My Pago padlet by Viviana Narvaez

My Pago padlet by Viviana Narvaez https://padlet.com/vivi_peke_14/jisoa5dopzcu Made with good vibes en-us 2016-07-22 19:59:34 UTC 2023-03-02 12:59:09 UTC hello@padlet.com vivi_peke_14 https://padlet.com/vivi_peke_14/jisoa5dopzcu/wish/116828864 WHY THE ECUATORIAN CULTURE: COTOCALLAO IS VERY IMPORTANT TO US?

In our point of view the ecuatorian culture is important because our culture know the value of art, custom and traditions of our ancestors, also we show love our people and this is the most important part.

Now the few traditions and customs that our ancesters left us have disappeared, being very beneficent for future generations.

We chose the Cotocollao culture because they have interesting tradition such us the oldest about individual graves with the bodies covered with corn tradition.
In the later, individual were placed haphazardly in a “common grave”. Also they had very unusual houses of adobe walls and thatched roof.

In conclusion we have to value our own cultures and to not to lose and to pass them on to our future generations and teach them all about our culture Cotocollao.
Is very necessary have information about this culture to teach to many tourist.

]]> 2016-07-22 20:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/vivi_peke_14/jisoa5dopzcu/wish/116828864 FEEDBACK BY REMIGIO PILLCO AND KEVIN LEON. rempillco https://padlet.com/vivi_peke_14/jisoa5dopzcu/wish/116836023 - We think that the topic sentence need to be include in the paragraphs and not like a title.
- We think that the term "in the later" is not the better option tu use here.
- They have some mistakes in the writing
1. Ecuatorian--> Ecuadorian
2. ancesters---> ancestors
- They don´t need to put the concluding sentece and at the beginning use the words "in conclusion", they have to put inside the paragraphs.
- They use exactly 157 words and we think that they not effort more.

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