Effective Feedback by MsArvidson https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7 What actionable feedback would you give these students? en-us 2019-10-16 03:48:51 UTC 2023-04-15 17:13:12 UTC hello@padlet.com What actionable feedback could you give Student #1? alarvidson https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398284471 You might want to use this framework: 
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]]> 2019-10-16 18:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398673560 I noticed that you drew two of the dog's legs. Make sure to include all four legs so that we can have a realistic looking dog. I have seen you draw some very life-like animals in the past and I know you can do that again. https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746223 2019-10-16 22:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746223 Shana https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746338 I noticed your dog has a human-looking mouth; take another look at the picture and try drawing a muzzle instead. Add two legs. I noticed your dog's coat has two colors. That shows depth and sophisticated coloring.]]> 2019-10-16 22:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746338 Great coloring. https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746451 2019-10-16 22:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746451 Sarah https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746869 I noticed that you used grey detail in the body to add texture. I wonder how more of that texture can be used so that the drawing meets standard for detail.

]]> 2019-10-16 22:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398746869 Shana https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398747193 Your drawing is proportional and has the shape of real dogs. I wonder what is happening in the background? Reread the rubric and provide the contrasting background.]]> 2019-10-16 22:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398747193 Sarah https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398747423 The red is very red! Good job]]> 2019-10-16 22:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398747423 Amy alarvidson https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398748856 Good effort. ]]> 2019-10-16 22:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398748856 Change your proportions on your dog's legs so that they are more realistic, you could give them knees. https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398755379 2019-10-16 22:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398755379 I like you dog's red tongue https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398755842 2019-10-16 22:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/alarvidson/j4fadjfj38l7/wish/398755842