https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq Please provide some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 14:36:59 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191716935 - I think you should face the audience when you are speaking and speak a bit louder
-I think you should also provide a bit of additional information from what's just on your slides.
-I do like that you organized your slides by posing a question and then answering it with that you discovered from reases]]> 2017-09-27 15:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191716935 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191716989 HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
- Speak louder
-I like that there are different examples
- Use bullet points
- You have a lot of information on your slides
-Bringing up mental illness shows that there is internal conflict when denied the prison wanted]]> 2017-09-27 15:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191716989 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717002 I like how you were well prepared to present right away. I like the formatting of your presentation, it is very neat and organized.  Your voice is very loud and can be heard though the room! ]]> 2017-09-27 15:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717002 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717031 2017-09-27 15:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717031 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717038 • I really like how clear your voice is when your talking.
• I like how you picked this topic.
• Very detailed information
• The layout of your PowerPoint is really good.]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717038 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717124 -You shouldn't read your slide word-for-word and moreso just summarize your ideas
-Look more at us and less at your iPad
-Pronounced "sis-gendered"
-Youn had a lot of important, good information on your slide to back up your position
-Don't speak so monotonely]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717124 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717224 Face us. 
Speak slower. 
I like your pp layout. 
Look up from your notes more. 
Don't read just from the slides. Put it in your own words.
Well prepared. 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 🎉]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717224 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717261 -Try not to look at your notes as much, and speak louder.
-You added a lot of laws, which was good.]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717261 perezale008 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717268 -Have more confidence when presenting
-you were looking at your iPad a lot, make sure to regularly address your audience 
-I like the layout of the pp and how much research you did shows you were invested in the project.

]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717268 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717279 Very good presentation style and astetically pleasing to see. Try not to have your back to the audience because it blocks your words, also try to have a louder volume when speaking. Try to not read directly from the screen. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717279 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717284 Talk a little louder and a little slower

Look and Talk towards the audience a little more.]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717284 leepeang000 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717340 You need to summarize all the information on your slides when you're speaking and talk slower so the audience can take in all the information and understand it. Your presentation was very informative ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717340 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717366 I love how you feel very strongly about this topic. I think you need to talk a little bit louder and raise your head so your voice can Project.  Very good job on your research. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717366 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717403 The information was well written.  Try summarizing slides instead of reading all of it. Overall you did a Good job! ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717403 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717409 Very good information, but you should try not reading off the slide and input your own opinion into your slide ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717409 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717505 2017-09-27 15:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717505 morenosc000 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717510 1) great presentation but try not to read directly from the slide. Look at the crowd more 
2) try speaking a bit louder and more confident 
3)add some pictures ]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717510 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717513 Sierra~ Try to speak up more when presenting and portray your facts and beliefs about your topic. Try to not read directly off of the power point and make certain parts of interest to focus on.]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717513 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717516 You shouldn't be looking at the PowerPoint the entire time and you shouldn't just read the slides, give more information than that on the slides. Other than that, though, you had a lot of information, which was good.]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717516 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717594 You have a lot of good information and examples on your presentation. Your slides and facts are very well organized .]]> 2017-09-27 15:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717594 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717710 Don't speak directly to your iPad ! Just sum up the slides and look up to the beautiful audience. It would help to speak a bit slower. Learned more about transgender prisoners and don't be nervous !:)]]> 2017-09-27 15:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717710 jacobjam000 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717740 I like how you presented your statics and research.]]> 2017-09-27 15:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717740 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717798 Don’t read straight form the slide just try to sum up the most important parts on the slide. 
Also look up at the audience so we can see your confident in your information. Great information though and very well organized.

]]> 2017-09-27 15:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717798 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717915 You should look up and face the class. You shouldn't read it word for word try to summarize the big points and say additional information that you know about, but didn't put on a slide.]]> 2017-09-27 15:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191717915 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718255 The project is good but the presentation would be better if you spoke to us and not your iPad and summarized what was on the PowerPoint not just reading it directly off the slides.]]> 2017-09-27 15:20:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718255 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718350 I would ]]> 2017-09-27 15:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718350 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718359 You read very loudly and enthusiastically but next time try not to read straight off of the power point🖤💙]]> 2017-09-27 15:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718359 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718426 Very nice presentation but would recommend not just reading off your project and interact with the audience ]]> 2017-09-27 15:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191718426 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191720125 You]]> 2017-09-27 15:22:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191720125 https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191720141 You should try to find key points and not read straight off power point ]]> 2017-09-27 15:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jdsxk0lqrtyq/wish/191720141