Referencing by Nick White https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing Made with the help of a typing monkey en-us 2016-09-01 13:28:28 UTC 2016-09-26 10:13:36 UTC hello@padlet.com Claims made are not supported by suitable evidence of reading nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121074505 2016-09-01 13:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121074505 Please choose a more judicious source of literature nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075074 2016-09-01 13:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075074 You have a significant number of referencing errors within the paper nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075394 2016-09-01 13:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075394 Punctuation of citations in the body of text is inaccurate nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075788 2016-09-01 13:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121075788 The information you have included is correct but you have not referenced the source ed nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076312 2016-09-01 13:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076312 This text contains large sections of unsupported narrative nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076438 2016-09-01 13:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076438 Please ensure citations match your reference section nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076578 2016-09-01 13:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076578 Please include a reference list not a bibliography nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076774 2016-09-01 13:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121076774 Your reference list needs to be listed by surname/family name. nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121077230 2016-09-01 13:37:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121077230 Please use the APA full guidelines for reference and citation support  nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121078042 2016-09-01 13:39:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/121078042 Please access the library rather than Google https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124366581 2016-09-16 14:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124366581 Although you are using some reliable sources eg Parkinsons Society you also need to use published academic literature. catejohns https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124416400 2016-09-16 16:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124416400 Although NHS Choices is reliable it should not replace the need to use published academic sources. This is because the former is only a simplified source. catejohns https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124416828 2016-09-16 16:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124416828 Some of your sources are more credible than others, a more judicious selection is advised. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124763532 2016-09-19 14:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124763532 You consistently cite the reference in a sentence of its' own so it is unclear what information it is intended to support. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124763897 2016-09-19 14:34:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124763897 If you use an abbreviation it should be cited in full at the first mention followed by the abbreviation in brackets, thereafter you can use the abbreviation. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124764610 2016-09-19 14:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/124764610 Don't forget to support all your ideas in the text with references https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/125504603 2016-09-21 17:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/125504603 You need to improve citing your in text references. You can do this by noting how published texts do this, using the APA guidelines, or try reading the sentence out loud and miss out anything in brackets to see if it makes sense. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/126308708 2016-09-26 10:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/referencing/wish/126308708