https://padlet.com/27cskelly/jhjbx51m425veq2j Feedback please. en-us 2022-01-31 17:41:30 UTC 2025-11-23 14:49:29 UTC hello@padlet.com 27bpoliseo https://padlet.com/27cskelly/jhjbx51m425veq2j/wish/2028070773 Whilst indulging myself within the systems of your writing I’ve came to find a minor issue that had been bugging me since I read it. This minor inconvenience is, in the section know as the introduction you wrote about how there are “cats, dogs and foxes” that are strays in this area we rightfully name home. This sentence falsely states that foxes are able to be domesticated and owned as a family companion, well to my knowledge this illegal in the state of New Jersey. My data to my earlier statement is that all you need is a search on this app we call Google which will present you with the information and knowledge from many sources that its illegal to own a animal that is considered wildlife (or so I’m lead to falsely believe). So please do consider the option of removing the part stating that foxes are strays because while in other areas of this planet it may be acceptable to own a fox, its not allowed on this fine soil. Sincerely, Benjamin Poliseo P.S This is text is contained in the 1/28/22 Persuasive Essay]]> 2022-02-03 18:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/27cskelly/jhjbx51m425veq2j/wish/2028070773 John_Laudman https://padlet.com/27cskelly/jhjbx51m425veq2j/wish/2139517243 Cartar, your Article was really bad….. but here’s some tips to change. GET MORE information, two short. April Fools haha.
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