2. No closing

3. Bad opening

4. Capitalization and grammar errors

5. Rude

2. Bad opening/greeting or closing

3. Rude

4. Capitalization Errors In greeting

5. Grammar is incorrect

2.Bad opening and not capitalized.

3.Rude and short body

4.Closing is bad it is just her name

5. incomplete sentences

2. subject doesn't make sense

3. tone was bad

4. it was demanding

5. not taking responsibility

6. no opening

7. no closing

8. no signiture

9. looks unfinished

10. body of email is too small

1. It is rude

2.Has no closing

3. Vague subject line

4.Undescriptive

5.Demanding

6.Incomplete subject line

7.No caps

8.Incomplete sentences

9.Not descriptive

10.Blaming

2. sounds like a threat

3. No capitalization

4. never finished the sentence

5. passing the blame

2. It is mean

3.no closing

4. incomplete sentances

5. Bad grammer

- Subject line is not complete

-Very rude email

-Not descriptive

-Needs more proper capitalization

-Needs a better closing

-Needs better punctuation

-Needs gooder grammer

2. Needs More Capitals

3. Needs a better closing

4. Accusing

The tone is rude and demanding. The subject is really bad not champions blood. The signature isn't a signature. It says “hi mrs. newton” ←no caps.

2. No closing

3. Sounds a little rude

4. Grammar errors

5. Capitalization errors

6. Needs more detail

2.Grammar

3.Tone

4.rude

5.Selffish

6.ending