Scrooge short response PRACTICE by Christopher Jelderks https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj Made with a quick smile en-us 2017-11-07 16:42:10 UTC 2025-11-29 02:16:08 UTC hello@padlet.com Kailani Roberson https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451256 There were several details in the passage that show the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said.  The text states on line 23, “For the first time the kind hand faltered”. Also on lines 28-30 the text states, “Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress. It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost.”  From the text I can infer that the spirit has let Scrooge live because he promised to be a better person and honor Christmas in his heart.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451256 Makailah Dunham m_dunham https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451310 There are several details in the passage that show that the spirit is affected by what  Scrooge says.The spirit showed Scrooge the tombstone and Scrooge didn't want that to be him and so he was crying and was scared and praying and praying to the spirit that wasn't him and he looked up and the spirit disappeared and he was holding onto the bedpost. At that moment he knew his prayer had been answered before that he had told the spirit he would worship christmas and love it with all his heart.On line 23 it says that the "kind hand faltered" that's why I think that the Scrooge was effected by the christmas spirit let the Scrooge stay alive because a "Kind hand" wouldn't let someone die.


]]> 2017-11-07 16:44:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451310 Emma Jordan https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451365 Based on what I read, there are several details in the passage that shows that the Spirit is affected by what Scrooge says. A few examples of how the Spirit is affected by what the Scrooge said is on lines 23 and 29, "For the first time the kind hand faltered." and, “It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled into a bedpost.” I think the Spirit is affected by what the Scrooge said because the Spirit’s hand faltered after the Scrooge had been begging for another chance, and we know that the Spirit did give the Scrooge another chance.]]> 2017-11-07 16:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451365 Austin Falk https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451479 There are several details that show the spirit was affected by scrooge's Words. towards the end of the passage the spirits hand falters(line 23) .in the end of the passage the spirit disappears and he turns into the bedpost of mr scrooge's bed ( line 28-30). Now i can tell that the spirit was affected by his words.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:44:24 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451479 Asher ZACHA https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451631 There are many details that show how what Scrooge says affects the spirit. On line 21 - 23 it says “Assure me that I can change these shadows that you have shown me by an altered life. For the first time the kind hand faltered.” From this I can infer that he is okay because the hand faltered as a sign of forgiveness or grace from what he had done in the past.]]> 2017-11-07 16:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451631 Juan Renteria https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451702 2017-11-07 16:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204451702 roman https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452147 There are many ways that the spirit is affected by what scrooge says.  On line 30 it said that the hand faltered and then turned into a bedpost.  Another way the spirit was affected is that his fate was reversed.  Because of this i think scrooge will keep his word and cherish christmas in his heart.]]> 2017-11-07 16:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452147 Evan Riggs https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452209 There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what scrooge says.
On line 21-22, Scrooge says “Assure me that I yet may change these shadows that you have shown me, by an altered life.” After Scrooge says this, on line 23 the text states that the hand faltered.”For the first time, the kind had faltered.”
From this, I can infer that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said because at the end of the passage, Scrooge said enough to the spirit for it to gain trust in him, and the spirit faltered.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452209 Schattschneider https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452620 There is many examples of the Spirit being affected by what Scrooge says.  In lines 20-30  Scrooge is begging for forgiveness  then the firm hand of the Spirit shriveled up and faded away into a bedpost.  Also on line 10-13 Scrooge says “Say it is thus with what you show me!” Then on line 14 the passage explains how the spirit was immovable as ever.  When the spirit turned into a bed post it was because Scrooge was praying to fate reverse and telling the spirit that he wouldn't do it again and he’d honor christmas past, present, future. Also when the spirit was immovable, it was because the spirit had brought Scrooge to his own gravestone and this is what Scrooge said about the spirit taking him to his gravestone in the future,  “Men’s courses will foreshadow certain ends, to which, if persevered in, they must lead. But if the courses be departed from, the ends will change. Say it is thus with what you show me!”  Those are just two reasons of how the spirit was affected by what scrooge was saying.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204452620 Juan Renteria https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204453748  There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says.On page 36 “Scrooge says why show me this if i'm passed all hope” and the spirit is pointing to a grave that said Ebenezer Scrooge and the spirit is pointing at it like telling him this is going to happen to you and Scrooge keeps saying please spirit i'll change my ways and then the spirits hand faltered like his fate was about to change and then the spirit changed into a bedpost and Scrooge was back in his room and Scrooge became a better guy. I can agree that the spirit is touched by what Scrooge's says because the spirit changed into a bedpost and the spirit isn’t pointing at the head stone like he was before now he is pointing at it like saying this isn’t going to happen to you know and then Scrooge’s fate changed.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204453748 sonia https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204456645 spirite is affected by what scrooge say's  on line 20-30  he say why show me this if i am past all hope  these shadows you have show 
me, by an altered life. For the first time the kind hand faltered.Not done

]]> 2017-11-07 16:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204456645 Gabriel Tiefenback GabeTiefenback https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204457829 Scrooge is the only person who talks in the story but the spirit is affected by what scrooge says because the spirit showed his tombstone and showed him he was going to die if he didn't change, at the end of the story scrooge has changed and the spirit left scrooge alone and alive so that shows that the spirit is affected by what scrooge says.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204457829 Dr. J. cjelderks https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204458390  
There are several details that show the spirit was affected by what Scrooge says. According to the text, on  line 23, it said, "For the first time the kind hand faltered." Also, at the end of the story, after Scrooge prays and begs for mercy, the spirit "dwindled down into a bedpost."It is easy to see both of these instances show that the spirit is effected by Scrooge's repentance.  At first the spirit falters, and then it complete changes--showing that all is well with Scrooge now. 
]]> 2017-11-07 16:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204458390 Drake https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204458765 The spirit was not going to give scrooge a second chance but he did anyway. Scrooge made this happen by saying " why show me this when i lost all hop on lines 20 & 21. "He also said this on line 24 I will honor Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all the year. " and then on lines " 28 to 30  Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress. It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost." And with all this details i know that the spirit gave him a second chance.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204458765 Jaren Easter https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459126 There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says.On line 20 and 21 it says “In one last prayer the spirit has changed into a bed post as he was holding his arm.”With in the reading I found Scrooge also said on line 18,“Am I that man who lay upon that bed”(Grave).It is easy to see that because Scrooge is pestering the spirit with all kinds of different questions.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459126 Abby a_mudong https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459371 There are many details that show the spirit is affected by what scrooge says. One example I found, according to the text on line #23 states, “For the first time, the kind hand faltered.” Another example is on line #29 and 30, “he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress. It shrunk, 
collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost.” From this i can infer that the spirit believes that scrooge will change.]]> 2017-11-07 16:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459371 Haileigh https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459995 There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what scrooge says on line 30, “ Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed He saw an alternation in the phantom's hood and dress.” Another example i found is on line 20, “ red upon the stone of the neglected grave his own name. “ This evidence shows scrooge is making the spirit feel accomplished because he made scrooge feel thankful.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:58:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204459995 gavin https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460682 There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what scrooge said. on lines 20 threw 30 scrooge was begging the spirit to leave him alone and to give him another chance. Scrooge also gave the spirit a lot of questions,one example is on line 18 scrooge said am I the man who lay upon the bed. Another example is when on line 20 21 and 22 scrooge was giving questions that i think affected the spirit. I can infer that the spirit was affected and that the spirit is happy and will leave scrooge alone. 

]]> 2017-11-07 16:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460682 Austin https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460685 There are several details that show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says. On line 11-14 it states,“Men’s courses will foreshadow certain ends, to which, if persevered in, they must lead.But if the courses be departed from, the ends will change. Say it is thus with what you show me!” The spirit was immovable. The spirit said according to the text on line 21-23 “Assure me that I yet may change these shadows you have shown me, by an altered life.” The spirit's hand falterd for the first time and it turned into a kind hand. It is easy to see both of these instances show that the spirit is affected by what Scroog said.

]]> 2017-11-07 16:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460685 Brennen Ramirez https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460720 The repeated questions that scrooge asked did affect the spirit because the spirit gave him a second chance when scrooge was on his knees begging for a second chance, when he was about to cry the text said that the spirits hand faltered and fell, then the whole spirit disappeared.On line 23 the text states “for the first time the kind hand faltered”. Another example is on line 27 through 30, “Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress, It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost”.This is why I believe the spirit was affected by what Scrooge says, because the spirit’s hand turned into what looked like a kind hand and it fell to the ground so the spirit would leave Scrooge at peace.


]]> 2017-11-07 16:59:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460720 Serina sellers https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460745 There are several things of how the spirit is affected by what Scrooge  says. According to the text it says, “Why show me this, if I am past all hope? Assure me that I yet may change these shadows you have shown me, by an altered life.”  within the text I found, ¨For the first time the kind hand faltered.¨ Another example is,¨I will not shut out the lessons that they teach. Oh, tell me I may sponge away the writing on this stone!” the spirit was affected by this by,¨Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress. It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost.¨ From this I can infer that the spirit can be affected in many ways. ]]> 2017-11-07 16:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460745 Daniel https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460980 The spirit was affected of what Scrooge said because on line 28-30 the text talks about Scrooge holding the spirits hand and Scrooge was telling the spirit the he will change his attitude. Then the spirit’s hand faltered and then his body followed. The next morning Scrooge woke up holding on to bedpost and everything was fine. Scrooge changed his attitude and started to be nice to people and his workers. This showed that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204460980 Breanna https://padlet.com/cjelderks/jgbd5ynu7dhj/wish/204461198 There are several details that show the spirit was affected by what Scrooge says. 
According to the text “For the first time, the kind hand faltered.” Another example is “Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw an alteration in the phantom’s hood and dress, It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost.” On line number 23 is when it said “For the first time, the kind hand faltered” because a piece of evidence on line 23 is because the hand just dropped instead of staying up.   DIDN'T FINISH
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