Constructive Feedback on at least 2 pieces of work by George hart

Lorna Todd

2014-11-24 11:50:07 UTC

Ashley's packaging designs are very good. Like the net ideas he has used and how you can see the drink on the outer packaging.

Cyrus' has used mock ups for his packaging, this makes is finals look very professional. Very good designs.

2014-11-24 11:52:38 UTC

Ben's concepts are great. I like the idea of using a wheel as the net .

2014-11-24 11:56:19 UTC

Cyrus' designs are very convincing.

2014-11-24 11:56:24 UTC

Doug has really nice finals, the texture in the background is very nice

2014-11-24 11:56:24 UTC

Cyrus's mock ups are very clean and well designed, i like the crisp packet mock up

2014-11-24 11:56:25 UTC

Everyone has produced great designs, most of the mock ups i saw where very creative and clean.

2014-11-24 11:56:34 UTC

Cyrus' mock ups look very professional, and his designs look like something Hollister would actually make.

2014-11-24 11:56:55 UTC

Cyrus's designs and finals are awesome.

2014-11-24 11:57:19 UTC

Cyrus' work looks great after using the mock ups. They make it look very professional.

2014-11-24 11:58:28 UTC

Doug's use of the denim effect makes it very relatable to other Hollister products

2014-11-24 11:58:29 UTC

For Ash, A lot of really great ideas and drawings

Andykay — 2014-11-24 11:59:05 UTC

I really like Cyrus mocks they looked awesome, the design for Ashley's packaging was pretty amazing, like the texture he used

2014-11-24 11:59:52 UTC

Ashley's design is cool. It's also functional. The textures were also pretty awesome