Leonardo by Elise Song https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz Leave some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 12:53:24 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:49 UTC hello@padlet.com Nathan Nguyen https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650971 Leo has a strong voice and makes it easy for us to listen to. Funny presentation and also pretty interesting to see. However, he should make more eye contact, read less from his slides, and provide more enthusiasm in his presentation. But, his project was done well and overall pretty decent, well done.]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650971 Nicholas Porter https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650987 Nice use of your IPad in the presentation.
Nice color scheme on your PowerPoint as well! 
Nice explanation of the symbolization of your fashion choices.
Try not reading so directly from the PowerPoint. Also attempt to make more eye contact with the class rather than with Ms. Song.]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650987 Caroline Cortimilia https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650995 He was loud and spoke confidently. I liked how he used orange as his theme!! He needs to interact with the audience more. He thought really well about all the different outfits!! He was creative. He overall did a really good job. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191650995 Tyler https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651001
Use professional words, you don't have to be smart, just sound smart

Look at your audience, not the wall

Stop reading from the slides, give us a presentation, not a lecture 

Be more concise with your words

Give us some passion to work]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651001 Henry Pham https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651008 Not much eye contact, just reading from the PowerPoint.

Loud, confident voice.

Nice drawings


]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651008 Ayiana Hernandez https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651051 - Good speaking voice
- It was good that your project was different than the transgender one
- Try to look less at the teacher and more at the audience
- Try not to read directly off the slide
- Try to sound more professional 
- The outfits were very creative and interesting]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651051 Kameron James https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651054 - good voice projection
- very creative project ]]> 2017-09-27 13:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651054 Hilary Moore https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651071 - tall to the audience more
- explain more on why you think prisoners should wear clothes to match their fealings

]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651071 Ronshay https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651072 Good drawing attempts 
Liked the presentation and title]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651072 Zoë P. 😊 https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651115 - I love your outfits!
- Nice looking at the audience]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651115 Elsy Guzman https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651134 - love your project choice you spoke confidently and loud
-interesting outfits with unique names 
-like that you smiled and laughed you weren’t all serious
- make more eye contact but great job ]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651134 Francely Virrueta https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651154 - more eye contact with the class
- I like the outfits descriptions 

]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651154 Sylvia Percy https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651165 - More eye contact 
- Nice voice 
- I love the drawings 
- Next time you should not read exactly what's on the screen


]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651165 John B bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651173 I like your clothes drawings
Needs a bit more eye contact.]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651173 Nohemi https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651272 Don’t just read straight off the PowerPoint but good job loud and clear ]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651272 Tarek Shraim shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651322 - Confident speaking
- Very creative clothes
- Great presentation.]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651322 Adrienne S https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651357 Nice drawings
Creative]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651357 Chloe Moeck https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651408 You described each outfit very well. You spoke well but you could have made more eye contact. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651408 Natalie Taylor https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651463 -Perhaps look at the audience more and be a little bit more confident in your speaking.]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651463 Mariana https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651869 -Good speaking.
-creative designs


]]> 2017-09-27 13:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191651869 Hannah https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191652992 -try not to read off of the slides so much
-make more eye contact 
-I liked your designs
]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191652992 Alexis F https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191653182 Good PowerPoint and I like the idea of the outfits
Make more eye contact but you were confi]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191653182 Dominique https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191654007 Good designs

Don't read off of slides

Was very clear]]> 2017-09-27 13:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/jbnnds4d6dvz/wish/191654007