https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b Made with eyes on the prize en-us 2017-11-01 15:55:39 UTC 2017-11-13 19:44:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405043 writing to much. I need help cutting down my words to not make my story super long!]]> 2017-11-07 15:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405043 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405224 using details (onomatopoeia)]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405224 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405251 -sonny]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405251 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405316 my dialogue]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405316 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405326 I wrote a lot and was being descriptive ]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405326 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405383 my story is very unique

]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405383 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405441 Maybe to see if I wrote to much, or if i got off task in my writing. ]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405441 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405456 2017-11-07 15:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405456 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405531 Knowing how my character feels about the situation. It's easy to show how she feels.

]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405531 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405711 finishing it

]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405711 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405846 speeding up my process]]> 2017-11-07 15:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204405846 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406134 -sonny]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406134 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406191 i dont think i need help

]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406191 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406248 I am happy with my use of literature and how my story is going so far.]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406248 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406323 i have no idea if the story is any good since i dont know what im doing

]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406323 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406378 I don't think I will be done in time I still have a lot to type]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406378 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406463 being unique]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406463 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406503 I'm writing to little in each paragraph and i need to make my story more interesting and use better words]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406503 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406600 I feel like I've been writing too much. I think I should not add as much because it wastes time, but I also want the reader to understand everything that's happening. ]]> 2017-11-07 15:39:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406600 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406945 being descriptive , more time with the assignment]]> 2017-11-07 15:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204406945 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407189 2017-11-07 15:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407189 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407428 feel confident because i'm almost finished my climax and i type fast plus this really isn't a hard task

]]> 2017-11-07 15:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407428 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407517 2017-11-07 15:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407517 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407534 my comedy in the paragraphs

]]> 2017-11-07 15:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407534 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407542 I feel confident about finishing ]]> 2017-11-07 15:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407542 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407594 Feedback]]> 2017-11-07 15:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407594 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407653 My whole story i got this ]]> 2017-11-07 15:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407653 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407725 that i will get a good grade

]]> 2017-11-07 15:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204407725 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408337 2017-11-07 15:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408337 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408368 - David ]]> 2017-11-07 15:42:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408368 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408775 i need help with a lot ah things]]> 2017-11-07 15:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408775 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408778 I think i should slow down and add more details]]> 2017-11-07 15:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408778 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408822 2017-11-07 15:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204408822 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409151 feedback]]> 2017-11-07 15:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409151 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409154 2017-11-07 15:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409154 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409703 getting good]]> 2017-11-07 15:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/204409703 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/206456824 writing the story]]> 2017-11-13 19:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/iy5o79vh5h9b/wish/206456824