https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72 “And, after all, our surroundings influence our lives and characters as much as fate, destiny or any supernatural agency.” --Pauline Hopkins, Contending Forces Choose a novel or play in which cultural, physical, or geographical surroundings shape psychological or moral traits in a character. Then write a well-organized essay in which you analyze how surroundings affect this character and illuminate the meaning of the work as a whole. en-us 2017-05-01 12:04:11 UTC 2017-05-02 00:59:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242287 The historical context of "Beowulf" brings to light the cultural surroundings that the main character, Beowulf, is immersed in. In Scandinavia in the early 5th, and 6th century, warriors are trained to be both barbaric as well as loyal to their kingdom. Beowulf exemplifies this as he fights off Grendel and the dragon for the security of his father's friend's people and his own people, in the case of the latter. 

KR Comments: And how does it illuminate the meaning as a whole]]> 2017-05-01 17:45:52 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242287 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242522 Catch 22

The wartime setting demonstrated in the novel Catch 22 has severe consequences on the mentality of the characters in the book. The main character, Yossarian, is in fact consumed with so much fear because of the war when the topic of death arises that it eventually turns into paranoia. This fear and eventual paranoia are the basis of the novel as a whole 

KR Comments: refine the last part of your thesis--Write in the present tense when writing about literature]]> 2017-05-01 17:46:31 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242522 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242960 At the start of the novel, Hedda's married life is satisfactory: the house is big, her husband is financially stable, and the two newly weds' relationship is envied by their friends. So when obstacles get in the way of Hedda's ideal lifestyle, her actions reflect her attitude towards it. Because Hedda started off with a pleasant and ideal life style, she became one to romanticize life--if something happened that disrupted her ideal image, she sought to destroy it. Because of this, Hedda's actions showcase the crucial point throughout the novel that not everything can be fixed to fit an romanticized image.

KR Comments: Spot on--can't wait to read this essay ]]> 2017-05-01 17:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169242960 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169243299 Candide
Voltaire

Voltaire's satirical novel, "Candide," proves to readers that self exploration is important in shaping one's life. In the protagonist's gullible nature, he wholeheartedly believed that the world was perfect as it was, but it isn't until he travels the world to see the misfortunes himself that he psychologically develops and comes to the understanding that he must choose his own beliefs.

KR Comments--be sure you address how this illuminates the meaning of the work as a whole. Write in the present tense when writing about literature]]> 2017-05-01 17:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169243299 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169244211 Candide by Voltaire
Thesis: The impressionable Candide was raised among nobility and with one of the greatest minds of Westphalia, Pangloss, which in turn created a loyal, ridiculously optimistic, young man.

KR Comments: and how does it illuminate the work as a whole?]]> 2017-05-01 17:51:56 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169244211 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169244596 In the awakening, mme. Riesz gives the aspiring Edna the advice that in order to live the unconventional life she desires, she must have a "brave soul that defies". Edna carries this advice with her as she attempts to cleave herself from her husband and pursue her art, however in the end she finds her role in society inescapable. It is the weight of her cultural climate then acts to anchor her desperation and despair, which ultimately drive her to suicide.

KR Comments: " on the outside of the period-- excellent application of detail- be sure to address the impact on the meaning of the work as a whole]]> 2017-05-01 17:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169244596 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169247873 A Doll's House (Ibsen)

Best said by the "doll" herself, Nora, "I got the same tastes as you - or else I pretended to. I am not quite sure which".  Here she reveals that society had once had a hold over her mind, but had outgrown that state.

KR Comments: develop your thesis; you do not address the second part of the prompt. In addition, improve the clarity of the your wording.]]> 2017-05-01 18:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169247873 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169248020 I´m gonna hold this spot to type something later.]]> 2017-05-01 18:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169248020 https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169308942 Clearly, the setting of Greece is an essential component of Homer’s masterpiece The Odyssey. Constantly throughout Odysseus’s journey, the lands and waters of Greece challenge his abilities and success. No matter, through these physical obstacles he encounters, Odysseus gains incredible moral stamina and mental strength, allowing him to relentlessly push forward. These tests of perseverance illuminate the theme of the book, revealing to the audience that one should stay true to one’s family and never quit.

KR Comments: You address all parts of the prompt and prepare the reader for the rest of your essay. Work to consolidate wording when possible. Missed you today!]]> 2017-05-02 00:27:45 UTC https://padlet.com/krutigliano/72/wish/169308942