Padlet for Review of Document by Melinda Alford https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k Made with eyes on the prize en-us 2017-04-18 02:36:41 UTC 2025-11-24 03:25:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Beartoy.png Photos melindaannalford https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664723 Photo on page one this has a margin overlay... see strange border on left hand side of the photo
 ]]> 2017-04-18 02:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664723 Layout melindaannalford https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664832 2017-04-18 02:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664832 Grammar melindaannalford https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664836 2017-04-18 02:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664836 Purpose daniel_legault https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664978 As stated in the Senior Leadership Team meeting, I question the timing of producing this booklet now. Accreditation will change the status of the school - even more than IB authorization. It is better to wait until that process is complete and highlight throughout the booklet. 


]]> 2017-04-18 02:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166664978 Text daniel_legault https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166665388 The school profile should be written after the CIS/WASC accreditation is completed. ]]> 2017-04-18 02:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166665388 https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166700531 It's me, Greg!]]> 2017-04-18 08:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166700531 melindaannalford https://padlet.com/melindaannalford/iyfvrf3nr37k/wish/166903571 My comments 
  1. It should be much better than it is 
  2. Cover photo should be changed 
  3. Page one stu- Students should not be hyphenated 
  4. Page 2 two much white space and should have a backing of header image
  5. Page 3 photos need to show spaces with kids it them it looks like we are a school that does not have students yet 
  6. Page 3 you can not be located in the scenery you can be surrounded by it but not located in it this statement implies that that everything around us is lovely and and well we are not 
  7. Page 3 Modesty opened what does that even mean ?
  8. Page 3 in the short history of SWIS why would we advertise that we have not been open long it make us sound like we are 
  9. Page 4 Useless no captions on context no kids 
  10. Page 5 and 6 both the messages are to long and the it should be on one page 
  11. Page 7 On the time line you are not inviting the people viewing it to add to the future of SWIS
  12. Page 8 should be smaller on  the Icons some of the flags are cut off and distorted 
  13. Page 8 learning take place in small sized classes ( yes our classrooms are small) but I am sure  this is not what was supposed to be said 
  14. Page 9 looks like it was pulled from somewhere else….. And uses only the DP wheel at the bottom and the color of the box  dose not match the blue it looks 
  15. Page 10 no context is given to this at all !
  16. Page 11 does not match what is done and is written poorly 
  17. Page 12 formatting is bad 
  18. Page 13 writing is strong but why the highlighted box around the subjects taught this showcases that we do not have  “high" tech classes if they are going to be written then a line about what happens in them would be nice 
  19. Page 14 formatting sucks and does not match the formatting of page 12 
  20. Page 14 the last photo is really a PYP image I am sure we could do better
  21. Page 15 the logo is distorted why bullet  points? Not used other places in the document 
  22. Page 16 we use that same photo on the website in 2 places can’t we do better?
  23. 17 Image is stupid and one child her eyes closed again can’t we do better
  24. Page 17 why the boxes to much white space
  25. Page 18 no context to much black could be cooped in lighted to make a great image but at it is it is not 
  26. Page 19 Beyond the class room why grey The ASA do not include the MYP ASA or sports or music
  27. Page 20 NEVER show kids in swim suits as a parent I would not want a photo of my child to go out like that !
  28. Page 21 all the wire faces in the PTA photo sell this as a school that it is not 
  29. Page 22 Why no mention of the SWIS definition of International mindedness and we're showing a photo of one culture when we're supposed to be celebrating all cultures
  30.   Page 22 the section on literacy month was not approved by the library and the "my Alan Bennett is squished together and looks ridiculous
  31. Page 23 what is the point 
  32. Page 24 what is the point 
  33. Page 25 what is the point 
  34. Page 30 What is the point does not match the formatting of the front and the photo is old
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