Period 7/8- SHORE evidence and commentary for 2018 Argument prompt by Rebecca Willner https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d 1. Write your name(s) and type your thesis from Step 3 of the Mock Argument Debrief packet. 2. Describe your specific evidence and identify its SHORE category. 2. Write at least 2-3 sentences of commentary explaining how your piece of evidence supports your position about the value of exploring the unknown (your thesis) en-us 2021-04-20 13:20:24 UTC 2021-04-22 16:59:42 UTC hello@padlet.com Your names and thesis willnerr https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1437755605 Your evidence and SHORE category

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Your commentary]]> 2021-04-20 13:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1437755692 STUDENT SAMPLE C: Thesis: The exploration of the unknown has led to unprecedented scientific development, cultural development, and personal development alike. willnerr https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1437755698 Evidence: Thoreau- SHORE evidence type- READINGS

Commentary: Thoreau famously spent a period of his life living in seclusion on the banks of Walden Pond in the northern United States. Like Bach and Shostakovich, Thoreau helped to establish a new genre is his craft. Thoreau, along with other like Ralph Waldo Emerson, created the transcendentalist movement, now studied by millions of scholars and student across the world. While his exploration of new ideas in literature is certainly notable, it is the content of his writing that is most important in the context of the theme of the unknown. Thoreau wrote Walden to summarize his thoughts and experiences throughout the time he spent on the pond of the same name. Reading Walden gives a clear impression of Thoreau as a dynamic character, one who develops and alters himself thanks to the knowledge he obtains. It is clear, that after his experience on the pond, Thoreau has changed for the better: he is more introspective; he has come to realizations about the world. Thus, Thoreau’s decision to leave society and live in the unfamiliar wilderness led to his own personal improvement in a grand way.


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Your commentary]]> 2021-04-20 13:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1437755708 Maddie, Rainey, Hannah, and Jimmy https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1438720988 thesis: although the unknown can be intimidating and scary, embracing and exploring it can be valuable because you are able to discover new and useful things as well as advance the things we already have. 
SHORE category: READING 
Evidence: The explorers can also make new discoveries, one time I read that when on the moon, Neil Armstrong put up the American flag and it stood straight out, which was intriguing to them.
Commentary: Discoveries like this further motivated  scientists to explore more of the unknown land. Humans tend to have a curious nature to them, and discovering the unknown can fulfill our curiosity, bringing joy to all of us.When we obtain this need for joy and discovery, it helps to satisfy our personalities, and mindset.]]> 2021-04-20 16:17:45 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1438720988 brock nicole hunter https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1443293656 The value in choosing the unknown is very high because questions you have are answered, you see never told things, and expands your knowledge to a big extent. 

OBSERVATION~ unknown going into the school year with covid 
This year at mcguffey highschool students had to enter the unknown going into school because of a new schedule and new ways of learning.They had to learn to navigate google classroom and get better with using applications online to do their work. Students had to adapt to the virtual learning. Student also had to adapt to the unknown schedule of only being allowed to go to school two days a week, then 4, and then completely back. This will benefit students in the future because if it ever happens again we will be prepared. Also gives of skills on the computer if people end up getting a career where they have to work from home or where they have to use computers a lot. Also the adapting to new schedule helps people in the future to be able to adapt to not always having a stable schedule in work. ]]> 2021-04-21 16:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/jg2g592f23e5qq0d/wish/1443293656