Young Writers' Conference by Jessica Toal https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07 en-us 2018-09-17 20:39:17 UTC 2019-11-02 01:30:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405450777 forks are the superior utensil]]> 2019-11-01 14:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405450777 annika_k_gans https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405451541 What if people no longer cared]]> 2019-11-01 14:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405451541 ok https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405451903 2019-11-01 14:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405451903 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452124 experience ]]> 2019-11-01 14:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452124 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452177 gesture]]> 2019-11-01 14:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452177 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452271 it's me]]> 2019-11-01 14:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452271 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452397 trauma]]> 2019-11-01 14:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452397 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452575 @lindsay_cmb
@dilara_h.t]]> 2019-11-01 14:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452575 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452723 after death, and only after death, are you truly Alive]]> 2019-11-01 14:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452723 salma_ragheb https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452769 Subwat]]> 2019-11-01 14:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452769 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452795 failed lovers]]> 2019-11-01 14:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405452795 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453097 He felt dead before he fell.]]> 2019-11-01 14:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453097 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453112 Anthropodermic bibliopegy ]]> 2019-11-01 14:47:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453112 mikael_a_kayklass https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453125 It looks like him. The muzzle, the big ears, the way the mouth moves when eating. Raven was a smokey grey, and this rabbit is lighter, but their pelts shift over their muscles in much the same manner. 

]]> 2019-11-01 14:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453125 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453137 the baguettes are the best bread]]> 2019-11-01 14:47:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453137 After women, flowers are the most divine creations. ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453324 2019-11-01 14:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453324 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453424 The floor didn't taste like jello. It didn't feel like it either.]]> 2019-11-01 14:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453424 annika_k_gans https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453760 She shoved a fork full of noodles into her mouth.]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453760 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453801 Anthropodermic bibliopegy ]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405453801 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454079 My father said it first, and then my mother relied with those four words I'd been aching to hear for years upon years.
- "I love you."
- "I want a divorce" ]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454079 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454083 I didn't wanna give up my seat]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454083 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454142 The stranger was still staring at me. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454142 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454159 She looked longily , her gaze never fazing , looking deep into my soul .She knew I had wronged her and she knew this would be the very last time ....]]> 2019-11-01 14:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454159 An empty heart https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454779 He sat there with both of them in front of him knowing that any decision he made would crush his heart in a way it had never been crushed before.]]> 2019-11-01 14:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405454779 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455064 "My death will doubtless be lonely and unremarkable. What would you have me do about it?"]]> 2019-11-01 14:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455064 Kiss me thru the phone https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455235 😳]]> 2019-11-01 14:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455235 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455309 A man proposing to a woman on her phone]]> 2019-11-01 14:50:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455309 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455329 If I’m white and middle class, are my issues and conflicts valid?]]> 2019-11-01 14:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455329 vous ne comprenez sûrement pas ce que j’ai écris mais bon j’ai une idée https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455358 2019-11-01 14:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455358 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455712 the chemistry teacher didn't know the power he held until he came to class one day with his handlebar moustache and clear glasses, and saw 30 faces with handlebar moustaches and clear glasses staring back at him. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455712 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455751 Her tear stained face deceived others as she gleamed brightly from deep within her soul , although her deceptive nature fooled all but me ...]]> 2019-11-01 14:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405455751 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456222 In denial of her feelings, stuck with anxiety she gazes at the car honking away right outside her house. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456222 biancazancan https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456245 “Who are you really?”]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456245 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456515 ash. the sky filled with screams of the injured. looking around trying to comprehend the situation upon my shoulders, i notice the burning poppies. black liquid ceramic dripping on the burning floor. 🌹]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456515 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456562 Without thinking I brushed the mosquito from the place above her eyebrow. I felt the heat flood my cheeks. The causal intimacy of the gesture terrified me. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456562 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456564 Everyone around her was tired and yawning, It was 7am and the city was just waking up, the bus started to get packed.  ]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456564 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456690 he was a yute, she was a shorty, it was never meant to be. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456690 Curse on the Black Glass jai_sharma https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456731 Hexsquare System]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456731 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456767     He was genetically predisposed to become a successful failure.]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456767 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456771 Regret showing up to a writer's conference]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456771 Yoinks ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456792 bones curdled and cracked, women weeped on the streets for husbands they did not want]]> 2019-11-01 14:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456792 josephkopun https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456801 The sky was stained black from the ash of a thousand fires, turning the air a crimson orange...]]> 2019-11-01 14:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456801 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456822 "Oh, if you stabbed me, my foolish bleeding heart would paint you crimson."]]> 2019-11-01 14:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456822 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456968 Having popular friends was great until they called me racist because I was white and privileged.]]> 2019-11-01 14:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405456968 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457147 once, i found you at the outskirts of chicago.]]> 2019-11-01 14:53:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457147 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457238 My sister was gripping my hand so tight it was starting to turn blue. I wanted to tell her to letgo but my mouth was paralyzed with terror]]> 2019-11-01 14:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457238 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457584 Life before power power before death strength before death death before strength ]]> 2019-11-01 14:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457584 poppi_fellapellegrino https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457729 You're one of the mad ones, never say a commonplace thing]]> 2019-11-01 14:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457729 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457961 All it took was a few seconds ]]> 2019-11-01 14:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405457961 poppi_fellapellegrino https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458012 Maybe I'll just restart, restart in heaven]]> 2019-11-01 14:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458012 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458053 I found the love of my life in a gas station bathroom halfway across the country]]> 2019-11-01 14:54:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458053 jai_sharma https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458138 The Hexsquare System is an all-magical world ruled in tyranny and Dark magic.]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458138 The dentists office is awfully boring. https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458288 2019-11-01 14:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458288 Dried Sunflowers ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458302 Dried sunflowers littered the floor. That was when she knew something was wrong. Her mother never let her precious flowers wilt, let alone shed their petals on the floor. She rushed forward, moving as fast as her little legs could take her. The back door was wide open, the window smashed open and long, splintered scratches running down it. Red spots scattered around the room. She smelt pine - a scent she only interacted with at the Woodmar market. Foreigner. Intruder. Beast. They would tell her later. 
    “Mum?” She called out, her high-pitched voice wavering. No one but the wind replied. She crept through her house. The couch was shredded, her mother’s paintings had been torn

]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458302 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458344 I bit into the apple. It bit back. I screamed. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458344 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458445 I have no heart. They wrenched it from my chest when I was two, a beating bloodied thing, almost complete save for the tiniest little hole in the left atrium, just bigger than the nail on my thumb. “Defective from the start,” one of the bandits laughed. Their face was smeared with blood and dark, and their face crinkled when they sneered, like their skin was only paper.]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458445 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458604 Cold hazy eyes stared back at him ....]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458604 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458797 Death before life, or so they tell me]]> 2019-11-01 14:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458797 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458850 One minute my head was underwater and liquid panic was burning my lungs and the next, I woke up on the Moon. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458850 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458856 nuclear burn]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458856 Life fakhiraboaba https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458932  My life is a game waiting for that beginning whistle. That game is my destiny, my future and where I will find my passions.]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458932 An empty heart https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458948 He sat there with both of them in front of him knowing that any decision he made would crush his heart in a way it had never been crushed before.]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405458948 My math class is awfully boring https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459148 2019-11-01 14:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459148 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459319 It was 12:00am and the bus stopped moving, without looking ahead she stopped and fell forward onto the man with a trench coat and the dark black glasses. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459319 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459334 You gave us wax wings and told us to fly at the sun.]]> 2019-11-01 14:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459334 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459509 My first lover sat in the playground slide as she told me I wasn’t enough as she kissed someone else. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459509 j_m_blais88 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459638 There it was again, the same black car that had been circling the apartment complex for days. A man in a briefcase stepped out.]]> 2019-11-01 14:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459638 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459746 Granny hides things in fruit sometimes...]]> 2019-11-01 14:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459746 jai_sharma https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459919 There is no Daylight in the Hexsquare System; only Darkness.]]> 2019-11-01 14:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405459919 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460301 I recognized it almost instantly, as I stepped off the bus onto the platform. It had the same pale yellow color that had taunted me in dreams for so many years. The silver handle was worn and slightly more rusted than the last time I had seen it. The smiley face that I had scratched into the wood when I was seven was still visible underneath the shadow of the handle. I raised my hand to knock on the door, my palms sweating and arms shaking, after some hesitation my knuckle made contact with the door.]]> 2019-11-01 14:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460301 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460572 Life is unpredictable and in this thing called life you just have to man up and face it....  ]]> 2019-11-01 14:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460572 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460627 The chef’s knife slipped in my hand, just missing the onion. My left thumb rolled off the counter and hit the ground with a thud. Dinner was served in 10, I kept cutting. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460627 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460678 “Even if you walk backwards, there will be no hole in the sky” My nana always said, her withered voice whispering in the halls. I never understood her, until I stepped into her hands and fell down the rabbit hole.]]> 2019-11-01 14:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405460678 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461030 My math class is awfully boring. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461030 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461067 "Why do you have a fact for everything?"

"Because I have a book of 1000 facts. Want to borrow it?"]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461067 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461255 But it is inescapable, and terror knocks]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461255 bltclowater https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461288 Do you ever feel, as you're peering over the ledge above a large drop, about the way it puts a cloud over your mind, and you can't think about anything but what would happen if you took the plunge?]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461288 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461297 My life has always been sheltered, all I’ve known is the insides of my ghetto apartment and nothing more. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461297 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461306 My first lover sat on the rocks and told me I wasn’t enough as she kissed another. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461306 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461575 A soft hum buzzed through the dirt streets. ]]> 2019-11-01 14:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461575 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461598 I took long strides in attempt to avoid stepping on the dusty bones at the bottom of the Catacombs.]]> 2019-11-01 15:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461598 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461865 Periodt sis 😳]]> 2019-11-01 15:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461865 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461896 His hands reeked of soap and old blood.]]> 2019-11-01 15:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405461896 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462066 The boy stood in the center of the road, waiting, and all eyes were on him.]]> 2019-11-01 15:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462066 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462212 My sister was gripping onto my hand so tight, it  was turning blue. I wanted to tell her to let go but my mouth was paralyzed with fear.]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462212 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462223 smoking this cigarette reminded me of the times my dad would come home and beat my mom for her selling her body to sell work. i sat and watched as i knew my beating would come. for being a battri ]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462223 The mistake I think about every night https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462403 I knew I had forked up telling her about my day when she told me about her feelings.]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462403 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462496 If I don’t see Bigfoot in the next fifteen minutes, I’m leaving.]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462496 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462543 I reached into my skull and pulled out my brain, and took a bite out of the demon that made me cry.]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462543 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462559 I bit down on the rag and dug the chopsticks into my eyes. “It is I!” I screeched, “the asian Oedipus!”]]> 2019-11-01 15:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462559 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462936 Drenched in rain, she sat down to succumb to her deep desires ]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405462936 jai_sharma https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463007 The witches and wizards of the tyrannical Phosphorescence are permitted to carry long and Dark magical blades; the impoverished population, however, are only permitted by law to carry small, disposable knives.]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463007 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463090 A terrain of ice and abandoned hope- a place where every living thing came to freeze, wither and die slowly. Perhaps this is where a monstrosity such as himself truly belonged.]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463090 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463166 In Paris, subways can be very dangerous, even for french people. be careful]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463166 jackdlwilson https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463221 When they walked through the door, he knew it was over]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463221 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463227 Ok. I know I shouldn't have. But sometimes you just have to eat ten hot dogs and go on with your life.]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463227 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463292 the industrial revolution and it's consequences are disastrous for the human race ]]> 2019-11-01 15:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463292 :) j_m_blais88 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463400 There was a loud bang from the attic, it was either another raccoon, or whatever produced the footprints in my backyard. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:03:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463400 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463684 crawling under the desk regretting my decision i know i had failed my mission. and lost my reward. lost my family]]> 2019-11-01 15:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463684 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463920 She popped the blister and draught beer came out]]> 2019-11-01 15:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463920 fakhiraboaba https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463992 Love is a cage and I am the keyholder but who do I let in?]]> 2019-11-01 15:04:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405463992 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464290 I inhaled the spicy steam. The kitchen air was thick with garlic and chilli powder. My last dinner here—was I ready to leave it behind?]]> 2019-11-01 15:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464290 j_m_blais88 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464391 There it was again, the same black car that's been circling the apartment complex for days on end. A man with a briefcase stepped out.]]> 2019-11-01 15:04:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464391 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464441 Standing tall at a mighty 4'11", I hate the sunflowers in the field before me. They're strong and confident and seem to reach the sky. Angrily I think, even the flowers are taller than me.]]> 2019-11-01 15:04:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464441 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464471 Cats are evil and I have the scars to prove it.]]> 2019-11-01 15:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464471 My math class is awfully boring. The chairs are uncomfortable, but so is everything else. I watch the sweat drip down Mr. Jeffrey’s head, down his neck, and onto the ugly tiled floor. https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464754 2019-11-01 15:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464754 I was late for class https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464765 After a long night of crying myself to sleep, I woke up to the sound of my music I had left on as I drifted off]]> 2019-11-01 15:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405464765 symphony of sickness magsjensen https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405465458 the first thing you hear is beeping.
over and over, like a beat.
beep, beep beep, beep.
it wakes you up.

]]> 2019-11-01 15:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405465458 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405466792 man door hand hook car door]]> 2019-11-01 15:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405466792 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405466821 had the car struck her she would have been forced onto the rain covered floor and that would be gross]]> 2019-11-01 15:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405466821 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405467539 had the car struck her she would have been forced onto the rain covered floor and that would be gross. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405467539 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405467805 Why does granny have a giant ant in her attic?]]> 2019-11-01 15:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405467805 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405468000 There's always been something about the stars that fascinated us; not just their beauty, but the stories you could create with them- if you had the imagination for it.]]> 2019-11-01 15:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405468000 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405468233 I know! I’ll feed the teddie bear to the crow!]]> 2019-11-01 15:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405468233 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405469522 (From Milo): The air was bristles and tinsels, but the clouds were tongue and teeth.]]> 2019-11-01 15:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405469522 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470155 I want a church girl who go to church and read her bible]]> 2019-11-01 15:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470155 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470180 The bigger my hoops the less I want to rake these leaves.]]> 2019-11-01 15:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470180 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470217 we live in a society ]]> 2019-11-01 15:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405470217 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405472684 I turned the shiny, silver restroom dryer up for the first time. It was a breath of fresh air.]]> 2019-11-01 15:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405472684 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476203 My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476203 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476265 aboriginal ]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476265 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476342 they have a connection? ]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476342 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476368 The woman has a hoarse voice and wears too much perfume. She’s tired, perhaps unwell, but trying to cover it up. Slurred voice suggests intoxication—substance problem?]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476368 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476421 piquette doesn't like the town ]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476421 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476435 Vanessa is a push over. She doesn’t stand up to her mom in order to skip Saturday night dances at the flamingo ]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476435 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476510 Vanessa: Feels that her life and the town she lives in has changed minutely and that she isnt able to have a lot of fun because of it]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476510 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476524 Piquette is a drifter yet came back to their home town really to go to this dance ]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476524 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476680 Cool passage, accents are very useful]]> 2019-11-01 15:27:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476680 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476832 Vanessa is sheltered by her mother ]]> 2019-11-01 15:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476832 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476859 With the rare use of description, it gives the reader a chance to create their own character, looks, etc. only going off one detail - her voice. which allows the reader to have freedom within the authors controlled world of the novel. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:28:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476859 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476966 Her mother has some sort of habit which affects her voice. Smoking? Is she drunk? Is her supposed addiction caused by the loss of the child’s dad? ]]> 2019-11-01 15:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405476966 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477012 the vulnerability between to characters]]> 2019-11-01 15:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477012 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477682 Piquette is a drifter and travels around yet she came back to the town for the dance out of clearly sentimental reasons ]]> 2019-11-01 15:29:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477682 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477715 Piquettes a heavy smoker. She uses the perfume to cover it up. She seems to bounce from place to place.]]> 2019-11-01 15:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477715 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477789 Piquette: Is confident and blunt; doesn't read social cues well and is almost bragging]]> 2019-11-01 15:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477789 elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477810 Seeming contrast between “it stinks” and “harsh over-sweetness” conveys complicated feelings about Piquette. Her name alone is also evocative....]]> 2019-11-01 15:29:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405477810 The Rt of Description point https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478250 “the same hoarseness” tells the reader that this persons voice is that way opposed to “her voice was hoarse” which may mean she is sick or perhaps under the influence or depressed]]> 2019-11-01 15:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478250 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478500 I'm guessing Vanessa's  mum is too clingy making Vanessa more uptight and well mannered ,but Piquette is more carefree and perhalso grew up in a rough background  ]]> 2019-11-01 15:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478500 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478622 Vaness is more passive and observant.]]> 2019-11-01 15:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478622 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478707 Vanessa’s childish]]> 2019-11-01 15:31:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405478707 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479340 These characters are obviously acquainted with one another (perhaps they're old friends). I feel like Piquette is experiencing a dose of wanderlust; usually, those who wander are known to be looking for something, most often in a personal sense. Perhaps Piquette is trying to find herself. Vanessa seems to be judging Piquette, perhaps because of how Piquette has changed since she last saw her and that Piquette is not the girl that Vanessa once knew.]]> 2019-11-01 15:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479340 This is so cool https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479343 This is so cool]]> 2019-11-01 15:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479343 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479349 over-sweet perfume can refer to the over sweetness of the girl]]> 2019-11-01 15:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479349 elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479827 Maybe Vanessa’s resentfulness about her own life is making her seem like she’s resentful about Piquette. Laurence’s description is allowing reader to interpret. Makes me want to read more of this story and relationship. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405479827 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405484920
Left phone on the subway or bus on their way home]]> 2019-11-01 15:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405484920 isaac_maas https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485539 I think Emerson is a little embarrassed that he lost his phone, and that creates tension in the house. What escalates the tension is when the police officers stand outside the door, as his parents lecture him.]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485539 annika_k_gans https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485648 Police car? Why!?]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485648 magsjensen https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485651 I think Emerson’s parents are like mine- really strict. They were hiding that they lost their phone from their parents- maybe their parents would punish them? I think someone stole their phone because of the police car in the driveway, and maybe that person did something bad on it.]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485651 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485780 There is building of anxiety as the story progresses ]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485780 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485893 Obviously he’s lost his phone which is stressful enough but there’s this added layer of stress at trying to anticipate the reactions that his strict parents have. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485893 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485897 Shows that the character values greetings]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485897 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485919 Emerson was flipping phones and accidentally gave his own to a customer not knowing how they would end up using it]]> 2019-11-01 15:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405485919 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486205 it’s developed through descriptive language ]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486205 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486306 Narrator speaks of how “white parents” would act, creating racial/cultural tension. Does narrator resent their difference in some way? Or the difficulties it causes?]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486306 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486319 The info is coming in bits and pieces so you never rlly know the full story ]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486319 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486335 Arrested for no have phone?]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486335 elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486351 Tension developed by: resentfulness of protagonist (“the way I imagined white parents would ask”; “mom informs me”); short sentences, some separated into paragraphs of their own; reader begins to wonder why Emerson is so “still in shock”, as if we missed something. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486351 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486440 Tension is built by slowly escalating the level of trouble Emerson is in and then descalating it over and over.]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486440 isaac_maas https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486460 Emerson tried to not lose his cool, and that shows character development]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486460 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486523 Emerson seems afraid of his parents hence why he was already thinking about telling them a lie about his missing phone. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486523 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486552 Why did he feel the need to tell a lie to his parents? They we’re probably going to find out anyway.]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486552 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486606  Why did Emerson feel the need to lie about this issue? This makes the reader become nervous about why the police are there as we are unsure of events leading up to this. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486606 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486783 tying i race, with the line about the white parents, can already induce a feeling of tension as the reader is connected to the outside world where racial tensions, especially at the moment are high. so by connecting passage to real world tension, the reader becomes more susceptible to feeling tension]]> 2019-11-01 15:44:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486783 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486808 Being straightforward instead of beating around the bush, as well as using a relatable situation that most people would feel uncomfortable in, increases tension.]]> 2019-11-01 15:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486808 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486924 The narrator clearly doesn’t have the most loving parents and kind of idealizes the stereotype of “white parents” who always seem to be supportive and calm  ]]> 2019-11-01 15:44:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486924 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486952 Narrator didn’t respond to calls “again today”, the past is brought into the story, heightening the tension through exposition. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405486952 jackdlwilson https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487050 "It didn't occur to me that whoever found my phone could be racking up charges" the tension was already in the back of his head]]> 2019-11-01 15:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487050 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487330 The narrator has no dialogue. We enter his internal reality. He thinks more than he speaks. Tells us who he is with his parents. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487330 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487480 Is Emerson adopted or a foster kid? ]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487480 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487482 Emerson may believe what his parents are saying which would explain why he didn’t want to tell them. It would also tell us about how close their relationship is]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487482 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487542 Emerson doesn't seem too regretful for whatever actions he took (so much for the lie I was going to tell) so it's clear that He's done shady things in the past]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487542 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487548 Feels trapped and like he wants to escape, as he jumps at the first opportunity to leave,, the knock on the door]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487548 History elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487594 “Volume...hasn’t started to rise yet”]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487594 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487596 Maybe his parents have made sacrifices to get to where they are which is why the use of the word effects Emerson so much ]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487596 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487798 It shows from the passage that Emerson clearly wasn't white... Perhaps his parent are strict and uptight about money,  and he doesn't want them to know he lost his phone because they would stress over the price of the phone when they need  to purchases new one for him ]]> 2019-11-01 15:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487798 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487996 Maybe his phone got stolen. I mean this as in he left it somewhere, someone took it and then used it for something which was unsafe to the point that the police had to be involved. Throughout this story, you keep expecting the slap in the face, the pole you'll crash into, to come. You wish for the trouble to stop and be resolved, however it only gets worse. That's one thing to consider when you're in or are writing a scene: How do you make it worse for your character?]]> 2019-11-01 15:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405487996 fakhiraboaba https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488057 I think he did something stupid and didn't lose his phone, he left it and ran when he saw the cops coming.]]> 2019-11-01 15:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488057 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488106 Both qualitative (Emerson’s FEELINGS) and quantitative (the shocking number $608) description. Depth!]]> 2019-11-01 15:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488106 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488140 He had experience this before and know  what is going to happen but is dreading it]]> 2019-11-01 15:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488140 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488195 Emerson hints at the fact that hes goin to have ti explain himself but his mom exposes him, the conversation is goin and and a cop car randlmly ahows up, all unexpcted  ]]> 2019-11-01 15:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488195 fakhiraboaba https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488426 Emerson has studied the way white parents reacts to situations ]]> 2019-11-01 15:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488426 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488457 The scene felt very fast which made me nervous even though I knew nothing was happening to me]]> 2019-11-01 15:47:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405488457 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405489533 camera and character proxemics!!]]> 2019-11-01 15:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405489533 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405490746 think FILM not THEATRE—writer as cinematographer ]]> 2019-11-01 15:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405490746 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491370 Some of these sentences are kinda long]]> 2019-11-01 15:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491370 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491827 Camera goes from driving back home to talking about your own bloodstream]]> 2019-11-01 15:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491827 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491853 Camera follows them along a journey, almost trailing behind them]]> 2019-11-01 15:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405491853 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492351 reminds of the set up of the office - a retelling that flips between the person in the present, doing the retelling and the scene of the story that took place ]]> 2019-11-01 15:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492351 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492458 The story is hard to follow through... Sentences are packed with words and it keeps going from one place to the next, it doesn't really follow a straight direction .....]]> 2019-11-01 15:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492458 annika_k_gans https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492758 She’s talking about her friend telling a story in a story but the camera sees only her story not Ann’s, we know see Ann’s story, going into her brain her life sticking a camera in her ears. ]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492758 elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492790 First sentence, can almost see “I” roll eyes at being told every detail]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492790 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492807 He excerpt didnt leave any room for imag]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492807 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492852 The opening of the paragraph makes me think of a long journey, similar to the cinematic opening of The Shining]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492852 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492871 Very fast paced and all over the place.]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405492871 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493027 Seeing the story as more of a montage, usually what happens when showing memories  ]]> 2019-11-01 15:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493027 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493244 I can taste the tacos and the chocolate bars and the sweat]]> 2019-11-01 15:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493244 elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493266 Love what camera can’t quite convey: “I was hypnotized deep in my blood by the circular dancing”]]> 2019-11-01 15:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493266 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493445 The mental (“Memory and facts and logic...”) and the physical (“I had gone in the sweat lodge...”)  presented here ]]> 2019-11-01 15:55:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493445 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493595 Also Micheal, I love Newfoundland and I’m also Newfie and I’m really glad to see Newfoundland represented in writing : )))]]> 2019-11-01 15:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493595 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493891 Distance created between the author and the story via self-referentiality “...this [story] is one of those” ]]> 2019-11-01 15:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405493891 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405494180 The camera starts off with the main character and Ann in the car, but it is then focused on Ann; Ann at the powwow, stuffing her face with kitkat bars and tacos, Ann dancing at the powwow, Ann rambling  on and on with the protagonist. This is how we get o know about Ann. That paragraph was like reading someone's profile, but from the eyes of another person. We are shown how our protagonist views Ann. The camera is the protagonist's (and the reader's) perspective.]]> 2019-11-01 15:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405494180 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405494489 Jumps in time are possible because time frames are grounded in tangible details (the tacos, the sweat lodge, the conversation)]]> 2019-11-01 15:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405494489 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405495541 Im also a Newfie, really cool to see someone representing Newfoundland like this. Truly inspiring!!]]> 2019-11-01 15:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405495541 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496002 LONG LIVE NEWFOUNDLAND ]]> 2019-11-01 16:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496002 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496188 Weird how she calls an indigenous taco and "indian taco," yet she mentions her husbands ex wife who is actually indian.. (?)]]> 2019-11-01 16:00:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496188 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496905 @mitten, UNIVERSAL TRUTHS]]> 2019-11-01 16:01:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405496905 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502233 Pronouns used to show distance. Repeated use of “we”/“them”, “I”/“they” dichotomies ]]> 2019-11-01 16:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502233 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502479 I don’t think he didn’t know where to sign, I think he was nervous because he didn’t know what he was signing]]> 2019-11-01 16:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502479 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502930 Not Emily (whatever her name is) wants to be popular so she can’t help but mention it st random tones]]> 2019-11-01 16:12:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502930 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502958 Literary references “Anna Karenina tried that...” she reads! She’s nerdy like that 👀😩]]> 2019-11-01 16:12:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405502958 annika_k_gans https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503007 Dialogue can show you how some people interact with each other, like you tease them in a friend or a bully way dialogue will show you]]> 2019-11-01 16:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503007 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503231 Dialogue shows they are definitely in their teens]]> 2019-11-01 16:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503231 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503458 Emily finds the idea of being a wallflower liberating, She doesn't have anyone to impress   ]]> 2019-11-01 16:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503458 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503528 Some of the dialogue and vocabulary choices really displays the type of people that are talking ]]> 2019-11-01 16:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503528 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503954 Dialogue shows that they're two close friends with contrasting outlooks at life and problems]]> 2019-11-01 16:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405503954 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504368 Emily is way more mature than her friend ]]> 2019-11-01 16:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504368 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504450 Who's mirya? I thought he was a boy named leo.]]> 2019-11-01 16:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504450 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504735 Despite their close friendship their contrasting outlooks will eventually conflict at one point because of their needs and wants from life]]> 2019-11-01 16:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504735 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504999 Opposites attract.]]> 2019-11-01 16:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405504999 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405564576  how difficult is it to make a living as an author?]]> 2019-11-01 17:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405564576 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565065 what’s behind the nipples out story😪]]> 2019-11-01 17:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565065 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565266 What’s the most rewarding part of being a writer?]]> 2019-11-01 17:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565266 For Mr. Winters... https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565280 I'm also a Newfie, it's increidbly inspiring to see Newfoundland being represented in the field of writing!! Thank you!]]> 2019-11-01 17:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565280 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565600 Do you write by hand? Computer? TYPEWRITER?]]> 2019-11-01 18:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565600 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565881 When and where do you like to write/write best?]]> 2019-11-01 18:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405565881 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405566148 Is Copyright an issue when it comes to writing? for example : What if  Mickey Mouse was mentioned in your book would you have to pay Disney? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:01:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405566148 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405566937 Do you think being a journalist would get in the way of creative writing?  ]]> 2019-11-01 18:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405566937 jai_sharma https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567055 HOW DO YOU COPE with rejection?]]> 2019-11-01 18:02:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567055 When did you know you wanted to publish a book? https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567328 2019-11-01 18:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567328 joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567341 The Garfield story that was written by a student today was interesting in my opinion. Did you have any thoughts?]]> 2019-11-01 18:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567341 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567417 How do you decide what to write? Do you take in consideration the climate, market, profit?]]> 2019-11-01 18:03:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567417 bbobb5757 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567674 Does Michael have a story that rivals the nipples out one?]]> 2019-11-01 18:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567674 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567901 Is copyright an issue when it comes to writing? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:03:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405567901 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568053 Ay winters, your writing is hard to read. I’ve heard the messier the writing the more genius you are!! Congrats ]]> 2019-11-01 18:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568053 GoldmanEmmIsto https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568258 WHY do you write? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568258 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568739 When writing a story, do you do lots of research on the type of character (teens for example) or the time period and things like that?]]> 2019-11-01 18:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405568739 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569127 what was ur first story  ]]> 2019-11-01 18:05:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569127 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569384 How much of Yourself do you put into your writing? what’s an example of it? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:06:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569384 jovana_cvijetinovic https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569876 A question for all of you: What are some authors you looked up to or were inspired by? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405569876 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405570513 Is there a specific place that inspires you to wright?]]> 2019-11-01 18:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405570513 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405572590 what do you do with your work when it doesn’t get published?]]> 2019-11-01 18:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405572590 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405572885 Where did you find your publisher? Did you hear of he/her through a friend or? Where do you start looking?]]> 2019-11-01 18:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405572885 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405574582 why do you think readers feel like they need to relate to a character to read about them?]]> 2019-11-01 18:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405574582 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575145 calypso music and sari’s huh wheres your family from natasha?]]> 2019-11-01 18:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575145 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575541 what are y’alls backgrounds]]> 2019-11-01 18:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575541 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575588 What do you think about the student's garfield story? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405575588 “Real life” elizabeth_mitten https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405576223 In addition to writing, what have you had to do to “live” day to day? ]]> 2019-11-01 18:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405576223 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405576903 do you know of any young writers groups in toronto?]]> 2019-11-01 18:17:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405576903 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405577066 What’s more important in your eyes, reading or writing? If you had to choose.]]> 2019-11-01 18:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405577066 Joker joshsb2010 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578025 The Joker movie portrays a unique and interesting story, and I’d love to hear thoughts]]> 2019-11-01 18:19:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578025 Hhhnnnnnggggg https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578041 Brian please why were your nipples out ]]> 2019-11-01 18:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578041 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578275 Writers please 

Garfiekd story thoughts!!!]]> 2019-11-01 18:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578275 ngaire_l_e02 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578279 young voices publishes youths artwork]]> 2019-11-01 18:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578279 The garfield story. https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578457 Garfield was the most important question. ]]> 2019-11-01 18:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405578457 https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405583101 Garfield! Garfield!  Garfield!]]> 2019-11-01 18:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jessica_toal/j2ky64iiqt07/wish/405583101