https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021 Feedback about Animal Rescue en-us 2021-11-14 22:33:05 UTC 2021-11-23 03:58:22 UTC hello@padlet.com imunoz77 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1889729446 2021-11-14 22:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1889729446 choward109 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1904154762 Photo Essay/Infographic: Make sure you spell Infographic correctly.
Also, I think you could add a few more statistics and facts to your infographic as it only has the two. Also, can you make sure that we can see the whole name of WIRES and then RSPCA??

INFORMATION: I can see that you took my advice to focus on mammals and marsupials. I like what you have written in your information but it doesn't quite match to the questions. You still need to research all the ways that marsupials are threatened. We found that information together when we sat down together last week e.g natural disasters, roads, deforestations etc

CALL TO ACTION: Where is this???

BIBLIOGRAPHY: We went over this on Friday about how to write a bibliography. Use the links I sent you in an email as a start.  Use Cite This For Me

]]> 2021-11-21 08:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1904154762 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1905244716 Presentation:
I found that your presentation could of been a bit more expressive as you said a lot of ums and uhs. I also found that you often were lost for words and resulted to reading out the presentation. This could be fixed by having palm cards or notes.

Website:
I found your website to be quite intriguing however there were a few things that could be fixed. Some of them I already know you will be fixing but just double check for spelling errors and making sure it makes sense.]]> 2021-11-22 04:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1905244716 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907515326 Website: 
i was blown away by some of the facts that you mentioned. Mainly the one where you say there is more mice/squirrels than the mammals in the world!

I would suggest putting more information inside of the call-to-action and making the writing a little smaller and darker.

I also suggest putting in a bit more pop into it! Meaning more colour instead of just putting in yellow for most of the background]]> 2021-11-23 03:47:28 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907515326 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907521874 Hi Isabella! I’m sybilla. I think your topic is really important and is something that needs to be talked about. But i also think that the background could have been more related to the text

What made you so concerned about this topic?


]]> 2021-11-23 03:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907521874 https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907530128 Thank you all for the feedback I will change the background and improve the call to action.
Kind Regards ]]> 2021-11-23 03:58:06 UTC https://padlet.com/imunoz77/Showcase2021/wish/1907530128