https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6 en-us 2018-01-08 12:39:08 UTC 2018-01-09 14:40:45 UTC hello@padlet.com bwilding20111 https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219314548 Could you please look at the music video above and give me back some feedback. 

-Tell me what you liked about it.
-What you disliked about it. 
-What improvements you think i should make.

Thankyou :) ]]> 2018-01-08 12:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219314548 bwilding20111 https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219744556 I really like how you have used costume to present the indie look onto your characters. I like how you have tried to make it a narrative piece. I dont like the way your story is set out, to improve i think you might need to fix the story line so the audience can understand it better. ]]> 2018-01-09 14:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219744556 bwilding20111 https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219746468 I love how your characters look really chilled as if you were just fioming them out and about and not staging it at all. I love the tension between the two main characters, it seems like they may of had a history together. One thing that could be better is the use of camera shots in your music video. There arent many sots used as you've been quite repetitive with some so maybe next time include more shots and angles]]> 2018-01-09 14:35:56 UTC https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219746468 bwilding20111 https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219748329 I like how you have tried to make a story in the music video, to make the video conventional for a indie music video. The thing that you could improve is add various shots to the video which will help to make a story within your music video as at the moment the story line is a bit confusing but i can see where you are coming from. ]]> 2018-01-09 14:38:31 UTC https://padlet.com/bwilding20111/j0qrkzfrysk6/wish/219748329