Remake of THE REAL MEANING OF PEACE 4.3 by Alicia Santiago Soto

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asantiago60 — 2021-09-21 00:24:16 UTC

Directions:
After reading "THE REAL MEANING OF PEACE"
Write the parts of the story using words like FIRST, NEXT, THEN, LAST.

Felipe Eduardo Paez Melendez

2018110211 — 2021-09-21 22:10:37 UTC

First: Once upon a time there lived a king who announced that he would reward the artist who painted the best picture representing peace.
Next: Many great painters sent several of their best works of art to the king.

So: But when the king announced the winner, everyone was shocked.

Finally: Peace does not mean being in a place where there is no noise or problems. Peace means being in the midst of all the chaos and still being calm in the heart. True peace is the state of mind, not the state of the environment.

Alejandra Orozco

2021-09-22 00:29:48 UTC

First:

A king announced to prize the artist who would paint the best painting depicting peace.

Next: the king announced the winner, everyone was shocked. The picture which won the prize had a mountains too but it was rugged and bare. Everything was a caos.

Then: If anyone looked closely, in the bush a mother bird had built her next. In the midst of the rush of angry weather, the bird sat on her nest with peace.

Last:

The peace does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise or trouble.

Santiago Jiménez

santielproxd1001 — 2021-09-22 00:49:53 UTC

First: A king announced he would prize the artist that draws the best painting about peace.

Next: Everyone was shocked when the king announced the winner, but the painting that won had mountains too but it was rugged and bare, but they saw a bird peacefully sitting in a growing bush.

Finally: The peace does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise or trouble. Peace means to be in the midst of all the chaos and still be calm in the heart. The real peace is the state of mind, not the state of the surroundings.

Alejandra Villegas

2021-09-22 01:25:08 UTC

FIRST: The king told the told painters who would bring the best painting in the peace.

NEXT: They show him two paintings, but they are not the winners, because they do not represent peace for the world.

THEN: Then the king said that peace is not beging calm without problems but staying calm in any situation.

LAST: The best representation of peace is that people understand that they can avoid them if they solve it with passion.

Imer Santiago

2021-09-22 16:43:46 UTC

First:
A king annouced to prize the artist who would paint the best painting depicting peace.

Next: the king annoucced the winner, everyone was shocked The picture which won the prize had a mountains too is was rugged and bare. Everithing was a caos

Then: If anyoned loocked closely in the bush a mother bird had built her next. In the midst of the rush of angry weather, the bird sat on her nest whith peace.

Last: The peace does not mean to be in a place where there is noise or trouble..........

Andrea Navarrete

201341030 — 2021-09-22 20:20:36 UTC

First, the king announced that the person who painted the most beautiful paint of peace win a prize.

Next, He said the name of the winner and everyone was shocked because he painted about the sky became very angry.

Then, this did not look peaceful at all and in the midst of the rush of angry weather, the bird sat on her nest with peace.

Finally, the people learned that in chaos there is also peace.

Rául Barragán Ibarra

2021-09-22 22:06:03 UTC

First:
The king announced a prize to the artist who paints the best painting that represent, peace.

Next:
A painter sent a master piece of a calm lake perfectly mirroring the beautiful mountains with blue sky and fluffly clouds, most people who viewed the painting thought it was a perfect picture.

Then:
Everyone was shocked when he announced the winner, the picture who won the prize was painting with rugeed mountains and the sky was angry, this did not look peaceful at all.

Last:
The peace does not mean to be in a place with no noise or trouble, so the painting won because of the mother of bird was in the midst of all the chaos and still be calm, that was the best representation for peace.

Mateo Arroyo

2021-09-22 22:15:43 UTC

First:the king annonced that the pearso who painted the most beautiful paint of peace win a prize.

Next:He sid the name of the winner and everyone was shoked because he painted about the sky became very angry.

Then:this did not look peaceful at all and in the mids of the rush of engry weather the birds sat on her nest with peace.

Finally:the people learned that in chaos there is also peace.

Andrea Enif

2021-09-22 22:30:44 UTC

First: A king announced to prize the artist who would paint the best painting depicting peace.

Next: Many painters sent the king their best art pieces, but one of the pictures was of a calm lake and mountains, and everyone loved it.

Then: The king announced the winner but the picture which won the prize was very different like storms.

Last: everyone looked closely at the painting, could see a mother bird in its nest, the bird sat on her nest with peace.

In my opinion Peace has many ways in our lives, everything is about the way we look around.

Rebeca Eliane Cruz González

2021-09-22 23:06:14 UTC

First:

Leonardo González Santiago

2021-09-22 23:46:44 UTC

First: A king who announced to prize the artist who would paint the best painting depicting peace.
Next: Many great painters sent the king several of their best art pieces.
Then: But when the king announced the winner, everyone was shocked.
Finally: The peace does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise or trouble. Peace means to be in the midst of all the chaos and still be calm in the heart.

Frida Romina.

2021-09-22 23:53:34 UTC

Peace, defined in a positive sense, is a state on a social or personal level, in which the parts of a unit are in balance and stability. It also refers to the peace of mind of a person or society; defined in a negative sense, it is the absence of unrest, violence or war
Next:

La Paz de Dios is a spiritual movement of the 10th and 11th centuries, organized by the Catholic Church and supported by civil authorities. Its purpose is to achieve a pacification of the Western Christian world and to control the use of violence in society.
First:
spiritually at ease, with enough knowledge and understanding to keep oneself strong in the face of anxiety or emotional imbalance. Being at peace is considered highly healthy and is often associated with happiness.
Last:Happiness and inner peace are not something that is outside, but within ourselves. To know how to find inner peace, it is necessary to understand that it does not depend on anything or anyone, but on yourself. You are the only one responsible.

Laura Yasmin Hernández Castro. DVC IN AL TVM. September 22 2021

2021-09-23 00:51:56 UTC

First:The king make a contest for the best painting depicting peace.

Next: Many great painters sent the king several of their best art pieces. 
 
Then:There was many beautiful peaceful pictures, one of them was  perfect, it has a calm lake with a  mountain, everyone thought that it was the best.

Last:The king annunced the winner, a stormy picture of a peacefull nest with a bird growing in the storm. Everyone was shocked!

luis Emilio peace day

2021-09-23 00:59:21 UTC

first : a king wanted him to paint a picture and he looked for the best painters, he found a very good one

next : the king chooses a painting that represents the opposite of peace

then : the painting looks like a storm or a painting that was sent by mistake but a tree grew on a rock

end : Peace can be everywhere even in the midst of caos and that's why the king chose it as painting.

Alejandra Lee García

2021-09-23 01:04:22 UTC

FIRTS: the king announced to prize the artist who paint the best painting representing peace

NEXT: the king saw a painting that really represents peace

THEN: The King has chosen the winner but everyone is shocked because the painting representes a very angry sky and it not peaceful at all

LAST: The peace doesn't mean to be in a place where there is no noise or trouble the peace is on ourselves and how we express it.

My opinion is that you can find peace everywhere just that it depends on you if you wanna find it.

Juan Pablo Rios Pesquera

2021-09-23 02:06:44 UTC

First: A king was going to annouce the best painting of peace.

Next: All of the people thought that the winner was going to be an art that is all sunny plants growing all beautiful.

Then: The king announced the best painting, it was a stormy one and with no nature, only rocks, everybody were shocked !

Lastly: The king says: look closer in the picture there is a bird, peace is not a beautiful place, is a place where even if there are a lot of things wrong, the bird is still happy where he lives.

Francisco Javier Domínguez Luna

2021-09-23 02:14:31 UTC

First: Long time ago, there was a king who did a painting contest. He announced that wold be a prize for the best painting.

Next: Many painters send to the king their best paintings.

Then: The king announced the winner and everybody was in shock because they thought that the painting that won did not represet the peace.

Finally: all realized that peace doesn't mean that you have to be in calm or in a place with no noise. The important thing is that your heart has to be in peace.

Renata Fernanda Alquezar de la Cruz

2018110011 — 2021-09-23 02:51:43 UTC

First: One king annouce a prize who ones paint the best depicting peace.

Next: Many great painters sent the king several of their best art pieces.

Then: The king say the winner and everyone was surpriced, because the king chose a paint with

Last: The peace does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise, it means to have peace in your heart

Sebastián De La Torre

2021-09-23 15:32:05 UTC

First:

The king announced who did the best painting would be awared.

Next:

immediately all the artists made a painting.

Last:

After the winner was announced, everyone was surprised because he chose the painting that has no peace.

Then:

then the king says that you don't even care about your surroundings.

Jose Diego Delgado Saldivar

2021-09-23 19:34:36 UTC

First: The king says that the best picture wins a prize he said that all is so perfect.

Next: all the artist was doing his paint the most perfect posible they was so exited and all was save of his paint.

Then: The king says that you be suposed care about your surrondings.

Last: All was nervus when the king is going to say the winner and surpised beacause choose the painting that no peace

Natalia Maraboto Mendez

2021-09-23 20:23:41 UTC

First: The king asked that will create the best painting and all the persons they are creating a painting all the painting has mountains and has snow.

Next: They announced the winner and the best painting is and sowing a painting that has a storm.

Then: I had a mountain like the others but didn't seem calm.

Last: everyone, like it's not bad that's no quiet and the king, says anything can happen but the tranquility it's inside the heart.

Ignacio Lu Gonzalez

2021-09-23 21:09:05 UTC

First, a king announced a contest of a peace painting and will received a prize.
Next, there were many paintings but there was one very beautiful and everybody liked it.
Then, the king gave the prize to another painting that was not very pretty but it represented the real peace.

Sophia

2021-09-23 21:53:11 UTC

First- the was a king who announced to prize
the artist who would paint the best painting
depicting peace.
next- One of the pictures among the various
master pines was of a calm lake perfectly
mirroring peacefully towering snow-capped
mountains.
then- When the king announced the winner, everyone was shocked. the picture
wich wone the prize did not look prize did not look peaceful at all.
last-Every one looked dosedy at the painting he could see a tiny bush growing in the cracks in the rock. In the midst of
the rush of angry weather, the bird sat on her nest with peace.