https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep Compare word choice and author point of view for each memoir. en-us 2022-03-22 13:59:26 UTC 2022-03-22 15:57:05 UTC hello@padlet.com kaydenbarron1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107838907 Both of them are very detailed and are painting an image into your mind.]]> 2022-03-22 15:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107838907 jaylagoodsell1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107840240 Mississippi River sounded like he was more calm rather than worried. The Polar Dreams sounded more surprised and can't believe that this is happening right now.]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107840240 connyrbates1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841547 They both used figurative language to get a better understanding of what the author was trying to say.]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841547 zamiyaadkins1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841557 The author's word choice impacted the message, because it added words that you can just imagine and the author described it with a lot of meaning and detail.]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841557 kaydenbarron1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841601 They are both very clear and concise and are doing it in first person view, so you know what they were thinking at the time of you reading.]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841601 londonmoore4 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841684 they both described it and had good detail. ]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841684 zoeyflynn2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841825 The word choice impacts the message by adding detail to where the reader can imagine it as it also give imagery.]]> 2022-03-22 15:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107841825 jaylagoodsell1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107842748 The authors choice of word can help see imagery and can have a better understanding of what the point is in the story. ]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107842748 jabrealglover1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107843885 Both gave readers a better understanding of the memoir.]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107843885 jaydendorsey3 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844061 The authors word choice made me feel the influence on the detail, information, and emotion within a massage.]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844061 rosethompson1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844096 The words used for both stories gave imagery and used figurative language to understand what was happening.]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844096 damienlipinskipalmer1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844167 Both had a point of view from a natural environment.]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844167 jackperdue2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844331 by using words and similes which gives you a detailed picture in your head about the authors surroundings at the time ]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844331 raidenhann1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844393 Both of them have a lot of details and paints an image in your mind.]]> 2022-03-22 15:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107844393 dallasbarnesperez1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107845560 The author's word choice gave the reader a mental image which impacted how serious the reader took it.]]> 2022-03-22 15:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107845560 londonmoore4 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846201 they both were in a bad situation but they explained it really well.]]> 2022-03-22 15:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846201 damienlipinskipalmer1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846499 Both authors used very detailed words to describe what was happening.]]> 2022-03-22 15:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846499 zoeygossman1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846808    The word choice in Mississippi Solo used lots of figurative language. This made the story easy to understand, and more poetic.     
The word choice in Polar Dreams used lots of adjectives and descriptive words, (and occasionally metaphors), that helped get a good idea on how the author was feeling and what she was seeing.]]> 2022-03-22 15:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107846808 connyrbates1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847157 On both of the authors point of view had me picture in my mind of what was going on and how they were feeling.]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847157 jabrealglover1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847214 Both experienced dangers but survived]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847214 connorgurney2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847330 Mississippi Solo is facing a natural disaster as Polar Dream is facing an animal.]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847330 zamiyaadkins1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847464 I think the author's point of view gave me a different way of thinking and it showed me how bad the situation was for them]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847464 isabellemccarthy1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847800 I think the word choices impacted the message by using a lot of figurative to get the point across and understand it on multiple levels. They deeply described every little detail so that you can really feel as though you are with them experiencing it for yourself.]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847800 jackperdue2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847817 many authors with memoirs tend to make it about a scary yet thrilling experience and use words to put your self in their shoes ]]> 2022-03-22 15:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107847817 ariannaleewagner1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849312 i think there words impacted the message by making good descriptive line that you could paint in your head ]]> 2022-03-22 15:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849312 zoeygossman1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849499   Both authors wrote in first person view. This helped to better put yourself in their shoes to understand and elaborate on their experience more.]]> 2022-03-22 15:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849499 connorgurney2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849653 They all use plenty of imagery and paints a picture of what's going on. Like your minds' version of Bob Ross.]]> 2022-03-22 15:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849653 rosethompson1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849666 How they described the situation they were in made people feel like they were them in that moment.]]> 2022-03-22 15:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107849666 dallasbarnesperez1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107850035 It made me feel like I was with them in addition to the author's word choice.]]> 2022-03-22 15:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107850035 jaydendorsey3 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107851482 The author's point of view gave me an idea of what he is feeling.]]> 2022-03-22 15:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107851482 zoeyflynn2 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107851523 The point of view based on the experience puts more detail in the memoir rather than if a outside source got told this story or if someone else saw the situation happening so basically it adds more detail.]]> 2022-03-22 15:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107851523 jaelleflournoy1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107852264 The authors word choice impacted the story by giving the reader a visual and more understanding of the point the author was trying to get across. ]]> 2022-03-22 15:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107852264 raidenhann1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107852886 Both articles are very clear and are in first person view.]]> 2022-03-22 15:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107852886 jaelleflournoy1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107856105 The author had a good point of view and expressed that point of view in a very detailed way which makes myself as a reader feel as if I am with them or in that position. ]]> 2022-03-22 15:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107856105 isabellemccarthy1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107856131 Both of the memoirs were written in first person and almost made as though you are looking through the writer's eyes and seeing, feeling hearing everything they are. This made the reader really understand whats going on because they put it in a way that it was easily comprehendible]]> 2022-03-22 15:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107856131 vedpatel7 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107857532 They both help us understand the text better and descriptive.]]> 2022-03-22 15:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107857532 ariannaleewagner1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107858500 they both had to go through a scaring situation that they could put there feelings and fears in to the writing ]]> 2022-03-22 15:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107858500 michelletrusty1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107865988 The authors word choice impacted the message by making us see what their talking about.]]> 2022-03-22 15:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107865988 michelletrusty1 https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107866383 By using describing words to tell us how they felt or trying to get the reader to understand how they felt on the situation.]]> 2022-03-22 15:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/shawanathompson1/jiv0inn2w1yqoqep/wish/2107866383