https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh Put all your feedback here en-us 2021-01-05 15:31:19 UTC 2021-06-21 13:58:45 UTC hello@padlet.com 27kpilley https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1067735157 It was cool how it was very suspensful then it was your cat. You did a really good job with building suspense. Maybe you could add a little more detail on how you felt.]]> 2021-01-08 16:38:22 UTC https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1067735157 27alandew https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1517749854 Hello Lucas. I really enjoyed reading your essay. I liked all of the names you added like Timmy and Tommy. I liked how you added how scientists study how video games help. I also liked how descriptive you were especially on your first warrant. One wish I have is that maybe you could add more thing to back up your claim. But besides that this essay is extremely good. 👍 ]]> 2021-05-12 14:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1517749854 27kpilley https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1612852800 I really liked how you had your log I liked how you kept mentioning things that were crazy like quadruple backflips.  Another thing I liked about this was the originality with the alien brainwashing all of the specific numbers of years and of course the star of the show the cat billy bob joe.  One thing that you could do better on was punctuation one time I read a sentence and it didn’t have a period or comma so it took me a few seconds to get what it meant but overall Amazing piece.]]> 2021-06-17 18:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/27lkoehler/jbg1jd4cy5dfzbyh/wish/1612852800