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      <title>Beta Wed lesson 17  by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:08:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhen Hong corrected</title>
         <author>nickylim22</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess. Jane runs as fast as her legs could carry her to canteen. She walked past toilet. She noticed her classmate, Esther crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Jane walked towards to Esther and asked what happened. Being curious, Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around school compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side; they finally found the purse in the garden. Esther from her bottom of her heart to Jane. From then on, they are bosom friend now.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Jane <strong>ran</strong> as fast as her legs could carry her to <strong>the</strong> canteen. She walked past <strong>the</strong> toilet and noticed her classmate, Esther, crying bitterly.</p><p>      Jane walked <strong>towards Esther</strong> and asked what happened. Being curious, Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand.          They walked around <strong>the</strong> school compound to search for Esther's purse.Lady Luck was on their side that they finally found the purse in the garden. Esther <strong>thanked Jane from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they <strong>have been bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:28:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lam Hoi Ling corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her. When she walked past the washroom, she saw her classmate, Esther is crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>         Being curious, Jane walked towards to Esther and asked her what's happening. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend a helping hand . They walked around school compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>           Lady luck was on her side, they found the purse in the garden. Esther thanked Jane from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her. When she walked past the washroom, she <strong>saw her classmate, Esther, crying bitterly.</strong></p><p>     Being curious, Jane walked towards Esther and <strong>asked her what had happened</strong>. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p>        Lady Luck was on their side; they found the purse in the garden. Esther thanked Jane from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they<strong> have become</strong> bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:29:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>tang pei ern corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        One day, the school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her leg could carry her to go to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger.When she wallked past the toilet, she noticed her classmates, Esther was crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>        Out of curiosity, she walked towards the toilet and asked what happened to Esther. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>        Lady Luck was on her side, they searched high and low. Finally, they found the purse. Esther thanks Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        One day, the school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her <strong>legs</strong>  could carry her to <strong>the</strong> canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. When she <strong>walked</strong> past the toilet, she noticed her classmate Esther, <strong>crying bitterly</strong> .</p><p>       Out of curiosity, she walked towards the toilet and asked what had happened to Esther. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the <strong>school</strong> compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p>        Lady Luck was on <strong>their</strong> side. They searched high and low. Finally, they found the purse. Esther <strong>thanked</strong> Lisa <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:30:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh kah Him corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The school bell rang, Lisa ran as fast as her leg could carry her to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she spotted her classmate, Jane is crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Out of curiosity, she walked towards, ask her what happen. Jane told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, to search for her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Lady luck was on their side, they finally found the purse. Jane thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friend. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>   The school bell rang, and Lisa ran as fast as her <strong>legs</strong>  could carry her to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she spotted her classmate, Jane, <strong>crying bitterly</strong> </p><p>      Out of curiosity, she walked towards <strong>her and asked</strong>  what <strong>had happened</strong> .Jane told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound <strong>to search</strong> for her purse.</p><p><strong>       Lady Luck</strong> was on their side; they finally found the purse. Jane thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:31:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>yihan corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>         School bell rang for recess, Lisa ran as fast her legs could carry her to the canteen, as her stomach growled with hunger, so she quickly buy some food and eat. Then she waked past  she noticed her classmate, Ester crying bitterly.</p><p>           Out of curiousity, she walked torwards and asked her what had happend. Esther told her she had lost her purse, Being a good samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search for her purse.</p><p>           Lady luck was on theiir side, they finally found her purse in the garden. Esther from her bottom of her heart to Lisa, from then on they are now bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The <strong>school bell rang</strong> for recess. Lisa ran as fast <strong>as</strong> her legs could carry her to the canteen, as her stomach growled with hunger. She quickly <strong>bought</strong> some food and <strong>ate</strong>  it. Then she <strong>walked</strong>  past and noticed her classmate, Esther, <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>         Out of <strong>curiosity</strong> ,she walked <strong>towards her</strong> and asked what had <strong>happened</strong> .Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good <strong>Samaritan</strong> , Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search for her purse.</p><p><strong>       Lady Luck</strong> was on <strong>their</strong> side; they finally found her purse in the garden. Esther <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they are now <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:31:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Law Qin Er corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The school bell rang for recess, Sally ran as fast as her legs  could carry her to her stomach. She notice her classmate, Ella crying. </p><p>       Out of curiosity, Sally walked toward Ella and asked. Ella told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Sally decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school  compound to search for Ella purse. </p><p>         Lady luck was on their side as they finally found Ella purse in the garden. Ella thank Sally from her bottom heart. From then on they have became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The school bell rang for recess. Sally ran as fast as her legs could carry her <strong>to the canteen</strong> .She <strong>noticed</strong> her classmate, Ella, <strong>crying bitterly at a corner. </strong></p><p>         Out of curiosity, Sally walked toward Ella and <strong>asked what had happened</strong> .Ella told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Sally decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search for <strong>Ella's</strong> purse.</p><p><strong>       Lady Luck</strong> was on their side as they finally found <strong>Ella's</strong>  purse in the garden. Ella <strong>thanked</strong> Sally from <strong>the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they <strong>have become</strong> bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:33:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Esther Kong corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The school bell rang for recess, Jane ran as fast as legs could carry her to going to canteen. She walked past, because she was hungry. She noticed her classmate , Esther crying bitterly.</p><p>      Out of curiosity, Jane walked towards and asked she. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around school compound to search for Esther purse.</p><p>        Lady Lucky was on their side. Esther from her bottom of her heart. From then on, Esther and Jane become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as <strong>legs</strong> could carry her <em>to the canteen</em>.<strong> <em>She hurried to the canteen  she was hungry.</em></strong> She noticed her classmate, Esther, <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>     Out of curiosity, Jane walked towards Esther <strong>and asked her what had happened. </strong>. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around<strong> the school compound</strong> to search for <strong>Esther's purse</strong> .</p><p><strong>          Lady Lucky</strong> was on their side. Esther thanked Jane <strong>from her bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, Esther and Jane <strong>have become  bosom friends</strong>.</p><p>      </p><p>      </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:33:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rou Xuan  Writing Star</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her classmate, Noell crying bitterly.</p><p><br></p><p>   Out of curiosity, she walked towards ask her what had happened. She lost her purse. Being a good-Samaritan,Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound and searched for the purse.</p><p><br></p><p>  Lady Luck was on thier side; they finally found the purse in the garden. Noell thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they became bosom freinds.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her classmate, Noell, crying bitterly.</p><p>     Out of curiosity, she walked towards<strong> Noell and asked her </strong>what had happened. Noell told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound and searched<strong> for</strong> the purse.</p><p>      Lady Luck was on their side; they finally found the purse in the garden. Noell thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they became bosom friends.</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:35:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tze Xuan  corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The school bell rang for recess,Lisa as fast as her legs could carry her.when Lisa walked past the toilet,she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>Out of curiosity,she ask Jenny  what happened,she had lose her purse,Being a good Samaritan.Lisa lend her a helping hand,</p><p>They walked around school compound, search her purse.</p><p>Lady luck was on their side,they found purse in the garden,Jenny thank Lisa from her bottom of her heart,from  then on,they be a bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her <strong>to the school canteen. </strong> When Lisa walked past the toilet, she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>    Out of curiosity, she asked Jenny <strong>what had happened.</strong> <strong>Jenny told her that she had lost her purse.</strong> Being a good Samaritan, Lisa<strong> lent </strong>her a helping hand.They walked around the school compound <strong>to search</strong> for her purse.</p><p>Lady Luck was on their side; they found the purse in the garden. Jenny <strong>thanked </strong>Lisa from the bottom of her heart. <strong>From then on, </strong>they <strong>have been</strong> bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:35:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessmin corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/jbigkbh8qaf1m35s/wish/3461333603</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>     School bell rang for recess, Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her because she was very hungry. She noticed her classmate, Lisa crying bitterly.</p><p>      Lisa told her she had lose her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane lend her a helping hand. They walk around the school compound to search the purse.</p><p>      Lady luck was on their side, they find the purse in the garden. From then on, they are bosom friend.</p><p>Corrected</p><p>The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her because she was very hungry.<strong>When she walked past the field, </strong>she noticed her classmate, Lisa, crying bitterly.</p><p>         Lisa told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane <strong>lent</strong> her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search<strong> for the purse.</strong></p><p>     Lady Luck was on their side; they <strong>found </strong>the purse in the garden. From then on, they have been bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:36:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khor Jia Xian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The school bell rang for recess.Jane ran as fast as lightning because her stomach was growled with hunger.While she walked past the toilet,she noticed her classmate,Esther crying bitterly.                             Out of curiosity,Jane ask why Esther crying. It turn out Esther had lost her purse.Being a Samaritan,Jane decided to lend her a helping hand.They walked around to search Esther purse but they didn't found the purse.                                                                  The Lady Luck was on their side,they finally found the purse in the garden.Esther thank Jane from her bottom of her heart.From then on, they become a bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as lightning because her stomach <strong>was growling</strong> with hunger. While she walked past the toilet, she noticed her classmate, Esther, crying bitterly.</p><p>          Out of curiosity, Jane <strong>asked</strong> why Esther <strong>was crying</strong>. It <strong>turned out</strong> that Esther had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around to search <strong>for Esther's</strong> purse, but they didn't <strong>find</strong> it.</p><p>        Lady Luck was on their side; they finally found the purse in the garden. Esther <strong>thanked</strong> Jane from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they <strong>became bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:39:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Powell corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess.  As her stomach growled with hunger, Amelia ran as fast as she can. When she walked past the toilet, she noticed her classmate, Olivia was crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Out of curiosity, she walked towards Olivia and asked what had happen. Olivia told her she had lost her lovely purse. Being a good Samaritan, Amelia decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around school compound to search for her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side, they finally found the purse in the garden. Olivia from her bottom of heart to Amelia. From then on, they became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          The school bell rang for recess. As her stomach growled with hunger, Amelia ran as fast as she <strong>could</strong>. When she walked past the toilet, she noticed her classmate, Olivia, <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>         Out of curiosity, she walked towards Olivia and asked what had <strong>happened</strong>. Olivia told her she had lost her lovely purse. Being a good Samaritan, Amelia decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around <strong>the</strong> school compound to search for her purse.</p><p>        Lady Luck was on their side; they finally found the purse in the garden. Olivia <strong>thanked Amelia from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they became <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:39:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>chin hong ze Writing Star</title>
         <author>m14339563</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The school bell rang for recess, and Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. As she walked past the restroom, she noticed her classmate, Esther, crying bitterly.</p><p>       <strong>Feeling</strong> concerned, Jane approached Esther and asked what had happened. Esther explained that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. Together, they walked around the school compound to search for Esther's purse.</p><p>      Lady Luck was on their side, and they finally found the purse in the garden. Grateful from the bottom of her heart, Esther thanked Jane. From that day on, they became bosom friends. </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:39:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Liew Jia Yu corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her to cateen. She walk past the toilet. She noticed her classmate, Esther crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>   Out of curiousity, she walked towards asked her what happened. Esther told her she had lost her purse, Being a good samaritan, Lisa decided to send her to a helping hand. They walk around the school compound to search for her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>   Lady luck was on their side, they finally found her purse in the garden. Esther from her bottom to her heart from Lisa, from then on they are now bossom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the<strong> canteen. </strong>She walked past the toilet. She noticed her classmate, Esther, crying bitterly.</p><p>      Out of curiosity, she walked towards <strong>Esther</strong> and asked her what happened. Esther told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound <strong>to search </strong>for her purse.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side; they finally found her purse in the garden. Esther thanked Jane from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they<strong> have become bosom friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:41:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lucious Ong corrected</title>
         <author>onglucious</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  When the school bell rang for recess, Misha ran as fast as her legs could carry the to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw a girl named Jennie was crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Being curious, she walks close to her and ask her what happen. She told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Misha lends her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, and find her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>  The Lady Luck was on their side; they found the purse at the garden at the garden. Jennie thanks her from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       When the school bell rang for recess, Misha ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw a girl named Jennie<strong> crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>    Being curious, she <strong>walked closer to her and asked what had happened</strong>. Jennie told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Misha lent her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound and <strong>found</strong> her purse.</p><p>         <strong>Lady Luck </strong>was on their side; they found the purse in the garden. Jennie thanked her from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they have have <strong>become bosom </strong>friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 13:42:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kayson Lau Rui Xuan  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    School bell rang for recess, Lily ran as fast as her leg could carry her to the canteen. As her stomach growled with hunger, so she quickly buy some food to eat. Then she walked past noticed her classmate, Jane crying bitterly .</p><p>     Out of curiosity, she walked towards Jane and asked her what's happening. Jane told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lily decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around  school compound to search for Jane's purse.</p><p>     Lady Luck was on their side, they found Jane's purse under the tree. Jane thanked Lily from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Lily ran as fast as her <strong>legs</strong> could carry her to the canteen. Her stomach growled with hunger, so she quickly <strong>bought</strong> some food to eat. Then she walked past and noticed her classmate, Jane, crying bitterly.</p><p>   Out of curiosity, she walked towards Jane and asked her what was happening. Jane told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lily decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search for Jane's purse.</p><p>      Lady Luck was on their side that they found Jane's purse under a tree. Jane thanked Lily from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they <strong>became bosom friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 07:59:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paris Koh Zi Sum corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The school bell rang for recess . Jane ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen . As she passed by the toilet , she saw her classmate Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>                Out of curiositysity , she approached and asked her what wasgoing on . Jenny had lost her purse . Being a good Samaritan , Jane lend her a helping hand . They walked around the school compound.</p><p>               Lady Luck was on their side , they found their purse in the garden . Jenny thanked Jane from the bottom of her heart . Since them they bosom friend . </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Esther ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger. As she walked past the bathroom, she noticed her classmate, <strong>Jane</strong>, crying.</p><p>         <strong>Out of curiosity,</strong> <strong>Esther asked her what was going on. </strong> Jane told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Esther decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound<strong> to search for the pu</strong>rse.</p><p>Lady Luck was on their side <strong>and they finally found </strong>the purse in the garden. Jane thanked Esther from the bottom of her heart. <strong>Since then, they have been bosom friends.</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:10:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joe mun corrected</title>
         <author>joemun2020</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/jbigkbh8qaf1m35s/wish/3465925178</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The school bell rang of recess. Esther  ran as fast as her legs could carry her to as stamach. Walked past bathroom, she noticed her classmate,Esther criying. </p><p>  Being curious,Esther told her.She  had lost her purse. Being a Good Samaritan,Jane decided to land her helping hand. They walk around school around school compound to search for her purse. </p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side, they found it purse in the garden. June from bottom of heart Esther. Since them bosom friend. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          The school bell rang for recess. Esther ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen as her stomach growled with hunger.<strong> As she walked past the bathroom</strong>, she noticed her classmate, <strong>Jane</strong>, crying.</p><p>Being curious, Esther <strong>asked her what had happened. </strong>Jane <strong>told her that she had lost her purse.</strong> Being a good Samaritan, Jane decided to<strong> lend</strong> her a helping hand. They <strong>walked </strong>around the school compound to search for the purse.</p><p>Lady Luck was on their side — they finally found the purse in the garden. <strong>Jane thanked Esther</strong> from the bottom of her heart. Since then,<strong> they have been bosom friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-25 04:37:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Yun Xuan</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/jbigkbh8qaf1m35s/wish/3467518952</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>                    The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ranas fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she passed by the toilet, she saw Jane as crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>                       Out of curiosity, Lisa asked Jane what was going on. Jane told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lend Jane a helping hand. She helped Jane to find her purse at the school compound.</p><p><br/></p><p>                        Lady Luck was on their side, they found Jane's purse in the garden. Jane thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they become bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-26 12:04:00 UTC</pubDate>
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