https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k 9 November 2020 en-us 2020-11-09 00:46:28 UTC 2026-02-13 01:16:10 UTC hello@padlet.com g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902436979 Rep: Miss Amisha]]> 2020-11-09 00:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902436979 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902438323 Rep: Master Jailani]]> 2020-11-09 00:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902438323 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902439972 Rep: Miss Aeryn]]> 2020-11-09 00:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902439972 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902441153 Rep: Master Dillon]]> 2020-11-09 00:51:45 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902441153 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902447494 # how the three men saved the jumper
# the problems they faced when saving him

As Messina got closer to the sea, the jumper plunged...
- into the dark choppy river
- David Blauzvern, John Green and Messina jumped in
- (Just as the jumper was losing strength), Blauzvern grabbed hold of him
- (Then), Messina and Green caught up with him
- Blauzvern supported the jumper's back while Messina and Green held him up from either side
-The men made their way to the concrete wall but there was no ladder or dock in sight so there was no way out of the river
- The jumper was deadweight in his rescuers' arms
- (After ten minutes), they managed to get to the river edge
- Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall
- Fighting the current and holding the man above the water became exhausting so they gave in to drifting
- (Fifteen minutes later), the two men rescue boat appeared but it could not get close to the wall.

(The words in bold are the problems the men faced)]]> 2020-11-09 00:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902447494 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902467350 #the effects of the writer's addidction to the Internet
# the measures he took to overcome his addiction

When the writer got his laptop, he soon became addicted...
(Effects)
- spent hours watching plethora of YouTube videos
- playing his favourite online games
- started filling his freetime with other Internet activities
- spending hours in front of the bright screen
- could not stop compulsive need to surf the Internet
- it interfered with his school work
- impacted on his social and personal life
- papa and mama started blaming each other for my condition
(Measures)
- he decided that he had to conquer his addiction
- agreed to limit his Internet usage to an hour a day
- he made an attempt to hang out with his friends
- played football again
- helped his mom with household chores
- went for a long walk
- watched movies
- (After three months), he was finally able to kick the habit

For both summaries, 
1. rephrase and combine points wherever necessary but do not change the meaning
2. make sure you answer both parts of the questions (as specified in the rubrics) in your summaries.]]> 2020-11-09 01:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902467350 m4437539 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610520 1.David Blauzvern,John Green and Messina jumped into the river
2.Blauzvern grabbed hold of him
3.They stabilized the man,Blauzvern supported his back and Messina and Green held him from either side
4.The men made their way towards the concrete seawall
5.The water was flowing eight feet below the lip of the wall 
6.Blauzvern realised there was no ladder or dock to get out of the river
7.The treading water was getting tougher and the jumper was deadweight in his rescuer's arms
8.Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, cutting himself in the process
9.Green could not hold on for too long as fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting
10.The men gave in too drifting while staying as close to the wall
11.Although after fifteen minutes,the two-man rescue boat appeared,they could not risk nearing the seawall

]]> 2020-11-09 02:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610520 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610639 1. David Blauzhern , Messina and John Green jumped into the river.]]> 2020-11-09 02:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610639 m11638572 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610699 1. into the dark, choppy river.
2. Blauzvern and Green jumped in. Messina joined them in the river
3. Blauzvern grabbed hold of the jumper as he was losing strength
4. They stabilized the man with Blauzvern supporting his back and Messina and Green holding him up
5. The men made their way towards the concrete seawall however they realized there was no ladder or dock in sight, so there was no way out of the water
6. The man was deadweight in their arms which meant they could only use their legs to manoeuvre themselves
7. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall and cut himself
8. Fighting the current and holding the man above the water became exhausting.
9. They gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could
10. The two-man rescue boat appeared fifteen minutes after the men had jumped into the water.]]> 2020-11-09 02:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610699 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610855 Amal
1. Into the dark, choppy river below. 
2. David Blauzvern, John Green and Messina jumped into the river. 
3. Blauzvern grabbed hold of the jumper as the jumper was losing strength. 
4. They stabilized the man, with Blauzvern supporting his back and Messina and Green holding him up from either side. 
5. Blauzvern realized that there was no way out of the river as the water was flowing a good eight feet below the lip of the wall and there were no ladder or dock in sight. 
6. The rescuers' had only their legs to manoeuvre themselves as the jumper was deadweight in the rescuers' arms. 
7. After ten minutes, they managed to get to the river edge as Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, cutting himself in the process but he couldn't hold on for long. 
8. The rescuers gave in to drifting while staying close to the wall as it was getting exhausting to fight the current and holding the man above the water. 
9. Fifteen minutes after the men had jumped into the river, the two-man rescue boat appeared though it could not risk getting too close to the seawall. ]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610855 m4441927 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610865 1.the writer spent hours watching youtube and video games.
2. he began to feel more at home with online friends than his real friends.
3. he was spending hours sitting in front of the bright screen.
4. as the time passed, the internet interfered with his schoolwork and seriously impacted on his sosial and personal life. 
5. he struggled to wake up in the morning as he spent time of his sleep hours with online.
6. his parents started voicing their disapproval and tried to limit the time he spent online as his grades in school started deteriorating.
7. the writer agreed to limit his internet usage to an hour every day .
8. he made an attempt to hang out with his friends and played football again.
9. he helped his mother with household chores.
10. everytime he felt the urge to sit in front of the computer, he went for a long walk or watched a movie instead.]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902610865 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611086 Nazmi
1.the writer spent hours on YouTube videos and online games
2.he started filling his free time with other Internet activities 
3.he was spending hours sitting infront of the bright screen
4.as time passed, the writer could no stop compulsive need to surf the Internet 
5.]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:09 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611086 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611130 1. Messina, Green and Blauzvern jumped into the river.
2. Just as the jumper was losing strength, Blauzvern held him.
3. When Messina and Green caught them, they stabilized the man with Blauzvern supporting his back while Messina and Green held him up from either side.
4. The water was flowing eight feet below and no ladder was in sight, making it difficult to get out of the river.
5. The jumper was deadweight in his rescuers' arms.
6. The rescuers' could only use their legs to manoeuvre themselves.
7. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, cutting himself in the process.
8. Green could not hold on for long as fighting the current and holding the man above the water became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall.
9. Fifteen minutes after the men jumped in, the two-man rescue boat appeared.
10. However, the men could not risk getting too close to the seawall. 

]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611130 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611593 Jessel
1) .... into the dark, choppy river.
2)David Blauzvern, John Green and Messina jumped into the river.
3)As soon as the jumper was losing strength, Blauzvern grabbed  hold of him. 
4)]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902611593 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902612117 1 the man took a step foward and plundged into dark, choppy river below
2 David Blauzvern, John Green ans Messina dropped their phones and keys and jumped into the river
3 Blauzvern grabbed hold of the jumper. Messina and Green soon caught up to them
4 they stabilized thw man, with Blauzvern supporting his back and Messina and Green holding him up from either side
5 Blauzvern realized that with the water flowing eight feet below the lip of the wall and no ladder or dock in sight, thete was no way out of the river 
6treading water was getting tougher by the minute 
7the jumper was deadweight in rescuers 'arms
8Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall,cutting himself in the process
9 fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall

]]> 2020-11-09 02:42:56 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902612117 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902620036 1. David Blauzvern , John Green , and Messina jumped into the river. 
2. Blauzvern grabbed hold of the jumper. 
3. Blauzvern supporting his back and Messina and Green holding him up from the either side. 
4. The flowing eight feet below the lip of the wall and no ladder or dock in sight so there is no way out of the river. 
5. Threading water was getting tougher by minute. 
6. The jumper was deadweight in his rescuers' arms which meant they could use only their legs to manoeuvre themselves. 
7. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, cutting himself in the process. 
8. Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting. 
9. After fifteen minutes , two-man rescue boat appeared.]]> 2020-11-09 02:48:24 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902620036 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902628027 Aeryn
1. David Blauzvern and John Green jumped in the river.
2. Just as the jumper was losing strength, Blauzvern grabbed hold of him.
3. They stabilised the man, with Blauzvern supporting his back and Messina and Green holding him up from either side.
4. Blauzvern realized there was no ladder or dock in sight so there was no way out of the river.
5. Someone yelled to them that a rescue boat is on its way.
6. The jumper was a deadweight in their arms which meant that they could use only their legs to manoeuvre themselves.
7.After 10 minutes, they managed to get to the river edge.
8. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tinu crack in the wall, cutting himself in the process.
9. Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could. 
10. Fifteen minutes after the men had jumped into the river, the two-man rescue boat appeared but it couldnt risk getting close to the seawall. 

]]> 2020-11-09 02:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902628027 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902658082 1. The writer spent hours watching YouTube videos and playing online games.
2. He started filling his free time with other Internet activities.
3. He began to feel more at home with his online friends than his real friends as he spent hours sitting in front of the bright screen.
4. As time passed, he could not stop the compulsive need to surf the Internet and it interfered with his schoolwork, social and personal life.
6. When his addiction started getting out of control, the writer agreed to limit the Internet usage to an hour everyday.
8. The writer made an attempt to hang out with his friends and started playing football again.
9. He even helped his mother with household  chores.
10.  Whenever he got the urge to use the computer, the write went for a long walk or watched a movie instead.
11. Eventually, the writer managed to kick the habit.]]> 2020-11-09 03:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902658082 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659260 4.a time passed, the writer could not stop the compulsive need to surf the internet.                                5. the writer ]]> 2020-11-09 03:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659260 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659269 Aeryn (Text 2)
1. He started filling his free time with other Internet activities.
2. He was spending hours sitting in front of the bright screen.
3. He could not stop the compulsive need to surf the Internet. It interfered with his schoolwork and impacted his social and personal life
4. It drove his parents to despair and they started voicing their disapproval and tried to limit the time he spent online.
5. He could not resist the insatiable urge to peek at his email, browse through his blog feeds or check out videos on YouTube.
6. One night, he heard his parents blaming each other for his condition so he decided to conquer his addiction.
7. He agreed to limit his Internet usage to an hour every day. 
8. He was on the verge of giving up many times but he persevered.
9. He hang out with his friends and even played football again.
10. He helped his mother with the household chores like washing and cooking.
11. Eventually, after three months, he was finally able to kick the habit.]]> 2020-11-09 03:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659269 m11638572 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659584 1. The writer spent hours watching YouTube videos and playing online games.
2. He started filling his free time with other Internet activities.
3. He began to feel more at home with his online friends than his real friends because he spent hours sitting in front of the bright screen.
4. His compulsive need to surf the Internet interfered with his schoolwork and seriously impacted his social and personal life.
5. He sacrificed hours of sleep to spend time online, so getting up every morning was a struggle.
6. He heard his parents blame each other for his condition and it tugged on his heartstrings.
7. He finally realised how his addiction negatively affected his personal life and caused him to withdraw from social activities he used to enjoy.
8. He decided he had to conquer his addiction and resolved to make his parents happy.
9. He agreed to limit his Internet usage to an hour everyday.
10. He made an attempt to hang out with his friends and even played football again.
11. He helped his mother with the household chores.
12. He went for a long walk or watched a movie instead every time he felt the urge to sit in front of the computer.
13. He was finally able to kick the habit. 

]]> 2020-11-09 03:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659584 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659960 1. He spent hours on YouTube and playing online games. 
2. He started to fill his free time with other Internet activities and began to feel more at home with his online friends than his real friends. 
3. As time passed, he could not stop the compulsive need to surf the Internet and it interfered with his schoolwork and his social and personal life. 
4. As his addiction was getting out of control, the writer agreed to limit his Internet usage to an hour every day. 
5. At the same time, the writer made an attempt to hang out with his friends again and helped his mother with the household chores. 
6. The writer went for a long walk and watched a movie every time he felt the urge to sit in front of the computer. 
7. Eventually, the writer was able to kick the habit. ]]> 2020-11-09 03:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902659960 m4437539 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902660751 1.The writer spent hours watching youtube videos and playing online games
2.The writer also started filling his free time with other Internet activities
3.He started feeling more at home with online friends than his real friends 
4.As time passed,he could not stop the compulsive need to surf the Internet and this interfered with his schoolwork and impacted on his social and personal life
5.However,when his behaviour started affecting his relationship with his parents,he decided to limit his internet usage.
6.He started hanging out with his friends and started playing football again.
7.The writer even helped his mom with the household chores
8.Every time he had the urge to use the computer,he would go for a long walk or watched a movie instead
9.After three months,the writer was able to kick his addiction
9.]]> 2020-11-09 03:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902660751 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902661027 DILLON (text 2)
1. It interfered with his schoolwork and also impacted his social and personal life 
2. He spent hours watching plethora of YouTube videos and playing his favorite online games. 
3. He started filling his free time with internet activities like social networking and instant messaging. 
4. Getting up in the morning was a daily struggle. 
5. Caused the writer to withdraw from social activities that he used to enjoy. 
6. He limits his Internet usage to an hour every day
7. He attempts to hang out with his friends and started playing football again 
8. He helped his mom with the household chores like washing and cooking. 
9. He goes for a long walk or watches a movie instead]]> 2020-11-09 03:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902661027 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902661924 Jessel (Task 2)
1)... in watching YouTube videos and playing online games. 
2)The writer started filling his free time with other Internet activities. 
3)He began to feel closer to his online friends than his real friends. 
4)]]> 2020-11-09 03:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902661924 angadsingh1234 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902664074 1. the writer spent hours watching youtube videos and playing online games.
2. he started filling his free time with other Internet activities.
3. He began to feel more at home with his online friends than his real friends.
4. He could not stop the compulsive need to surf the Internet which interfered with his school work and impacted his social and personal life.
5.he also sacrificed hours of sleep just to spend time online and cause struggle for him to wake up daily in the morning.
6.once his addiction started to get out of control, he agreed to limit the Internet usage to an hour a day.
7.So the writer decided to hang out with his friends and start to play football again.
8. he helped his mother with chores
9.]]> 2020-11-09 03:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902664074 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902666578 1. The wirters spent hours watching Youtube videos and playing online games. 
2. He started to fill his free time with other Internet activities.
3. As time passed, the writer could not stop the compulsive need to surf the internet. 
4. It interfered with his schoolwork and seriously impacted on my social and personal life. 
5.





]]> 2020-11-09 03:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902666578 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902686250 1 the writer spent hours sitting in front of the bright screen
2he could not stop the compulsive need to surf the internet 
3it interfered with his schoolwork and seriously impacted on his social and personal life 
4 Getting up in the morning is a daily struggle for the writer 
5the writer's grades started deteriorating 
6it has caused the writer to withdraw from social activities that he used to enjoy
7 it has strained his relationship with his parents 
8 he agreed to limit his internet usage to an hour everyday 
9 he attempted to hangout with his friends and even played football again
10 he went for  a long walk or watched a movie when he has the urge to use the computer 

]]> 2020-11-09 03:36:31 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/902686250 g32416283 https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/919414852 DUE 14 NOVEMBER (SATURDAY)]]> 2020-11-13 07:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/g32416283/j98hyo0bib6ut65k/wish/919414852