https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc By Finn en-us 2018-06-11 23:59:57 UTC 2025-10-30 13:35:26 UTC hello@padlet.com fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266711506 I think this story is going to be about a fairy who has an encounter with a girl who saves a small child. I think we can call it a fairy story if it has a fairy.]]> 2018-06-12 00:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266711506 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266711938 I can tell because there is a floating fairy in the first picture.]]> 2018-06-12 00:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266711938 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712046 The writer tells us when time stops because Moana cannot move and neither is the things around her.]]> 2018-06-12 00:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712046 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712085 In batman there is a flashback to when Bruce Wayne's parents die to the robber. The choose your own adventure story ask you a question and depending on your answer sends you to a different page.]]> 2018-06-12 00:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712085 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712343 We can tell what actually happened because the fairy repeats what happened and shows how the child and Moana ran up the drive way and onto the garage roof. I think Moana is being brave by saving the child because she might have been hit herself.]]> 2018-06-12 00:08:32 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712343 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712640 The writer has included illustrations of the fairy to match the description.]]> 2018-06-12 00:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712640 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712820 I picture the word as someone hovering bobbing up and down slightly. I think hovering suggests slight movement in the air.]]> 2018-06-12 00:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266712820 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713006 Incensed in that sentence mean she was angry at the fairy because she made all of Moanas favourite super hero's.]]> 2018-06-12 00:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713006 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713198 The information makes it clearer so we know what the writer was describing. I think it does strengthen the image. No in this sentence I think riot means many.]]> 2018-06-12 00:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713198 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713495 The writer has chosen three words that best describe what Moana was doing. The impact is that the writer has more words to accommodate with so its more descriptive. I think we do because It has more words to tell us what she is doing.]]> 2018-06-12 00:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713495 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713664 The effect is the fact that came charging for the ball because he wanted it, Like instead of the boy flailed towards the ball. No I don't think it would be as descriptive because running isn't a very descriptive word.]]> 2018-06-12 00:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266713664 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266714062 Gone in a blink is used to show how quickly Moana grabbed the child.

The pattern of light started to look like a mosaic instead of the patterns of light grouped closer.]]> 2018-06-12 00:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266714062 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266714369 I think it is clear because the fairy has showed her multiple times of her grabbing the small child. I think this story is a happy ending if Moana decided to sprint for the baby. I think this ending is unsatisfying because we don't know what she will do.]]> 2018-06-12 00:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266714369 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266912463 Goldilocks is hungry and she sees the 3 bears house. She walks inside to find some porridge. She tried the first ball "Ouch" it was to hot. Next she tried the other bowl, "Gross" It was too cold. Then she tried the last bowl "perfect". Then she found 3 chairs. The first was too hard, Then next to soft, The last one "Perfect" but then the chair broke under her weight. Then she found 3 beds, The first was too hard, Then to soft then just right!. The bears came home. Some ones eaten my porridge said baby bear, (Flash back shows Goldilocks eating porridge.) And someones broken my chair! ( Flashback to the chair breaking)
And someones sleeping in my bed! Goldilocks woke up from the bears voice. She saw them and in fright jumped out the window never to be seen again.]]> 2018-06-12 23:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/266912463 fpickworth https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/267284934 2018-06-14 23:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/fpickworth/jdbmc1td4xhc/wish/267284934