Gun Contoll by https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl en-us 2018-11-30 16:41:25 UTC 2018-11-30 21:10:19 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Optimplaces.png Gun Control erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309861486 2018-11-30 16:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309861486 Research Topic Question erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865491 Why should there be more gun control laws?]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:37 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865491 My Current Opinion erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865516 In my opinion gun control should remain the way that it is now, we as citizens of the United States have a right to carry a gun. We have a right to protect our loved ones and our self from others that are there to harm others. the government should not take our guns away from us because others have dedicated to do the wrong chose and kill innocent people, if we do what is necessary as taking classes and couple of courses we should have the right to be able to carry a gun.]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865516 Primary Source: erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865553 Aisch, Gregor, and Josh Keller. “How Gun Traffickers Get Around State Gun Laws.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 13 Nov. 2015, www.nytimes.com/interactive/2015/11/12/us/gun-traffickers-smuggling-state-gun-laws.html.

Longley, Robert. "See a Timeline of Gun Control in the United States." ThoughtCo, Aug. 4, 2018, thoughtco.com/us-gun-control-timeline-3963620.

            ProCon.org. "Gun Control ProCon.org." ProCon.org. 29 Aug. 2018, gun-control.procon.org/

]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865553 II. Subtopic #1 erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865600 a. Transitional Topic Sentence:
Guns have been a part of the United States Of America for century's. The first gun was mad in 1364. Since them they have transition to bigger and more powerful. 
b. Claim:
Guns are being stolen everyday, and purchased to be used to harm others. Many Americans that purchases their guns legally use them for self defense. 
c. Evidence (Quote):There has been thousands of guns that have and are being transported in and out of the country;these guns can be transferred very cheap all over the world.
d. Explanation:
Every year they have found approximately 50,000 guns that are likely to cross the states being undetected. Many of these guns have be legally purchased from a retail store but many have been stolen from family members or in robberies.]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865600 I. Introduction erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865674 a. Some believe that there should be more control over guns owned in this country and others fell there should be less.
b. General statement 
I personally do not believe in the governmental control over the right to own a gun.
c. Transition Statement 
However the citizens of the united states have a right to bear arms, as stated in the second Amendment which was adopted into the Constitution of America on December 15,1791.
d. Thesis Statement
This right

]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865674 Essay Outline erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865704 2018-11-30 16:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865704 III. Subtopic #2 erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865745 a. Transitional Topic Sentence:
Making more gun control is not going to improve the problem that this country is having to encounter with guns. Most crimes are being committed by using a firearm that are not registered in the system
b. Claim: People claim that guns are there to kill any moving object, if guns are purchase the correct way and used for protection, games, and hunting we would not have an issue.
c. Evidence (Quote):Gun owners have to keep documentation of guns they have purchased as long as they are alive.
d. Explanation: Most of the time the guns are purchased the correct way but they get in the hand of bad people that are harm others ]]> 2018-11-30 16:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865745 V. Conclusion erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865774 a. Give your proposed solution:
They should scan more background information before they approve the gun to the customer.
b. Restate Thesis:]]> 2018-11-30 16:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865774 IV. Subtopic #3 erika19hernandez https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865812 a. Transitional Topic Sentence:
 Massive shooting have Contributed to the 464,033 deaths between 1999 and 2013 that involved guns. On March 10,2016 there was about 200 Americans that would walk into the emergency room with gunshot wounds.
b. Claim:
Between 1998 to 2014 there was approximately 1.2 million customers that were denied for many different reasons for example illegal alien, domestic violence, and illegal drug users but the one that got the most denies was for criminal conviction.
c. Evidence (Quote):According ti the "National Rifle Association guns have been used for self defense more than 2.5 million times( 1Longley)."
d. Explanation:
Protecting yourself from others is not a crime it's called self defense.   ]]> 2018-11-30 16:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/erika19hernandez/jcmdkmux27rl/wish/309865812