https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:53:08 UTC 2025-12-07 12:43:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f643.png 26pmora https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/420814354 Your story is fantastic! Great job explaining the detail of the Exo-Earth-planet. I like how you explained the story. I like how you described that Jake doesn’t like his job that much. One of my favorite moments in the story is when Jake discovers an Earth-like-planet. In addition, I like how you tell the reader that Fred, Jack, and Bob more. However, for improvement, explain more about how the magazine made more confidence, and why he got on the newspaper.   

]]> 2019-12-06 15:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/420814354 https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/422258502 I like how in the beggining you explain that Jake really hates the job. My favourite part in the story was when Jake got famous on the newspaper. I also like when they all met up in the labaratory, that was well written. For some improvement I think that you should slow the story down a bit. You should explain more about him becoming famous and getting on the newspaper.   
☻]]> 2019-12-10 16:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/422258502 26bdoyle https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/422368534 I like How in the beginning you describe the hot barren waist land where his job is
I also like how you described jake at his his job a being bored 
Though I think it could be longer ]]> 2019-12-10 19:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/26rzuckman/jdgtzavh37ov/wish/422368534