Padlet Peer Critiques by 高影 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67 Glow and Grow en-us 2019-04-29 01:36:09 UTC 2019-05-06 02:58:26 UTC hello@padlet.com Glow: What has the individual done well? Explain the specifics. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/354854719 2019-04-29 01:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/354854719 Grow: What does the individual need to work on in the future? yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/354854799 2019-04-29 01:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/354854799 Grow: What does the individual need to work on in the future? xiaoxie_zheng https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/356885264 Xiaoxie Zheng: 
Glow: The presentation is informative and well-structured. I noticed that you used a lot bullets, which makes your key points more clear. Great job!
Grow: My suggestion is that maybe you can make your present more fluency. ]]> 2019-05-05 02:49:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/356885264 Christopher A Barone Glow: I Like your presentation, the examples you used make the speech more and interesting, which impressed me. And also tech me a lot. Very good job!           Grow:I think it's a good presentation, maybe try to fluctuate your voice when speaking will be better. its a great work. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357029979
 

]]> 2019-05-06 02:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357029979 Matthew Smolen Grow: I like your presentation and you have a good ideas which it's a good thinking for social media. and your presentation everything is good. and also you talk about technological growth which teach me a lot of knowledge. overall its a great job!                Glow: Also, I believed you spend a lot time on this assignment. and maybe next time you can give more specify example to support your thesis statement and add more pictures, good job! yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030331 2019-05-06 02:50:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030331 Xiaoxie zheng Glow: I like your presentation. You give us more examples and date to support your thesis statement. I believed you spend o lot of time on this presentation. overall, great job!                                                Grow: Maybe next time try to fluctuate your voice and adjustment your tone when speaking will be better.        yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030458 2019-05-06 02:51:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030458 Alexandria Paladino Glow: I like your presentation. your voice and tone are great. You use a lot of elements make your presentation interesting. Also your thesis and survey are interesting for me. Overall, good work!            Grow:  Your voice tone and speed was great. It was very clear for me to head your and I think I don't have any critiques!          yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030562 2019-05-06 02:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030562 Nicolette Curran Glow: I really enjoy your presentation which is very attraction to me. Everything is clear for me to understand. And your give us more information and your background pictures are great. Good job!                  Grow: I think everything are good. If just focus your background color because will make audiences feel comfortable.             yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030631 2019-05-06 02:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030631 kasey_mitchell Grow: I love your voice and tone which make me feel comfortable. And you have clear thesis statement about your topic. You share a lot of information I even know before. Its very interesting for me. Also tell the audiences how technology change our life. Thank you for sharing.                                                          Grow: Maybe you can try on put the bullet on your slides will be better, there are have a lot of text on your slides, which make audiences confused.         yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030694 2019-05-06 02:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030694 Anabela Casimiro Glow: Your voice and tone are make me feel comfortable and its very clear for me to understand. You got a lot of information for topic. It’s great. well done! Grow: Maybe you can try voice slowly next time and just put important bullet on your slides. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030738

]]> 2019-05-06 02:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030738 Jenna Bellucci Glow: Your presentation very good. I really love your presentation formatted. Your sharing a lot of information i even know before. You also have very good organization. well done ! Grow: I thought it was a great presentation. I don't have any critiques! Just focus on your slides You can only put the bullet on there. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030803 2019-05-06 02:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030803 Shiman Wang Glow: I enjoy your presentation because you provide a lot of information that i even know before and have great organization and pictures. well done! Grow: I think is a great presentation, maybe just try to fluctuate your voice and your tone when speaking. Its will be better. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030862 2019-05-06 02:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357030862 Edina Raisin Glow: Your pronunciation is clear for me and make me feel comfortable. And also you have a great organized and ideas. I think you did a lot of survey of your presentation. It's a good job! Grow: Maybe next time you can give us more detailed example on your presentation why you don't take risk, which will be better. yinggao1224 https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357031030 2019-05-06 02:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yinggao1224/jeexewvdeb67/wish/357031030