Travel Site Conventions (9E) by Mr. Cole

Travel Site Conventions (9E) by Mr. Cole https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq Each group will have two (2) articles to analyse. Instructions and an example have been provided (see COLUMNS ONE and TWO). Divide up the work to ensure you complete it within the time allowed. en-us 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC 2025-04-24 10:43:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://www.thetravelmagazine.net/exploring-nicaragua.html mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453596 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453596 https://www.authenticook.com/blog/the-un-restaurateurs-of-bengaluru/61/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453597 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453597 https://www.telegraph.co.uk/travel/destinations/central-america/nicaragua/articles/why-now-is-the-best-time-to-visit-nicaragua/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453598 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453598 https://www.nationalgeographic.com/magazine/2020/05/what-you-learn-when-you-follow-the-herd-in-italy-feature/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453599 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453599 https://www.nationalgeographic.com/travel/national-parks/everything-you-need-to-know-about-dry-tortugas-national-park/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453600 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453600 https://retiredandtravelling.com/amazing-buildings-and-architecture-of-prague/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453601 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453601 https://www.visitberlin.de/en/living-divided-city-west-berlin mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453604 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453604 http://en.travelepisodes.com/journey/bangladesh-sundarbans-tiger/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453605 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453605 https://maptia.com/jodymacdonald/stories/keepers-of-ganesh-the-vanishing-art-of-mahout mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453607 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453607 http://en.travelepisodes.com/journey/moab-utah-westworld/ mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453608 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453608 https://www.travelandleisure.com/hotels-resorts/majestic-hotel-barcelona-joan-miro mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453609 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453609 https://www.nytimes.com/2020/03/03/dining/le-crocodile-review-pete-wells.html mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453610 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453610 WEB ADDRESS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453613 The first post is purely to help you find the site easily. The rest of the posts divide up the analysis into manageable chunks to help you explore the various posts.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453613 HOOK mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453614 In the first post, write a sentence or two describing the unique 'selling point' of the article. What is the main focus it is using to attract visitors. ]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453614 FOCUS OF THE ARTICLE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453615 This post should explain the place and topics on which the site focuses in a little more detail (2 sentences).]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453615 REGISTER mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453616 This post should decide whether the article is formal or informal. Informal writing contains language features such as personal pronouns (I, we etc.), colloquialisms (cool, chilled etc.), simple vocabulary and sentence structure, contractions (can't, won't) abbreviations (etc.) and descriptions of emotion (I loved it!). Formal writing is the opposite! Say whether it is formal or informal, and provide three quotations to support your view. You do not need to analyse the quotations. ]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453616 PERSPECTIVE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453617 Simply state whether the author has used first person or third person narrative. If you don't know what they are - look them up!]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453617 SUMMARISE PURPOSE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453618 Write a sentence which describes the purpose of each of the first four (4) paragraphs of the article (4 sentences in total).]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453618 IMAGERY mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453621 Identify and provide three (3) examples of imagery the author has used. You only need to provide the quotes, not analyse them.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453621 DESCRIPTIVE LANGUAGE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453622 Identify and quote four (4) phrases where the author has used interesting adjectives or adverbs to add to their description of things. You only need to quote the phrases, not analyse them.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453622 STATISTICS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453623 Identify and quote up to three (3) examples of statistics the author has used to support their story. If there are fewer, identify as many as you can. If there are none, find one statistic by searching online that could have added value to the author's story.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453623 FACTS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453625 Identify and quote two (2) facts the author includes in the story. You only need to quote the facts, not analyse them.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453625 OPINIONS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453626 Identify and quote two (2) opinions the author includes in the story. You only need to quote the opinions, not analyse them.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453626 OTHER INTERESTING FEATURES mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453627 Describe at least one (1) thing you find interesting about the article that is not mentioned above. This could be an opinion, technical feature, or anything else that makes it stand out.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453627 https://sites.google.com/view/tartan-bushman-travel/home mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453628 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453628 HOOK mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453629 The hook of this site is the use of wildlife images and descriptions to suggest that Africa is a wild, untamed place for adventure.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453629 FOCUS OF THE ARTICLE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453630 This site focuses on Mpumalanga in South Africa. It describes a walking safari through the Kruger National Park and a dangerous encounter with an elephant. The second post explores favorite meals from South Africa's Braai food culture. Finally, it encourages tourists to visit cultural villages to learn of the tribal life of the N'debele people.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453630 REGISTER mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453631 Informal, but with quality vocabulary and sophisticated sentence structure.
'My breathing quickens'
'Nothing on this earth could make you feel more alive'
'We stood, quivering, as a leopard with a kill gazed straight into our souls']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453631 PERSPECTIVE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453632 First person in Article 1, third person in Articles 2 and 3.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453632 SUMMARISE PURPOSE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453633 Paragraph 1: To build suspense and enable the reader to feel the tension of a close up encounter with Africa's wildlife.
Paragraph 2: To emphasise the danger elephants pose to humans to generate excitement in the reader.
Paragraph 3: To summarize the variety of amazing experiences visitors will have on this trip.
Paragraph 4: To build an emotional connection with the reader by suggesting that this experience is something life-changing and timeless.]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453633 IMAGERY mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453634 'Gleaming white ivory spears hang almost to the ground'
'A mouth that rolls and grinds splintered vegetation with the force of a trash compactor'
'Encased within a motorised steel cage']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453634 DESCRIPTIVE LANGUAGE mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453635 'Living, breathing creatures of flesh and blood'
'Almost unfathomable challenge'
'Collossal bulk'
'Grizzled veteran of the bush']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453635 STATISTICS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453636 '100,000 known plants and animals'
'Rock art dating back over 3000 years'
'Estimated 50,000 more just waiting to be discovered']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453636 FACTS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453637 'Biltong is the traditional food of the early white settlers'
'This traditional treat is essentially a fried dough ball, liberally coated with castor sugar']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453637 OPINIONS mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453638 'Air-dried meat similar to jerky yet better in every aspect'
'No visit to Johannesburg, that much maligned city, would be complete without watching the Springbok Rugby team take on the best in the world']]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453638 OTHER INTERESTING FEATURES mandarinsam https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453639 The inclusion of carefully selected images and even an embedded video gives superb visual support to the writing. Additionally, the writing is sophisticated but informal in the sense that it is conversational. This is perfect for a high-end travel site. ]]> 2020-09-13 03:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741453639 Hook saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700518 the hook of the article is that they are going on adventures to places that people talk about, and seeing what its really about.]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700518 HOOK https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700627 Adding a hook to every key page on your website is one of the fastest ways to increase your website's conversion rate and that is what is website is doing. By having a first glance at the article by just scrolling down each page, the author is able to convince the reader/ audience that being a traveller, you are able to discover things you have never seen or even dreamt of, persuading by having a neat layout for each article and images by having different image slideshows that match with the content having sub-descriptions making it persuasive by making it an adventurous tourist destination with plenty of historical figures, having a look through cultural backgrounds and seeing the opportunities ultimately waiting for you. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700627 Focus of the article saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700629 the focus of the article is the adventure that they have been in, and the lessons they have learnt.]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700629 Register saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700751 good story telling.
"On a two-week visit we toured the Pacific coast to see what all the fuss was about in the new Nicaragua "

PLEASE READ THE INSTRUCTIONS: Register is FORMAL vs. INFORMAL language.

]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700751 Perspective saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700787 first person ]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700787 Summarize purpose saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700975 Paragraph 1:
to get the reader to understand where the story is based and whats its about.

Paragraph 2:
to keep the reader excited ]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700975 FOCUS OF THE ARTICLE https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700977 This site focuses mainly and specifically on the medieval village of Anversa Degli Abruzzi in the Apennine Mountains of Central Italy. It describes the region’s traditional way of life herd the animals to an alpine meadow high above the Marcelli farm and the route from the farm to the animals. The various amount of animals near the border of the National Park of Abruzzo, Lazio and Molise. Mainly, the life of a shepherd in the medieval village of Anversa Degli Abruzzi in the Apennine Mountains of Central Italy, describing the main basis what what has to be done.]]> 2020-09-13 09:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741700977 Hook rafaelbelrhalia2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701103 The hook of this site is the use of images of Barcelona's traditional Architecture designs as well as cultural art pictures.]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701103 Focus of the article rafaelbelrhalia2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701148 The creator of this website discusses the different types of arts in Barcelona as well as how she was fascinated when she saw them. It encourages the audience to visit and look at the nice cultural side of Barcelona other than the famous touristic sites. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701148 REGISTER https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701214 The text in the article is informal, but with quality vocabulary and sophisticated sentence structure.

Examples:

"Golden eagles and falcons wing through the bright blue Apennine sky."

"Mobile phones don’t work here."

"This is the kind of place you’d never want to leave."

]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701214 Register rafaelbelrhalia2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701257 Quite informal: "It was my first time to Barcelona, and apart from doing all the requisite touristy things"

". And" A few vocabulary mistakes. Not very willing, not very attractive and convincing.]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701257 PERSPECTIVE https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701309 First Person in Article 1 and Beginning of Article 2 and Article 3, Third Person in the rest of Article 2 - from the Middle till the End.]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701309 Hook adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701341 The hook of the article is that it used it was haunted by pirates, prisoners and a deadly epidemic yet now has become a haven for wildlife.]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701341 Imagery saudalshaer2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701361 "We loitered on a ridge before donning overalls, masks and gloves. The “surfboards” turned out to be rudimentary sleds made of plywood with a strip of rubber at one end and a piece of thin rope for steering."]]> 2020-09-13 09:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701361 Perspective rafaelbelrhalia2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701447 2020-09-13 09:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701447 SUMMARISE PURPOSE rafaelbelrhalia2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701593 2020-09-13 09:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741701593 Hook sruthisundararaman2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702477 The hook of this article would be the pictures of the food showing the diversity of food in Bengaluru. Another hook is the word "Home-made" which is written throughout the article]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702477 Hook zayyanaasvat2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702664 I think that the hook of this article is based on the fact that the author is trying to persuade the reader to travel to Nicaragua due to it being a first-rate tourist destination with plenty of adventures and opportunities waiting. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702664 Focus of the article sruthisundararaman2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702718 The focus of the article are the stories and inspiration behind the food. This would show the readers the culture of Bengaluru. Another focus would be home-made cooking]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702718 Focus of the article zayyanaasvat2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702719 This site mainly focuses on the different cities in Nicaragua, and the different tours and site you can see in each city such as the hiking the Mochoba volcano in Granada, or visiting the the wildlife in Nelva Negra. Next the article talks about the different food styles in Nicaragua which are mostly Latin American and can include, beans, slow cooked meat, various types of rice among others. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702719 Focus of the article zarababu https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702780 This article focuses mainly on the Dry Tortugas which was established as a national park in 1992. It is the third-largest coral barrier reef in the world and the only tropical reef in the continental United states. It also explains why it was important for pirates, the hidden treasure which was there and the history behind it.]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702780 Register zayyanaasvat2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702846 ""Formal as there are no personal pronouns and it is a professional website.
"For years, Nicaragua was considered pretty much off the beaten path with holiday makers choosing to venture to the Caribbean or to Costa Rica next door"
"Food styles are distinctly Latin American".
"Late November to May is the dry season. Nicaragua is not in the hurricane zone but does get tropical storms from June to November". ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702846 Register sruthisundararaman2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702855 This is informal as it uses personal pronouns and contraction:
"We don’t blame them."

However, there are only few places where they have informal language, mostly the introduction paragraph. The rest is formal ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702855 Hook layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702864 The hook of this article is the variety of subtopics included in the article. You can find the section that is to be of interest and start there as it is very organized. There are also eye catching images of historical monuments as well as museums one can visit in berlin. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702864 Register adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702886 Formal with quality vocabulary & sentence structure.
"Pirates and wreckers no longer ply the waters around Dry Tortugas, but hidden treasure still calls to those willing to search for it"
"Lost treasure isn’t the only thing that makes this isolated aquatic realm—it takes a two-hour-plus ferry ride to get there—so alluring"]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702886 Imagery adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702918 1. "Although less than a hundred miles from Rome, the plateau feels like a forgotten world. Bumblebees browse wild oregano and thyme. Golden eagles and falcons wing through the bright blue Apennine sky. Hundreds of species of herbs, grasses, and wildflowers grow in dizzying profusion."
2. "Stone kalivia—primitive summer cottages used by shepherds—were scattered across a rocky meadow crisscrossed by drystone walls that once enclosed vineyards and gardens."
3. "Dimitris told us about the blue mold that forms between the cheese and the skin, which he kneads into the cheese. Yianoula scooped out a chunk and placed it on a communal plate. Hunks of wood-toasted bread in hand, we dug in. The cheese was deliciously pungent and peppery—it was the touloumotiri of my childhood, the touloumotiri of transhumance."]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702918 Perspective zayyanaasvat2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702939 The author uses third person throughout the article. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702939 Perspective zarababu https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702974 Article: 3rd person]]> 2020-09-13 09:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741702974 Descriptive Language adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703003 ""1. "We arrived in Babala after a steep, four-hour hike. Stone kalivia—primitive summer cottages used by shepherds—were scattered across a rocky meadow crisscrossed by drystone walls that once enclosed vineyards and gardens."
2. "Spain’s Idiazabal cheese originally was made by shepherds in the Basque and Navarra regions, its smoky flavor a result of being aged near the fireplace in the shepherds’ rustic stone huts."
3. "After clattering through Anversa’s cobblestone streets, the sheep and their herders scramble upward."
4. "Walking some 30 miles over three days, 65-year-old Marcelli, his shepherds, and a few guests curious about this region’s traditional way of life herd the animals to an alpine meadow high above the Marcelli farm."]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703003 Summarise Purpose adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703027 Paragraph 1: To explain what it was before it became a national park, to explain the back story of it all
Paragraph 2: To historically explain why it was important for pirates, and how it was a prime area for sunken ships containing things that can be worth a lot.
Paragraph 3: To sort of try and tease the audience- Saying things like "Pirates and wreckers no longer plythe water around Dry Tortugas, but hidden treasure still calls to those willing to search for it". They even go ahead and give an example, making the audience not only wanting to go more but having hope that they will be able to find treasure themselves.
Paragraph 4: To explain on why lost treasure isn't the entire reason on why the park is so isolated. Throughout this paragraph, the writer also explains a couple facts and tries to sort of tease the audience in order for it to be more visited.]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703027 Imagery zarababu https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703108 "Surrounded by shallow water"
"...extremely hot conditions..."
"coral gardening"]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703108 Statistics adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703153 Abstract The ecological and risk -management rationales for livestock mobility are well established. Yet, few studies evaluate the economic benefits and costs of maintaining or resuming mobile, extensive livestock production compared to sedentary or semi-extensive production. Here, we empirically evaluate pastoralists’ claims that transhumance, a specific type of long-distance herd mobility, is a more profitable system compared to semi-extensive production in the Central Spanish Pyrenees. Specifically, we use enterprise budget data from transhumant and semi-extensive operations to develop a baseline typical sheep operation budget. We then use partial budget analysis coupled with economic simulations to determine the conditions under which transhumance by truck or on foot becomes profitable relative to semi-extensive production. We find that transhumance by foot is more profitable than transhumance by truck and that relative profitability compared to semi-extensive production depends on operational scale, feed prices, and the lambing rates (productivity) of each system. Over all simulated scenarios, transhumance is more profitable 64–78% of the time. This analysis thus provides initial evidence of the economic rationality of transhumance under contemporary environmental and economic conditions, filling a notable gap in research on the economics of transhumance. Future research could expand the analysis to cattle operations and to other regions of Spain, assess the full social and environmental benefits and costs of transhumance, and evaluate the effects of exogenous factors like drought on production costs and profitability to determine if transhumance is an adaptive strategy under a changing climate. The analysis we present could be used as a basis to develop and pilot test interactive budgeting tools that support herder decision-making and planning under economic and environmental uncertainty.]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703153 Descriptive Language adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703165 "Stories of swashbuckling pirates" "Tales of turbulent waters"
"When the sandbar bridge between Bush and Garden Key is not submerged"]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703165 Summarize purpose zayyanaasvat2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703169 First Paragraph: Basically states that Nicaragua is very underrated and often forgotten, but it is actually a beautiful exciting place to visit.
Second Paragraph: The author writes about the undeniable natural beauty of Nicaragua, adn states some of the mains sites such as the different volcanoes, lakes and beaches.
Third Paragraph: Talks about the capital city Manaua and the different sites it has to offer such as the markets and restaurants.
Fourth Paragraph: Lastly, the fourth paragraph talks about the city Selva Negra and the coffee plantation wildlife it has to offer tourists. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703169 Hook https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703193 The selling point of this article is the unique beauty that captures the viewer. The breathtaking rock formations with a thousand surreal sandstone arches are the main attraction along with the thrill packed activities you can do,]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703193 Statistics zarababu https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703194 "During the 1600s and 1700s, the Straits of Florida were dotted with Spanish treasure ships sailing between Cuba and Florida—"

"In 1985, treasure hunters salvaged $450 million in silver and gold from a sunken 17th-century Spanish galleon."

"As the war ravaged the States, soldiers and prisoners on the island battled the spread of yellow fever, which began plaguing the residents in 1867. "

"... a federal bird reservation in 1908."]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703194 Facts adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703292 "Dry Tortugas is the third-largest coral barrier reef in the world"
"In 1985, treasure hunters salvaged $450 million in silver and gold from a sunken 17th-century Spanish galleon"]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703292 Facts adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703394 1. "Sheep and goats were the first animals that humans domesticated as livestock, around 10,000 years ago. Evidence of seasonal herding reaches back nearly as far. The Hulailan Valley of the central Zagros Mountains in Iran was first settled by transhumant herders around 7050 B.C., according to radiocarbon dating from a 1963 excavation."
2. "Western Macedonia’s sarplaninski ovci kashkaval is produced only in the summer and only when the sheep are grazing at altitudes of 3,280 and 4,920 feet"]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703394 Opinions zarababu https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703401 "A haven for nature"
"One of the best things to do outside of tern-nesting season"]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703401 Perspective amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703436 1st person as we is used, but with a combination of 3rd person as her/she is used.]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703436 Other Interesting Features adamyassin2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703449 The website looks really good from an aesthetic point of view, and has a lot of detail put into it. The writing especially uses advanced vocabulary enhancing the overall production quality of the site.]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703449 Opinions adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703476 1. "This is the kind of place you’d never want to leave."
2. " The cheese was deliciously pungent and peppery—it was the touloumotiri of my childhood, the touloumotiri of transhumance."]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703476 Summarise Purpose sruthisundararaman2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703541 1: (introduction) To introduce to audience to the topic of chefs and how most restaurants would not let us meet the chef.
2: (Introduction) To introduce the main topic: home cooking chefs
3: (Introduction) To give a vague summary of home cooking chefs
4: To show an example of a home cooking chef and tell the readers the inspiration behind the home chefs

]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703541 Imagery sruthisundararaman2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703567 "Which gives it a lovely smoky flavor."
"slice of her culture and heritage."?

]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703567 Other Interesting Features adriandosramos2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703591 Something that makes this article stand out, is that it has many pictures/visuals throughout the article. This makes the article look more attractive, and more pleasing to read. They also aid the understanding of the text, as they are relevant images, with detailed captions.]]> 2020-09-13 09:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741703591 Descriptive Language amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704543 "gives it a lovely smoky flavor."
"An authentic Odia meal"
"sattvic in his shunning of onions and garlic."
"in the heart of Bangalore"]]> 2020-09-13 09:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704543 Statistics amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704850 "the banglore food service has an estimated worth of 20,014 crore"

"The city has approximately 42,000 restaurants"

"The Indian Restaurant Industry employed 7.3 million people"

]]> 2020-09-13 09:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704850 Facts amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704943 "biryani is actually put on dum on a coal fired sigdi"

"diners in the month since she joined Authenticook"]]> 2020-09-13 09:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704943 Opinions amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704974 "Andhra Brahmin from the West Godavari district, is impossible to find anywhere outside of Andhra Pradesh."

"We imagine that’s how the Mughals liked it too."]]> 2020-09-13 09:21:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741704974 Other interesting features amreenaurifullah2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741705083 "“But it’s also very unique. Unless you try it, you will never understand the beauty of the flavours.”"

This is a dialogue and quotes which is good for getting opinions]]> 2020-09-13 09:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741705083 Focus of the article https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741705555 The article focusses on the breathtaking rock formations and the towering canyons. Also its focuses on the outdoor activities such as hiking the canyons and rafting;.]]> 2020-09-13 09:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741705555 Hook ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706766 The hook of the site is the use of image of New York traditional food as well as the restaurant with old architecture]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706766 web address rociocarnicero2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706874 https://www.nytimes.com/2020/03/03/dining/le-crocodile-review-pete-wells.html

]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706874 facts ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706888
- "Chez a tante" is the fist restaurant Aidan O'Neal and Jake Leiber ran together.
- They shared the job of chef for their second restaurant "Le crocodile"
- Most of the recipe came from France
-The restaurant has a lot of style and energy.

]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706888 Register seojinpark8 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706918 informal
"Nearly everything I’ve had at Le Crocodile has made me want to come back for more."
"There are so many dishes you’re not quite sure at first whether two guys whose best-known creation is a pancake will be able to keep up."
"That’s a head fake: the word is used in the French sense, and denotes more appetizers."

]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706918 focus of article ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706980 This site focuses on french food. it describes what main ingredients they use in their recipe.]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741706980 other interesting features ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707073 The writing of this site is very sophisticated and informal at the same time. i also like the pictures added, they are well taken.]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707073 Register https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707085 Formal with good Vocabulary
"Moab is a paradise whose beauty captures everybody"
"New wildflowers are blooming"
"The sand feels a little deeper, the pack feels a little heavier"
"Colorado mountains are shimmering from a distance. We deeply breathe in the clear dry air, pausing for a moment. Speechless"]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707085 imagery rociocarnicero2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707105 "From shelfish to snails"
"A cheerfully sour lemon tarte"
"lowly soaking up a warm helping of chicken jus and fresh herbs."]]> 2020-09-13 09:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707105 Perspective seojinpark8 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707157 combined third person and first person]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707157 descriptive language rociocarnicero2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707201 "on a cushion of avocado purée. It’s delicious."
" good crunchy mouthfuls of toasted sourdough croutons instead of the usual limp blobs of drowned bread."

"smooth as foie gras and held together by what must be a small mountain of butter, is superb."

"which are puffy and creamy on a small hill of potato purée"]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707201 Summarise purpose seojinpark8 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707299 The first paragraph introduces two major characters in this article and the relationship between two characters in their first restaurant so audiences can understand the next paragraph easily.

In the second paragraph, the story begins with the second restaurant of these two characters. And before moving on to the main subject, it come up with a few sentences that briefly summurize the main subject to engage the audience.

In this third paragraph, the main topic begins, and the second restaurante's menu is outlined. The writer reinforces the strength of this restaurant by writing down positive thoughts that make him come to this store again.

In the fourth paragraph, the menu is mentioned again in more detail and gives the examples of the menu. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707299 opinions rociocarnicero2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707358 "It’s a place where people, or at least Brooklynites, want to sit and stay."

"There’s a sort of salade lyonnaise — I say sort of because the lardons you’d find in Lyon have been replaced by smoked eel"]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707358 Statistic seojinpark8 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707418 "The menu at Le Crocodile is nearly 50-items long, which might lead to a paralysis of whichever part of your brain chooses food"
"the French-ish place they opened in Greenpoint in 2017"]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707418 Descriptive Language amraboutaleb1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707424 "grumbled in the soursop tree."
"squabbled in the frothing tideline ."
"it was merely the scruffy edge-lands of a shoreside holiday resort."
"We loitered on a ridge before donning overalls"]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707424 Focus of the Article layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707492 This article focuses on the Berlin Wall was divided between 1961 and 1989, with its western portion entirely surrounded by the wall. The consequence was a cultural oddity, which resulted in a very special way of life, a community with a peculiar political standing. It was known officialment as Berlin (west); the East Germans wrote it as West Berlin, if they referred to it at any rate; they wrote it with a hyphen in German, in West Berlin, while in Western Germany they wrote it.]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707492 Statistics amraboutaleb1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707501 "While not quite closed to tourism from April 2018 to February 2019, Central America’s last left-leaning nation found itself in the spotlight of international media when security forces authorised by Daniel Ortega,"
"Government forces used live ammunition and an estimated 325 died during the period."
"San Cristóbal, at 5,725ft the highest volcano in the country and one of the most active, puncturing the haze of the hot morning."]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707501 Perspective. https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707554 The person explains his travels in first person.]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707554 facts amraboutaleb1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707561 "The lake, too, boasts smart lodgings, from acclaimed Jicaro Lodge, crafted from the refuse left by a hurricane, on an islet minutes away from Granada, to the Finca San Juan de la Isla on Omotepe island"
"Consequently, it’s still grey and stony with no vegetation apart from a few firecracker plants clinging to pyroclasts. "]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707561 opinions amraboutaleb1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707642 "toured the impressive Ortíz-Gurdián contemporary art galleries and took in the view from the roof of the 18th-century cathedral."
"I enjoyed watching Kate come down"]]> 2020-09-13 09:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741707642 Register layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708100 This is a formal article.
"The result was a historical oddity, a city with a special political status that resulted in a very unique way of life."
"As you can see, even the spelling was a political matter."
" As a result, several children drowned in Berlin waters because they could not be saved from the western side"]]> 2020-09-13 09:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708100 Perspective layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708453 The introduction paragraph is in 2nd person, while the rest of the article is in 3rd person. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:27:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708453 Hook andreiseguias2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708547 The hook of this article is about the incredibly well taken pictures of the architecture in Prague. The pictures are the first things you see in the article meaning that after looking at these very aesthetically appealing pictures because of the colors in the building and the beautiful sky you would be more likely to be more focused on the article.]]> 2020-09-13 09:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741708547 Purpose https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709420 Paragraph 1: The first paragraph states a short outline of why Moab is such a beautiful place. Also it lists the activities you can do without going into detail. So this will motivate the audience to continue reading.

Paragraph 2: The second paragraph states about the journey the writer had. The use of monologue used in this paragraph provides more detail in terms of his emotions and feelings.

Paragraph 3: The third paragraph is all about describing the 4 mile long hike through a hike class Hypatia canyon. Its describes in detail the whole adventure with the difficulties'

Paragraph 4: The paragraph describes in a lot of detail the part o fthe journey where he climbed up the canyon on a rope. It is proof of how thrilling some of the activities can be.]]> 2020-09-13 09:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709420 Summarize Purpose layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709604 intro- to introduce a main event in history (the berlin wall) and about the city of berlin.
1st paragraph- about the political status while they were under occupation and division.
2nd paragraph- the purpose of the wall and what it did/ meant.
3rd paragraph- how berlin worked through with having other countries as allies.
4th paragraph- the people wanting to still go through with living peacefully.
5th paragraph- being in the state of disturbance.
6th paragraph- how berlin was flourished with art and how they lived with it.
7th paragraph- about Harald Juhnke, Edith Hancke, Brigitte Mira, Hans Rosenthal and Rolf Eden.
8th paragraph- the music scene of berlin
9th paragraph- a district in berlin called Kreuzberg.
10th paragraph- about berlin today (west berlin)]]> 2020-09-13 09:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709604 Perspective egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709669 First-Person perspective is used throughout the whole article. This is because it uses first person language like "we walked", "our trip".]]> 2020-09-13 09:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741709669 Facts https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741710099 " Thousands of massive, surreal sandstone arches"
"cool canyons carved by the emerald green Colorado River in millions of years"
"The annual Moab Ho-Down is set, a colorful festival all about mountain biking. The experts are testing their skills with various races and competitions"

]]> 2020-09-13 09:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741710099 Hook https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741710954 the hook of this article is the pictures. there are many colorful pictures that capture the audience attention. the pictures that are being used also show us their living conditions and add on to the text. ]]> 2020-09-13 09:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741710954 Focus of the Article https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711113 the article focuses of teaching the readers about the Bangladesh culture and there way of doing things. in the first part it describes a girl that is traveling and in the second paragraph it describes a boy from the city that it talking about there culture there history and traditions.]]> 2020-09-13 09:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711113 Imagery layalsaleh https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711146 "since soldiers would drop sweets with very small parachutes to the ground to the delight of Berlin’s children."
"The artistic life flourished in West Berlin."
"West Berlin learned to live with the Wall, painting it with colourful graffiti and accepting it as just a part of everyday life in a divided city."]]> 2020-09-13 09:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711146 Register https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711253 This writing is informal.
"300 euros is a hell of a lot of money"
"We have to run the last kilometer, carrying our bags"
"When I came to visit as a child, I got homesick immediately and wanted to go back home to the city"

]]> 2020-09-13 09:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711253 Perspective https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711353 first person perspective ]]> 2020-09-13 09:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711353 summarize purpose https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711432 paragraph 1) the purpose in this paragraph is to demonstrate there lifestyle
paragraph 2) to contrast how different the city life is from the village life
paragraph 3) describing the house the aunts house
paragraph 4) how they met bobby ]]> 2020-09-13 09:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711432 Descriptive Language talaalkhaouli2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711680 "Berlin's Museums at a Glance"
"Berlin Through the Ages"
"Hop On & Off! Popular bus tours"
"All hotels at a glance"!]]> 2020-09-13 09:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711680 Imagery https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711920 'The sun breaks through the clouds and the two wind their way'
'We’re enveloped in the sounds of nature'
'goats and roosters compete to see who’s got the most powerful set of lungs']]> 2020-09-13 09:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711920 Statistics talaalkhaouli2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711985 1) "More than 300 certified hotels".
2) "Free public transport" and "Free city guidebook-including map".
3) "Discover a fascinating world of biodiversity, Tierpark Berlin: from
€14.50".]]> 2020-09-13 09:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741711985 Descriptive Language https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712096 " a sweat-drenched eternity"
"We’re enveloped in the sounds of nature"
"the Man eater"]]> 2020-09-13 09:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712096 Facts talaalkhaouli2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712574 1) "Large German electrical and chemical companies employed thousands of workers that flocked to the city from Silesia, Pomerania, and east Prussia".
2) "Marvel at famous works of art and architecture from the 19th century Europe with a visit to the Alte Nationalgalerie in Berlin" and "One of the most striking buildings in Berlin, the Atles Museum houses at a vast range of ancient artefacts from the Greek, Roman, and Etruscan eras".
3) "South of the Brandenburg Gate is Berlin's moving Holocaust Memorial; 2700 concrete columns arranged in rows".]]> 2020-09-13 09:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712574 Opinions talaalkhaouli2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712597 1) "Everything in just one city. Chilling and Exploring. Adventure and Fun".
2) "Festival of Lights and Berlin Leuchtet transform Berlin into a metropolis of lights in autumn" and "Experience Berlin in a light spectacle, when the whole city shines in bright colors".]]> 2020-09-13 09:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712597 Facts https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712984 "Bangladesh is a small, over-populated country in South Asia, and remains mostly in the shadow of its enormous and culturally related neighbour India. Bangladesh is almost completely encircled by India, bordered only to the South East by Myanmar"

"In 1947, when the Indian subcontinent became independent of British colonial rule, it was annexed to Pakistan under the name ‘East Pakistan’, due to its Muslim majority. Its significant geographic and cultural differences from Pakistan led to independence in 1971, after a bloody war, and to its current name of Bangladesh."

]]> 2020-09-13 09:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712984 Other Interesting Features talaalkhaouli2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712986 There is a suitable amount of eye-catching and interesting photos of city discussed (Berlin) to go with the text and information where different activities are presented and highly recommended for tourists to complete when they visit. Additionally, the website contains a good navigation, meaning it is easy to follow, one won't get lost trying to look for specific information, and is fairly simple to use.]]> 2020-09-13 09:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741712986 Statistics https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713140 "In the South West are the Sundarbans, a vast delta, and home of the largest mangrove forests on earth. About 6,000 square kilometres of it are in Bangladesh and 4,000 in India"

"Bengal tiger skins fetch 20,000 to 25,000 Bangladeshi taka. That’s only 240 to 300 euros when you’re at the beginning of the multi-link sales chain"

'The tigers that live in the Sundarbans, however, have a unique selling point: they bear the notorious soubriquet of ‘man-eater’ ']]> 2020-09-13 09:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713140 Opinions https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713267 "The children plunge their toothbrushes into the murky water without hesitation. ‘Oh my god, no!’ I want to scream, but I suppress my intuitive reflex. It’s normal here."

"I’ve come back with more intense impressions than almost ever before"]]> 2020-09-13 09:35:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713267 Other Interesting Features https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713645 The writing is very well written and helps visualize the true reality of the lifestyle in Bangladesh and captures raw moments of the Bangladesh culture.]]> 2020-09-13 09:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713645 Opinions https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713909 " Nature showcases the most spectacular desert landscapes ever sculpted by a creator"
" Bright red rock formations, thousands of massive, surreal sandstone arches, deep, cool canyons"
"I like the community here, that always supports each other. There’s always somebody ready to climb. There are so many things to do here"
"And then looking at the scenery around you, the colors, red rocks, blue skies, green trees, the snow on the rock. Out here there’s plenty of open space, that’s part of why I moved here. And I like the fact that it’s a small town. It’s cool that people travel a long distance to see what we have to offer"
"I like the idea that it’s got all these twists and turns, obstacles up and down, you never know what’s around the corner"
"There are definitely days when you feel tired. The sand feels a little deeper, the pack feels a little heavier"]]> 2020-09-13 09:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741713909 Statistics egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741714777 "40 years of Communist rule"]]> 2020-09-13 09:37:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741714777 Focus andreiseguias2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741715315 This site is about old architecture in Prague, check republic, and why you should go there just to see the buildings. It explains why the buildings are a beautiful piece of history. It also tells you how different it is from buildings in a city.]]> 2020-09-13 09:38:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741715315 Imagery jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717646 1) "There are walking trails around lagoons and plenty of wildlife such as Howler monkeys and birds lurking in the trees."

2) "the city has low rise colonial architecture in sunny colours, red domed yellow churches that seem to have emerged from a bygone age."

3) "and see, and smell, first hand the bubbling thermal activity hiding beneath the vines and orchids."]]> 2020-09-13 09:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717646 Imagery https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717701 Example one: The sun beams from the deep blue, cloudless sky onto the red rock fins, that are reaching all the way to the horizon in gentle verves

Example 2:
Then the canyon widens, the leaves of cottonwood trees rattle in the breeze as the sun dries us while we continue hiking.

Example 3:Bright red rock formations, thousands of massive, surreal sandstone arches, deep, cool canyons carved by the emerald green Colorado River in millions of years.

]]> 2020-09-13 09:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717701 Descriptive Language jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717729 "1)"Just 10 km away, from Granada is this moody volcanic mountain, whose peak is shrouded in cloud forest."

2) "The city has a colourful market selling all manner of trinkets."

3) "electronic trees that light up the city at night."

4) "they have a chocolate-oriented spa plus a great swimming pool and a cafe that wraps around a mini-forest where beans are growing."]]> 2020-09-13 09:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717729 Statistics jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717933 1) "It’s a two-hour drive north east from Managua to the 1,400-acre Selva Negra coffee plantation in the highlands."

2) "It is pretty high up – around 4,000 feet above sea level"

3) "She reaches 1,344 metres into the clouds and it’s a bumpy five-minute ride in a truck to the top."]]> 2020-09-13 09:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741717933 Facts jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718006 1) "Nicaragua is not in the hurricane zone but does get tropical storms from June to November."

2) "It’s downfall was due to eruptions and earthquakes and so the city was moved in the 17th century to a safer place."]]> 2020-09-13 09:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718006 Opinions jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718056 1) "This colourful city is a joy to explore and photograph."

2) "Another tasty snack is a quesillo corn tortilla"

]]> 2020-09-13 09:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718056 Other Interesting Features jenaelhammady3 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718095 There is use of non-verbal communication in this article. There are many pictures to give the audience a visual of how Nicaragua looks like. It is another form of attracting the audience. Furthermore, there are many metaphors used such as, "This museum has his echoes in its walls."]]> 2020-09-13 09:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741718095 Hook ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719417 The hook of the site is the use of wildlife image and the description of an elephant journey.]]> 2020-09-13 09:44:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719417 Fact ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719521 - human and animal have built empires togethers
-A law in India had recently banned capturing and selling wild elephants
-There is a lot of bond between elephant and their mahout.]]> 2020-09-13 09:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719521 Focus of the article ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719586 This site focuses on the bond between the elephant and the mahout and the journey they have together.]]> 2020-09-13 09:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719586 Other interesting feature ombelineredon2 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719683 The pictures added to the articles are amazing and fascinating. Additionally the writing is sophisticated and well written ]]> 2020-09-13 09:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741719683 Statistics https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741720879 Arches National Park itself, at the gates of Moab, draws more than 1,5 million people annually.

Ours for now is called Hypatia Canyon, a four mile long hike...]]> 2020-09-13 09:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741720879 Descriptive Language egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741722816 "constant visual delight"
"stunningly artistic buildings"
"the frescos in the archways on the front were works of art"
"artistic gothic towers"]]> 2020-09-13 09:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741722816 Other Interesting Features https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741723576 It was really interesting how they added really appealing pictures and used really good vocabulary to make the website seem more interesting.]]> 2020-09-13 09:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741723576 SUMMARISE PURPOSE https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741739014 Paragraph 1: Explaining about the gathering of his flock of sheep near the medieval village of Anversa degli Abruzzi in the Apennine Mountains of central Italy and the traditional way of life to herd the animals to an alpine meadow high above the Marcelli farm.

Paragraph 2: It talks about the route from the farm to the animals and how it was done the italian way, following a tratturo, the Italian word for the paths carved into this land by more than 2,300 years of such migrations.

Paragraph 3: explains the plateau and how it feels like a forgotten world as well explanation of the birds and plants - hundreds of species growing there.

Paragraph 4: How different cuisines are prepared, a lunch consisting of traditional Abruzzese fare such as lamb stew or pancotto, a bread-and-vegetable soup, everyone returns by van to Anversa.

]]> 2020-09-13 10:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741739014 Opinions egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741771212 "No trip to Prague is complete without a visit to the Prague Castle"
"We could barely go a block without finding yet one more building to stop and stare at."]]> 2020-09-13 11:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741771212 Imagery egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741847045 There isn't much imagery because there are images that show what they saw. Talking about it in the text as well would be repetitive.

"Around the corner from our first hotel in Prague, we found the New Town Hall. It was a series of very different buildings, each with its own style. The bell tower stood high on one corner."
"the churches are beautiful and ornate inside and out"]]> 2020-09-13 13:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741847045 Summarize Purpose egeyazici1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741850263 Paragraph 1) The purpose here is to introduce Prague and to state how it was better to visit than other places.
Paragraph 2) This paragraph's purpose is to state examples of some of the things that were in Prague.
Paragraph 3) This paragraph is to state how good Prague was to visit compared to other European cities.
Paragraph 4) The purpose of this paragraph was to show where they went in Prague and what art they saw.]]> 2020-09-13 13:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/741850263 other interesting features amraboutaleb1 https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/744038170 There are a lot of high quality pictures that make the reader better imagine what he is reading and make it about more exciting.]]> 2020-09-14 14:11:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mandarinsam/j9swmw0ilwa9j9oq/wish/744038170