ENGLISH III by XIMENA ANDREA BAHAMÓN RIOS

ABOUT MYSELF

2016-12-03 15:38:08 UTC

When i was a child I liveD in Cali and i used to played PLAY (VERB IN INFINITIVE) war of bombs of water, YOU NEED THE STRUCTURE OF SUBJECT PRONOUN + VERB + COMPLEMENT
too played police and thieves with my brother and my friend. A day i was in the park played in the swing i fell down and i broke one arm. I used to be my daddy's pamper and i accompany PAST OF THIS VERB him everywhere. I had some animals like turtles, rabbits, hamster and dog called Junior that yet lives whit me.

Name: Daniela Florez Carvajal
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CHILDHOOD AUTOBIOGRAPHY

2016-12-03 15:59:17 UTC

I was born in November in the beautiful city of Villavicencio, I lived there until I VERB TO BE UNTIL I WAS... had (1) a year, but I really grew up in Bogota, since I was six I used to spend a vacation with the rest of my family, I liked to play with my cousins HIDE AND SEEK hideously, I did some damage and broke a barbie and they did not let me stay there again.

Name: Claudia Parra Monroy
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CHILDHOOD AUTOBIOGRAPHY

2016-12-03 16:32:22 UTC

I was born in November in the beautiful city of Villavicencio, I lived there until I had (1) a year, but I really grew up in Bogota, since I was six I used to spend a vacation with the rest of my family, I liked to play with my cousins hideously, I did some damage and broke a barbie and they did not let me stay there again.

Name: Claudia Parra Monroy
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CHILDHOOD AUTOBIOGRAPHY

2016-12-03 19:35:08 UTC

I was born and raised in Bogota on April 20. I am the youngest of two brothers and I carry living in the same set WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY SET? for 25 years. YOU NEED TO FOLLOW THE STRUCTURE OF SUBJECT + VERB + COMPLEMENT I STUDIED ....Study in my childhood in the garden of this same set CHANGE THE WORD SET FOR PLACE that always been too good and bilingual THAT HAS ALWAYS BEEN BILINGUAL...... already in school and high school I was In schools in the district where I used to focus ON sport and in accounting even though the Accounting was not my forte. ONE OF MY STRENGHTS Later to CHECK THIS SENTENCE....graduate I decided to study film and tv In which I am finishing this race CARREER now and fulfilling a duty.

Sebastian Moscoso S.
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Hello, I want to tell you something about my childhood, I was born and grew up in a small town in the north of Tolima, called Libano Tolima; land of great writers and abundant coffee land, I was a boy that I was passionate about sports and more than all football CHECK THS SENTENCE.... played with more passion, I take YOU NEED THE PAST OF THIS VERB... each corner of this beautiful little town, going for the ecological trails of this beautiful region, I also had a childhood full of good friends that I still have, we played on the streets, HIDE AND SEEK hidden, yermis and where to leave the punch? there were unique and unforgettable moments and anecdotes that will remain forever.

2016-12-03 22:01:18 UTC

Sebastian Cardenas Gonzalez
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ABOUT MYSELF

yuliana_d21 — 2016-12-03 22:38:22 UTC

When I was five years old, With my family we were living in the city of Medellin, we had a house with a very big and beautiful garden, my parents had a business where they were working from Monday until Saturday until six o'clock in the afternoon, it was a business of bakery and the product mas MOST (TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATORS PLEASE) preferred of the clients was the bread marialuisa, my brothers and I were studying in the college the normal one?? I DO NOT UNDERSTAND THIS SENTENCE...., we were in the habit of spending the great part of the time together DO NOT USE TRANSLATOR. I DO NOT KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN HERE..., we were playing very much to the careers, when we stopPED studying the primary one, my parents decided to change of CHANGE THE CIRY ...the city, in the city of Bogota we sufferED very much the change of the climate, we were counting the days in order that the vacations should come WE EXPECTED VACATIONS TO COME..., in the vacations we were visiting my granny, she was a very tender and happy woman, my favorite game was to sing opposite to the mirror.

Name: Yuliana Quintero Duque
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My Childhood

2016-12-03 23:21:33 UTC

My name is Cristian Yara, i was born in Bogota in the hospital Lorencita Villegas in 1984(one thousand nine hundred eighty four), i have 2 (Two) brothers and i am the elderly, i studied in the military school Caldas all my primary and high school, in 2009 i had a beautiful daughter and her name is Camila Yara, then i graduated systems technologist, I remember when i was a child i liked to practice karate and mount in skates with my friends , and when i was teenager i like to go to rock to the park, the most precious memory i have of my childhood is a travel to Cartagena with all my family to know the sea i also remember that when i was a child, the people ask me what i wanted to be when i was great and i answered that i wanted to work washing cars.

Name: Cristian Yara
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About Myself

2016-12-04 00:04:31 UTC

Hello my name is Wilder. I'm 26 years old.SO HERE ONLY PAST SIMPLE I've lived in Cali since i was born and until 21 years old, but now i live in Bogotá. I used to play beisbol and futbol AS A CHILD...of child. I WAS ALWAYS...Always i was good in the school. i used to stay in the computer for a long time. I have got two sister, my mother YOU NEED TO WRITE THE VERB EITHER PAST OR PRESENT, CHECK THIS SENTECE...be live, but my padre is died. I loveD my motorcycle and I sometimes rode bicycle. I work as consultant y trainer Adobe, in center trainer called nivelPRO, i would like finilize FINISH (DO NOT USE TRANSLATORS)my career in graphics design. I like to travel, I had the opportunity to travel to Chile and Mexico In 2012 and 2016 respectively. I love to train people in what I know, video, web, photography and much more. I used to be thinner before, now I'm a little heavier.

Name: Wilder Bolaños Gómez
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My childhood

2016-12-04 00:15:47 UTC

I was born in Zipaquira and I was born ON at 3th May 1993, I grew up in a farm in Sopo Cundinamarca, I studied in Porlicarpa School on Sopo my primary but after 5 years I moved to other School by name CEIS Colsubsidio. When I was seven years old my family used to gather at my grandmothres house for December my sister and I used to play tennis and we used to ride my bike on weekends with my cousins,I liked DO NOT USE THE "TO" HERE...to animals for children for this we had many dogs in us farm, ,my favorite video game was Mario bros,I used to train football when I was IN school, I was one of the best in the sports class, My friends and I used to play after doing homework, occasionally I used to go Sopo gymmasium. I don’t remember in this moment other activities and memories.

Name: Diego Nicolas Prieto Chunza
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ABOUT MYSELF

2016-12-04 00:16:29 UTC

DO NOT INTRODUCE BY WRITING THIS, YOU COULD HAVE SAID "I AM ..."I John rodriguez when was a child I used to played PLAY IN INFINITIVE, YOU NEED THE VERB IN INFINITVE.. all day and to fulltime, YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE... used to played VERB IN INFINITIVE much soccer, the game of hidden HIDE AND SEEK, basketball and I really liked it I LIKED TO RIDE.. ride a bike, YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE...was very undisciplined at school also used to have much friends, many of they follow being my friends in the present. I didn´t used to VERB IN INFINITIVE...ate soup I did not like, I used to visited VERB... every Sunday at my grandparents I didn´t use to like this plan since only thought I was in play but in the house of my grandparents, I used to seen much TV my programs favorite they were Dragon ball the super champions, pokemon always I used to seen these programs with my brother while my parent workeded

NAME: JOHN EDISON RODRIGUEZ
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Felix Cardoso

2016-12-04 00:51:23 UTC

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ABOUT MY SELF

2016-12-04 00:53:15 UTC

I was born in Bogota When I was 8 years old we lived where my grandmother YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE used to play all of our cousins together. Then when I was 15 we moved to our own house where we HAVE liveD (PRESENT PERFECT) until today, there we used to ride my bike with my brother. When we were 18 we bought our first Play Station and we used to play in it until dawn. Then my dad bought a car and we used to practice. Some of my favorite things are sports, horror movies, and computer content.

Name:Carlos Chitiva
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MY CHILDHOOD: My name is Felipe Palomo i was born in bogota, this is my history about my childhood: When I was child I used to HAVE (REMEMBER TO USE THE VERB IN INFINITIVE)having fun with my cousin, we used to ride a bike, also we used to play soccer, we used to play basketball, I used to stay in a grandmom’s house with my father,aunt, grandfather, and I used to be happy with them. In my first vacations I stayed AT to piscilago, I was very happy and enjoy because IT was my first experience in water slides, CHECK THIS SENTENCE also because the park has animals, exotic plants, water pools, restaurants, also weather was perfect for the moment.Hooooooo Wow aweson!!

2016-12-04 01:11:00 UTC

NAME: Felipe Palomo
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My name is Yesid Carvajal My childhood was very quiet, I liked the simple things, like playing in the parck BE CAREFUL WITH SPELLING, biking and watching TV.My favorite series was the Simpsons and spent whole evenings in front of the TV. Iliked painting and spending time with my father.I always liked the skateboard, but I suffred several falls and did not reassemble . The vanilla ice cream was always my favorite and I could never had a pet.I always lived in Bogota, when I was a child I lived with my mom, my dad and my two sisters.When child I loved much listen Rock Music, but my parents not liked, so just listened to school with my friends, during the school I had long hair, and enjoyed attend concerts Rock, and my parents are angry with me As a child I always wanted to be a bomberman, becauseG an uncle was a bomberman and his cars seemed great.This is WHAT I remember most from my childhood.YESID ABAD CARVAJAL ROMERO

2016-12-04 01:20:21 UTC

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CHILD AUTOBIOGRAPHYI will tell you a small part of my childhood, when I was 5 years old I remember that I liked playing with the garden mates in the yard. On vacation I remember that I always used to visit my parents on the farm and helped feed the animals like cows, horses, chickens, rabbits. I had in the garden to paint with the temperas TRY TO WRITE IT DIFFERENTLY. When I was in the garden my mother would always pick me up and then we would do the homework.USE PAST SIMPLE HERE NOT WOULD At home I usually experimented with playing different games with my friends. I had several friends with whom I performed my tasks. I used to visit my friends in the afternoons. I lived in Florence for 8 years and then moved to Bogotá where I have been living for 16 years. I am currently studying at Unitec and I hope to be able to speak English.LEONEL FIGUEROA

2016-12-04 01:30:28 UTC

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ABOUT MY SELF

2016-12-04 01:48:32 UTC

I was born in bogota, I lived whit my mother and my father in Suba in the house of my grandmother. For four years YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE were only my parents and I, after my first sister arrived. We used to live in the house of my grandmother, but now we live in our own house.

I had a wonderful childhood. I’m the oldest of four brothers with whom I have been very close to. We used to play together all time. I used to care of them when my mother wasn’t around. When I was child, we Used to watch cartoons and movies for long time. There, it began my taste MY INTEREST for cinema, and everything that surrounds the world of films.
My father used to travel for work, He always took us with him. I used to have change school many times, but I didn’t like it, because I had to leaved my friends.

The good thing about this was that I knew many cities, Barranquilla, Ibague, Cartagena, Cali and others. I knew many more friends, and cultures. So I began to see the positive of this.
I learned to see the good side of things.
Marcela Castiblanco Velandia
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2016-12-04 02:07:30 UTC

About myself

My name is Diana marcela romero. I was born and raised in Bogota on January 27th. I am the eldest of my brother spent most of the time together playing with friends of the neighborhood and on the part of my father I have three half brothers with whom I do not see very often and I lived in the neighborhood san marcos during my childhood after we went to live To the garces navas neighborhood where I live now for 7 years and the person I most want to always carry in my heart that is to fulfill a year of deceased in December of this year that is my beautiful mother. I AM SORRY TO HEAR THIS.

I study YOU NEED THE PAST HERE. at the college consolation primary and bachiderato at the school of the alamos and later I decided to study at a beauty academy to graduate from stylist and to have more job opportunity So I decided to study management of airlines and travel agencies now that I'm about to finish my career and live with my partner infree union for two years who I love you too.

Name : Diana Marcela Romero Castro
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About my self

2016-12-04 02:37:39 UTC

My name is Frank Jimenez, I am 34 years old, I was born in girardot cundinamarca on December 11, 1981, my family was humble, but happy, we have always been very cheerful and charismatic. I did my primary and high school in district schools, I was an excellent student where always excelled by my good qualifications good behavior, however, at that time YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE only studied, worth the clarification. SUBJECT PRONOUN. Always play a lot of football and I was selected Girardot and Cundinamarca, is more to be in the professional soccer team of the second division of Colombian professional football, in the Girardot Futbol Club, a dream that I fail to meet, but I have many experiences and grateful memories.

Name: Frank Alberto Jimenez Medina
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ABOUT MY SELF

2016-12-04 02:44:03 UTC

My name is Danna Díaz

I was born in a town far from the city, in Puerto Leguizamo (Putumayo) My birthday is at 29 June. I have three siblings, two sister and one brother.

From and early age I took care of them.

I'm always interested in their personal lives, studies, jobs and their love lives.

I'm the oldest of them.

when I was eight years old

I useD to live in Puerto Carreño (Vichada) but Now I live in Bogotá.

My stepfather is a military man and we always went from city to city. And the weather was always very hot.

When I was a child my favorite dish was pasta. I used to be babysit,SO YOU DON'T BABYSIT ANYMORE? but now I have a beautiful nephew of five year old.

In December my siblings and I enjoyed singing Christmas carols and the food, we always decorated the Christmas tree together. We enjoy meeting for these dates, always had many friends and went to many parties, but now we study and talk about our future plans We have been always together.

I always lived with my family, but now I live with my partner. I usually visit them on weekends.

In my childhood I used to IT IS BETTER TO SAY I USED TO GO like go out. But now I like TO travel, and know sides new. I enjoyed meeting new friends and played “ponchados”, Chicle Americano, soccer, marbles, yoyo, and jaz., But Now I like travel, learn about other cultures, meet people and sightseeing. My favorite games are play Wii, soccer with my nephew, my favorite TV show is the “Simpsons”. Today I enjoy watching movies with a good dish of food. When I was a little girl liked painted and drew and it’s still one of my favorite hobbies today.

Name: Danna Marcela Diaz
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Life since my childhood When I was 8 years old I liked to played the teacher with my cousins, they were the student. I also liked going to ranch with my grandfather and go up the trees while my grandfather cut them fall down. That was a lot of fun but at the same time very dangerous. In my house I liked to play with my mom and my brothers hiding in the nihgt because we turned out the lights and the game was more exciting. My favorite hobby was to cut magazine clothes to stick them somewhere that would later become my clothing store to played with my firends. My childhood time was very happy and fun because I knew how to enjoy the good things in life, like family, friends and time. Name: DIANA ARARAT DIAZ

people8911 — 2016-12-04 02:50:30 UTC

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