Primary 6 Urban Renewal Task by Amy Evetts

Primary 6 Urban Renewal Task by Amy Evetts https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym Write a formal letter to the Japanese Council with suggestions to improve Dreamland Park. en-us 2017-02-03 03:53:43 UTC 2017-02-04 03:45:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Xmastree.png Let's post our letters to the Council Forum. avevetts https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151345437 In the 'Title' please write 'Our Letter'
Only the teacher will know who is writing what.
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Dear Sir and Madam,

We are Hans and Swann, we are wirting a letter to present our ideas for rebulid Dream land park.

We think the council should develop park for people to enjoy, so that we can have fun there! It shouldn't cost a lot of money to rebulid the park.

This is our ideas.

1. Clear and change the water park, when is summer, a lot of visitors will come
2. Make the big, tall man who fall down stand again, so it will be the tallest thing in the park, people can see it far away.
3. Clear the castle and change it to a butiful castle hotail so people can stay longer in the park.
4. Replant the grass at the entrances so people can see nice things.
5. Clear and change the bumper car so people can play them again, because it will be fun.

That is how we think the park to be rebuild.

HANS SWANN

]]> 2017-02-04 02:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151585890 Our letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151585969 Dear Sir or Madam 21'January,2017
We are 🇭🇰 and 🇯🇵. We are writing to present our ideas about the Dreamland.
We think theCoucil should develop Dreamland because we think the Dreamland is dirty so we give some suggestions to you.
These are our suggestions.
1)Invite Peale to clean up the dirty water sit hat the park can be clean.
2)Replace the dirty water so Peale will come here to play.
3)Take away the big person and put Pikaciu statue on it so that the people will come here to play .
4)Cut the long grass so that it will not be overground .
5)Put away the roller car and replay it in new one.
We look forward to hearing from you
Your faithfully,
🇭🇰and 🇯🇵

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Dear sir and madam,

We are bad man and TMD.we are writing to present our ideas and enter the 'Dreamland'.

We think the Council should develop the park for future generations,so we can all enjoy it. It shouldn't cost a lot of money, and perhaps primary school students can help.

These are our suggestions.we have included some drawings to help explain our ideas.
1.I think you should rebuild building because the building are dangerous and old
2.There are a lot of plants on the path so we should weeds all of them.
3. Build a hotel so that people can stay for a long time.
4. Build some new rides because many rides in the park are old and can't walking.
5.There are mad on the path so clean all of it and rebuild the paths.

We look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Bad Man and TMD]]> 2017-02-04 02:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151585986 Our Letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151585987 4th Feb

Dear sir or madam

We are Thomas ng and Andy cai . We are writing to present our ideas to rebuild the dream land .

We want to rebuild the dreamland because people can have fun there and it will not cost a lot of money .

These are our suggestions
1.build a hotel , because people can stay there one night .

2.rebuild the roller coaster , because people can play on them .

3.clean the park , because the park is too dirty .

4.build some shops , so that people can by soverniers .

5.Build a Ferris wheel , so that people can see the Fuji mountain and take some photos .

We look forward to hearing from your .

Thomas Andy]]> 2017-02-04 02:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151585987 Our letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586014 21st January,2017

Dear Sir and Madam

We are Batman and Spider-Man. Dreamland is an abandoned park. We are writting to present our ideas which will improve DLP and make it fun again.

Dreamland is an abandoned park in Japan so no people go there now. We want to make it in a new park so that people can go there to play.

These are our suggestions. We have some ideas to tell you.
1. Rebuild the path and Dreamland so that people can play in it.
2. Build a 7*hotel in Dreamland so that people can stay in it.
3. Build an exciting rollar coster and haunted house so the people can come here to play.
4. Clean the dirty water and rubbish so the park will be cleaner.
5. Grow more plants so that the air will be fresh.
6. Build a souvenir shop so people can buy gift after playing in Dreamland.

We hope you can rebuild Dreamland and make it better and better.

Batman$$$ Spider-Man&&

]]> 2017-02-04 02:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586014 https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586120 Dear sir or ma]]> 2017-02-04 02:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586120 Our Letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586136 21st January,2017
Dear sir or madam
I am Cherry. I am writing to present our ideas and enter the "Dreamland " design competition.

I think the Dreamland should change because it is abandoned. So we want to change it better.

These are my ideas. l have included some drawing to help explain my ideas.
1. Build a cafe so people can eat something when they are hungry.
2. Build a cartoon statue so people can take some photos.
3. Build a Zoo so the children can see and learn more about the animals.
4. Clean the water because it is dirty.
5. Build Ferris wheel so people can have fun on it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

~ 🍒Cherry 🍒~

]]> 2017-02-04 02:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586136 Our letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586155 21st January,2017

Dear sir or madam,

We are banana and apple. We are writing to present our idea and enter the"Dreamland"design competition.

We think the Dreamland should change more better.
These are our the"Dreamland"should change because it is abandoned. So we want to change more better.

These are our ideas. We have included some drawings to help explain our ideas.
1.Build a cafe so people can eat something when they are hungry.
2.Build a cartoon statue so people can take photos with it.
3.Build a zoo so the children can see and learn more about a lot of different animals.
4.Clean the water because it is dirty.
5.Build a Ferris wheel so people can have fun on it.

We look forward to hearing from you.

BANANA🍌 😋 APPLE🍎

]]> 2017-02-04 02:39:00 UTC https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586155 Our Letter https://padlet.com/avevetts/jdrru3e3y7ym/wish/151586389 4th February 2017

Dear sir or madam ,

We are some people in the class. we are writing to present our ideas and enter the "dreamland park"design competition.

We think the council should develop the park because now people donot go there to play.

These are our suggest. We have included some drawings to help explain our ideas.

1.put morewood

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