Feedback by Rob https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF Week6 en-us 2017-10-23 07:02:27 UTC 2017-10-23 16:42:10 UTC hello@padlet.com 60%-69% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664006  The presentation of how the chamber and handle would be made was very well set out and it explained which processes would be used with relevant and technical detail.

To improve, there should be evidence of research and inspiration.  ]]> 2017-10-23 16:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664006 85% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664376 -The layout of the Presentation is easy to understand although, more detail could be added for the other parts.
-Extensive knowledge of the model structure was shown which displayed an ability to understand the task.
-No errors that I could see.
-The design was creative and showed an opportunity to make unique model]]> 2017-10-23 16:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664376 Excellent 70-79% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664386 very detailed and informative, good use of visual aids, interesting layout for presenting. 
Could have included another angel of the handle or maybe some more write detail ]]> 2017-10-23 16:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664386 Feedback https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664512 80%

I thought that the presentation was good because it explained in detail how the model was made and step by step.

The techniques used were also explained in big detail too.]]> 2017-10-23 16:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664512 Grade and feedback https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664620 70-79% Very detailed missed a few bits]]> 2017-10-23 16:27:54 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664620 excellent standard of work ~75 https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664873 shows great analysis of tools and methods used to create the model showing exactly how it would be performed with analysis of spacing of polygons and edge flow ]]> 2017-10-23 16:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664873 70-75% well thought out and demonstrated https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664989 (for what is provided)]]> 2017-10-23 16:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199664989 70-79% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665036 Presentation was to a very high standard, might have broken the model into more parts and spread it over a few more slides just so its not so much writing on one slide.]]> 2017-10-23 16:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665036 70-75% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665080 2017-10-23 16:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665080 65% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665132 Looks really nice.]]> 2017-10-23 16:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665132 68% Very Good https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665195 The clarity of the gun modelling was clear and precise, it displayed creativity and a great knowledge of the tools available to the user.

However, many other features have been left out and unexplained, including the teapot section of the model.]]> 2017-10-23 16:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665195 Feed Back - 68% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665265 For a start the presentation layout really caught my eye, such as with the highlighting of the part of the picture reference that was being worked on. 
The creativity of the designing stage of how the model would work and how relating to how they would need to fix the N-gons really shown the coherent understanding on how the user understands the Maya software.
The PowerPoint level of detail provided were definitely critical and shown significant reference to show where they were focusing this part of the presentation on.
Overall a very good presentation.]]> 2017-10-23 16:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665265 https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665386 60-69%:
Information clustered together, separate the different major components of the model into separate slides; very informative though.

]]> 2017-10-23 16:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665386 50% Good https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665943 Without explanation of the process along side the power point it may be hard to follow and fully understand the process.

Minimal reference, only one image. No alternative angles of the reference forcing you to model from the breakdown of one image.]]> 2017-10-23 16:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665943 70-79% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665956 The ideas ]]> 2017-10-23 16:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199665956 Feedback https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666031 60-69%
Very good level of critical analysis and evaluation. 
The only question now is, how did you made this presentation?

]]> 2017-10-23 16:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666031 80% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666050 2017-10-23 16:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666050 Feedback 68% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666080 Good design but missing big parts of gun and the whole teapot. Maybe split different components into different slides. Would have benefitted from slightly more clear information and maybe a few reference images ad diferent angles.]]> 2017-10-23 16:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666080 65% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666118 The layout was very clean and easy to understand, a lot of detail has been displayed through simple yet effective labeling.

However not all of the model has been shown so there is no real representation of how the remainder of the object will be created. as well as this i would have liked to see other perspectives of the model itself. ]]> 2017-10-23 16:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666118 63% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666282 Mention different ways of approaching a piece of the model]]> 2017-10-23 16:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666282 Perhaps add other angled images to simplyfy the process https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666412 2017-10-23 16:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666412 60-69% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666539 Very clear and understandable with the use of wire frame images, slightly clustered, idea overall seems to be the weakest factor]]> 2017-10-23 16:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666539 2/10 https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666737 kappa

]]> 2017-10-23 16:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666737 65% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666799 The explanation about how you would make the grip and chamber is well shown and detailed, but you haven't shown how you might create the other parts of the model like the trigger and teapot aspects.]]> 2017-10-23 16:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199666799 69-96% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667164 very well.]]> 2017-10-23 16:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667164 60-69%: https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667331 Information clustered together, separate the different major components of the model into separate slides; very informative though.]]> 2017-10-23 16:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667331 60% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667332 I'd appreciate more reference (back image of the gun as well as side). Also the parts deserve a page each, some details are missing. For example, it would be nice to see how the student wanted so deal with those N-gon's since he created quite a lot of those on different places. Also it might be a good idea to create just half of the round shape and then mirror it - less issues to solve by hand - time saver.]]> 2017-10-23 16:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667332 70-79% https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667645 Ideas where were clearly presented.
Very coherent throughout with little to no errors.
Presentation was at a top standard and seemed thoroughly researched.
  ]]> 2017-10-23 16:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199667645 Feedback https://padlet.com/CGMA/FF/wish/199669987  

66 % - if I have to score only a ‘grip’ part of your project 

-          very good standard project 
-          very good analysis, simple idea 
-          nice presented images how you doing all the stuff 

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