feeling frustrated (clenching fist or smtg/physical reaction to mother scolding)

scene 3 :
-use voice over of people rejecting him
-shoot him walking in the streets + voice overs(different voices)
-close up of him breaking down

scene 4 :
-shoot day and night 
-close up of broom and leaves
-show him working hard in diff angles

scene 7 :
-throw rice against wall ?? in slow motion
-go back to scene with him back on the ledge(transition)
-show anger and regret 
-eat halfway-throw
-bang table
(get more shots of everyt basically)

-use high frame rate
-slow motion]]> 2023-08-11 03:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659893020 group slides 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659894531 2023-08-11 03:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659894531 BTS 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659895328 2023-08-11 03:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659895328 videos stitched up 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659896775 2023-08-11 03:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659896775 Roles 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659897538 Kevan - Art Director,Visual editor 1
Chloe-Visual editor 2
Nabilah-Scriptwriter
Umaiza-Sound Editor]]> 2023-08-11 03:14:05 UTC https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659897538 feedback 232170Q https://padlet.com/232170Q/jj2i3y5qve56se88/wish/2659901221 -  problem with the food opening part, he already open the box but the close up scene shows him open the box again, see if you can fix that part, also since it’s only 2mins for the entire clip, maybe can add in the grab delivery scenes that you have if you can to make it better…the ending is quite open to imagination but the messaging is not very very clear about the results of drugs abuse

-Try to colour grade a bit more
- The texts can reduce font size..too big in your face
- And maybe use a san serif font
-The captions are too close to the bottom edge
- Maybe can move up higher a bit

- the ending message need to change


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