8.2 Writing KFC: 2/4 by Charles Levin https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb What is your essay's thesis statement? What is your essay's clincher? Post them below. en-us 2021-02-03 00:17:42 UTC 2021-02-04 18:56:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4dd.png Arline https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165468810 my thesis statement is "Have you ever thought about the Army".my clincher is "Here are some information about the Army you might want to hear"]]> 2021-02-04 18:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165468810 Jamil Mattic jmattic https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165473875 My thesis statement is War how it scary for them and praying for they live because of the war although, the intended effect of “Dulce et Decorum Est” is it dark and sad mostly depressed scary and how they regret joining the army while “Who’s for the Game” intends to tell you to join the army for war and how fun to join the army and war]]> 2021-02-04 18:46:31 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165473875 Tianna Matthews https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474334 In the passages, both poets develop point of view by explaining the things people go through while in war although the intended effect of  “Dulce et Decorum Est” is more about stopping people from going to war, while “Who’s for the Game” intends to intends to help and support the idea of going to war. 


]]> 2021-02-04 18:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474334 Nijah Williams https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474544 My thesis statement is=In the passages, both poets develop a point of view by talking about war and the impact that it has; although, the intended effect of “Dulce et Decorum Est” is negative, while “Who’s for the Game” intends to get people to join the war, with positive thinking.
My clincher is=Image you still being able to hear, the sounds of innocent lives ending in your dreams. Could you spend the rest of your life like that?
]]> 2021-02-04 18:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474544 Lauryn Roberson https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474736 Thesis statement: In the passages, both poets develop point of view by using multiple reasons to persuade the reader; although, the intended effect of “Dulce et Decorum Est” is persuading you not to join the war, while “Who’s for the Game” intends to encourage others to join

]]> 2021-02-04 18:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165474736 Saniya Lakey https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165475499 In the passages both poets develop the point of view by explaining why you should or should not join the army; although the intended affect of "Dulce et Decorum Est" is to talk about why you shouldn't join the army while "Who's for the Game" talks about why you should join the army. Clincher: Ever heard of War? It's not a bug deal to some, but it is a big deal to others. It is however, and very chaotic and dangerous thing to do. But there are some things that you may not want to remember but you still do anyway. ]]> 2021-02-04 18:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165475499 Moriyah https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165476874 In the passages, both poets develop point of view by giving details about the reasons for and against going to war; although, the intended effect of “Dulce et Decorum Est” is to convince people not to go to war, while “Who’s for the Game” intends to convince others to go. ]]> 2021-02-04 18:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165476874 jordan smith https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165477408 theisi statment : In the passages, both poets develop point of view by expressing their emotions,feeling on war and how they view it  although, the intended effect of “Dulce et Decorum Est” is showing his negative perspective on war  while “Who’s for the Game” intends to put off a positive and more happy attitude while talking about war.
 

clincher :The guns, the tragedy the lost loved ones .what do they have in common ,war .war used these families and guns to kill and bring innocence all in the same way, violence as people realize while the days go by in hiding of barles to take shelter from  the fire arms  they wonder where they went wrong   and why did they join the war ,as the cloud’s parted and the sun arouse we finally stood ground the rest was over the war finally deceased happiness and joy flooded these young soldiers as they marched towards their  victory .
]]> 2021-02-04 18:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165477408 jordan jones https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165488011
  •  thesis statement : now in my mind I feel like the army is a waste of time. See what happens if you go to the army.
    • Clincher: if i was president there wouldn’t be a war, people wouldn’t have to feel like the day they leave home they might not never see there family again.





    • ]]>     2021-02-04 18:48:47 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165488011     Terrell crosson https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165493954 Thesis:  In the passages both poets are developing point of view by persuading and informing you reasons on why you shouldn’t join the  army and passage 2 is stating reasons on why you should join the army. ]]> 2021-02-04 18:49:42 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165493954 Roman Smith rsmith425 https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165499996 Thesis Statement: In the passages, both poets develop a point by describing the effects of war; although, the intended effect of “Decorum Est" is to persuade you not to go to war , while “who’s for the game” describes the honor and why you should join the army. ]]> 2021-02-04 18:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/clevin7/j0irzrksafpiecwb/wish/1165499996