Advertising Project_XA5 by paulina rian

Advertising Project_XA5 by paulina rian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m Time's up! Now you can check your grade. Thank you for the hard work and efforts that you have made so far. ;) en-us 2022-02-28 06:46:03 UTC 2022-03-24 04:18:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Upload your PPT HERE paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2068960317 2022-02-28 06:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2068960317 agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2069542623 2022-02-28 14:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2069542623 agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2069543742 Agape Dimas/1
Michael Kevin/23
Michael Titan/25]]> 2022-02-28 14:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2069543742 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1QSscpclw9ViSo-KFlhDSKUWYIbET26MBPCwUBBiYjZM/edit#slide=id.p https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2070631810 Arthur Isa Nararia/4
Banuseta Anindita/5
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Carollus/08
Marcel/20]]> 2022-03-01 12:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071386512 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071448554 Jovan Gunawan/19
Marcello Chriswanto/21
Theodorus Nugroho/30]]> 2022-03-01 13:36:18 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071448554 KKS https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071487356 Benedictus Bagas / 7
Ganesya Juan / 12
Gregorius Hassya / 14]]> 2022-03-01 13:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071487356 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071541802 2022-03-01 14:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071541802 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071561763 2022-03-01 14:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071561763 Kebut Semalam Group https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071620873 - Gede Kanadeva Hariyanto/13

- Jonathan Exl Theodore/18

- Yohanes Kurnia Febriyanto/33

]]> 2022-03-01 14:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071620873 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071655083 2022-03-01 15:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2071655083 late submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218034 2022-03-05 15:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218034 late submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218074 2022-03-05 15:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218074 late submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218113 2022-03-05 15:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218113 late submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218290 2022-03-05 15:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079218290 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079224187 Hi King Barca!
This is very significant and nice progress.
However, you may consider several points here as an improvement:
1. since you use the poster as the medium, making sure that the punctuation like a full stop, comma, Capital letters, etc. is very important.
2. you can complete the "Don't miss it" phrase with a clear Call to Action. --> on your direct selling ad.
3. Check the slide on my given G-slide about this project on how to compose a more persuasive headline. Persuasive skill (copywriting) is important. But, the good thing is, you make the headline in line with your offering (body). Good job!

Above all, I really appreciate that you have made your own headline and body.
Oh, anw, the progress presentation is very clear. appreciated!

Cheers!]]> 2022-03-05 15:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079224187 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079237001 Thank you supergroup for the excellent move. Now, lemme share some inputs for you:
1. Check on worksheet 2 - Call to Action and headline share different functions. Therefore, please check your headline.
My best recommendation you can check the G-Slide that I gave you earlier (G-Slide: Advertising Project). There you can find "how to compose persuasive words/phrases"
2. Call to Action is the expected action. Please recheck your CTA. I also put some CTA references on the google Slide (G-Slide: Advertising Project). Make sure that your CTA is in line with your offering. (CTA nya nyambung sama penawaran Anda pada iklan tsbt.)
3. Try to pick a more specific target audience. It will be easier for you to set a strategy (association and graphic). The more specific the target audience the clearer symbol/strategy it will be.

Well done! Keep it up!]]> 2022-03-05 15:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079237001 Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079252816 Hi there!
Thank you for the meticulous and detailed observation. I really love the way you capture their value and strategy. You can see that Microsoft pays attention on small detailed opportunity.

Here are some feedbacks to make your nice progress better.
1. The brand awareness is cool! However, you can improve the font. Make it bolder / catchy for your important value/offering/keywords that you wanna promote from the product.
2. The body of the brand awareness has not mentioned about the feature / logical information above your claims.
Meaning, you mean that the product can afford multi-purposes but you missed mentioning the 'why'.
3. Do the headline and the body of the worksheet 1 your own pieces? If so...
the two statement: 1) Surface Pro does All and 2) 'Surface pro gets your back' are very persuasive! You rock!

Continue the progress to the next leve: worksheet 2.
Please check the detailed elements on the given G-Slide (advertising project).

Excellent, everyone!

Cheers!

]]> 2022-03-05 15:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079252816 Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079265659 Thank you for submitting your progress.
Now you can continue the details and promote Spotify.
Make sure you check the detailed advertisement elements on G-Slide.

Cheers!]]> 2022-03-05 16:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079265659 Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079270066 It's very great progress. Appreciated much!
Here are some feedbacks for you:
1. The headline and the body are cool! You just need to pick a more specific target audience(s) to help you select a representative symbol/figure/ strategy.

2. Storyline is your scenario on how you deliver your offering/promotion to the target audience.

3. Last, please check your claim! make sure that your offerings do not share false promises, especially you mention a free product/access.

I can say that this progress deserves an A score!
Proud!]]> 2022-03-05 16:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079270066 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079286479 Thank you for the progress!
there are some recommendations for you:
1. Where is the CTA on direct selling?
2. Make the font for the body clearer. Besides, you have a cool headline.

Keep it up!
Cheers!]]> 2022-03-05 16:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079286479 Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079571461 Thank you for the very great progress!
1. The headline is epic! Good job team!
Grab: Easy life, Grab-it easily.
2. For the body, I think it can be better and more persuasive to explain the "easy" part as the value that you want to highlight from this brand.
You may elaborate in a catchy phrases / senetences on how people can fullfil their needs easily through grab.

Brilliant work! Please continue to worksheet 2.

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Jaya/17
Satya/29]]> 2022-03-06 15:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2079997675 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080001222 2022-03-06 15:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080001222 mikaelangelo https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080062907 2022-03-06 16:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080062907 Manusia https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080086877 Ayus/10
Rio/11
Marvin28]]> 2022-03-06 16:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080086877 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080087038 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/10thFRqd_JuLlmqQwSK3pNsqwezFToaZPI3ssFM3pUmQ/edit#slide=id.g118c809fa4d_0_81]]> 2022-03-06 16:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2080087038 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089450746 2022-03-11 01:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089450746 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089452076 2022-03-11 01:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089452076 agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089866291 2022-03-11 05:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089866291 agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089866535 2022-03-11 05:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089866535 totally not bending group agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089867379 Agape Dimas/1
Michael Kevin/23
Michael Titan/25]]> 2022-03-11 05:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089867379 agapesaputra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089893241 2022-03-11 06:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089893241 Group Member https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089928956 Isa/4
Seta/5
Christian/9]]> 2022-03-11 06:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089928956 Worksheet 1 & 2 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089929811 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1QSscpclw9ViSo-KFlhDSKUWYIbET26MBPCwUBBiYjZM/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2022-03-11 06:44:01 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089929811 Direct Selling Poster https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089931339 2022-03-11 06:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089931339 Brand Awareness Poster https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089984869 2022-03-11 07:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2089984869 Group KKS https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090489566 Bendictus Bagas / 7
Ganesya Juan / 12
Gregorius Hassya / 14]]> 2022-03-11 14:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090489566 Worksheet 1 & 2 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090508337 2022-03-11 14:13:33 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090508337 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090511486 2022-03-11 14:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090511486 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090516656 2022-03-11 14:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090516656 Revisi Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090546781 2022-03-11 14:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090546781 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090679635 2022-03-11 15:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090679635 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090682148 2022-03-11 15:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090682148 Dirrect Selling Poster https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090889452 2022-03-11 18:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2090889452 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2091767658 2022-03-12 17:12:35 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2091767658 Final Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092072167 next time please check the idetailed instruction. It requires you to upload the worksheets, direct selling ad and brand awareness.]]> 2022-03-13 06:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092072167 Notes: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092078450 No updates.]]> 2022-03-13 06:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092078450 Final Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092081653 Persuasive word - not brought but it brings you
(brand awareneess)
The rests are cool.]]> 2022-03-13 06:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092081653 No updates. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092084419 2022-03-13 06:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092084419 Notes paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092085850 Please update the final submission properly, check the instruction on GC.]]> 2022-03-13 06:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092085850 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092949563 2022-03-14 02:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092949563 direct selling mikaelangelo https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092989670 2022-03-14 03:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092989670 brand awareness mikaelangelo https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092990502 2022-03-14 03:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2092990502 Direct selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2093149811 2022-03-14 05:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2093149811 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2095827314 2022-03-15 12:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/ixut1rez40x67e5m/wish/2095827314