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      <pubDate>2025-07-10 23:26:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Tell: </strong>Jane was angry at her younger brother.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Show: </strong>With a flash of anger in her bulging eyes, Jane stomped her foot and slammed the door behind her. Her brother was left alone and confused in the living room.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Tell: </strong>I watched the ocean waves.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Show: </strong>I stood mesmerized as the white caps of the ocean waves dug into the sand as if grasping one more breath of life.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Tell:</strong> He started crying.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Show: </strong>His vision was blurred by the tears that had welled up in his eyes.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Safaa’s group </p><p>We went to a local restaurant. We could hear the birds chirping outside while we ate our delicious hamburgers. The cheese fries arrived with sauce oozing out, and the aroma filled our noses. The scrumptious meat was so good, it felt like we were eating something from heaven.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>One delightful day, when I stepped out of the roasting hot lift, I encountered my elderly neighbour, Tom, who was waving happily at me. The air was fragrant with roses from the garden nearby. My butterscotch ice cream was dripping down the cone in the heat. It was like a billion wonderful sensations dancing on my tongue. I heard songbirds chirping their melodies and bees buzzing as they moved between the roses, sunflowers, poppies, daisies and many other flowers.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dia's group</p><p><br/></p><p>We were both beaming with delight when we heard our father walking towards us, presenting us with ice cream from the ice cream parlour. The rich flavours of strawberry and Belgian chocolate ice cream hit our tongues as they melted in our mouths. We finished them as fast as a bullet.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Hayley's group</p><p><br/></p><p>As I was holding the bags, they felt like a million sacks of rice. I could taste the imagined flavour of thousands of fries in my mouth as I was hungry. I could hear my heart thumping from my chest to my stomach. The scrumptious smell of fries lingered in my mind.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-11 01:26:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>When Tom saw me, I smelt the fresh air and tasted the nice smell of flowers. I could also hear people running at the park. Then Tom happily waved both of his arms at me. </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Safirah’s group </p><p>The bags were as heavy as dumbbells. My legs and elbows were skinny like skeletons and I struggled to lift them. My face was as red as a tomato. </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Group 1 Rory,Riaan,Arya,Tara                                   </p><p>Tom enthusiastically raised his hands high in the air and waved them so fast that all I could see was a blurred vision of his hands. I took a deep breath and could smell his stinking aroma of cologne. It was as though I could taste blue cheese. I felt the chilly wind whipping on my face. I heard Tom shout my name in slow motion and run towards me, giving me a big hug.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Mr Henry was working in a factory, his heavy bags leaving deep red marks on his arms. When he got out of the factory, Mr Henry smelled the wonderful aroma of coffee, which made him drool.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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