https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04 2/17/22 en-us 2022-02-17 11:52:20 UTC 2025-09-24 22:37:22 UTC hello@padlet.com kirsty0793 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053134823 Your writing is so organized!]]> 2022-02-17 13:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053134823 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053147878 great job adding detail to your story]]> 2022-02-17 13:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053147878 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053148005 you did a grate job with indenting. ]]> 2022-02-17 13:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053148005 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053148555 good hook and reasons]]> 2022-02-17 13:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053148555 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053149343 Great organizing the paragraphs. ]]> 2022-02-17 13:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053149343 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053149551 good job supporting your clam with evidence]]> 2022-02-17 13:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053149551 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053150650 You had the most detail I have ever seen ]]> 2022-02-17 13:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053150650 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053151604 amazing detail and its a very amazing I love it ella! but to much to read]]> 2022-02-17 13:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053151604 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053151787 good job adding detail to your story]]> 2022-02-17 13:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053151787 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053152140 nice organization]]> 2022-02-17 13:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053152140 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053153277 nice job organizing your work]]> 2022-02-17 13:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053153277 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053153655 you have the best paragraphs ever!]]> 2022-02-17 13:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053153655 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156347 You have a awesome hook it really hooked me]]> 2022-02-17 13:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156347 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156663 good reason and hook]]> 2022-02-17 13:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156663 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156787 nice deetaill]]> 2022-02-17 13:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156787 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156907 you had a great lead]]> 2022-02-17 13:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156907 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156954 Nice organization with the paragraphs]]> 2022-02-17 13:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053156954 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053157619 you did a good job using transians words]]> 2022-02-17 13:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053157619 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053158903 nice hook]]> 2022-02-17 13:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053158903 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053159204 Great explaining and supporting the claim and evidence.Great paragraphs. 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]]> 2022-02-17 13:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053174140 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053174514 grate lead]]> 2022-02-17 13:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053174514 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053174661 good efcets ]]> 2022-02-17 13:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053174661 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053175469 You did a great job explaining your thesis!]]> 2022-02-17 13:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053175469 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053175614 The best essay I've ever seen]]> 2022-02-17 13:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053175614 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053176351 I love how you made your words bold so they would stand out]]> 2022-02-17 13:31:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053176351 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053176449 your lead plod me in ]]> 2022-02-17 13:31:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053176449 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053177564 I love your enticement!]]> 2022-02-17 13:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053177564 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053177816 You did a great job making connections to your thesis!]]> 2022-02-17 13:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053177816 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178377 great reasons]]> 2022-02-17 13:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178377 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178453 GREAT EXAMPLES FROM THE SHOW!!!!!!!!!!!!]]> 2022-02-17 13:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178453 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178487 The most amazing detal]]> 2022-02-17 13:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178487 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178734 nice hook]]> 2022-02-17 13:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053178734 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053179285 I like how you hooked the reader]]> 2022-02-17 13:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053179285 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053180012 You hooked me with your lead! Nice!]]> 2022-02-17 13:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053180012 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053180550 awsome job spelling"]]> 2022-02-17 13:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053180550 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053181141 Nice thesis ]]> 2022-02-17 13:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053181141 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053181325 I love your HOOK!!!!]]> 2022-02-17 13:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053181325 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053182397 You did a good job on the grammar, and details! And you did god mode on reading it to me! And you had an awesome conclusion!]]> 2022-02-17 13:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053182397 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053182963 I love how the whole time you stayed on your topic, " Piper is brave"]]> 2022-02-17 13:34:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053182963 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183778 I like the introduction and the first reason! Keep up the awesome work!]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183778 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183829 did good explaining evidence ]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183829 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183855 awsome deatial]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183855 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183921 Good thesis]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053183921 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184051 great details and good job connecting it to your life]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184051 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184456 I love your story and details]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184456 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184519 You did a great job making your words bold to explain your excitement!]]> 2022-02-17 13:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053184519 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053186131 you did awsome on the deatail and supporting the claim awsome job!]]> 2022-02-17 13:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053186131 https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053186904 amazing book]]> 2022-02-17 13:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kirsty0793/j0kda283na6uof04/wish/2053186904