Writing Exercise 3 by Test https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi HEAD AND SHOULDERS KNEES AND TOES en-us 2018-03-29 05:34:48 UTC 2018-04-03 06:57:22 UTC hello@padlet.com Writing Exercise 3 misssylvianne https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247143499 Describe Jade at the moment in the story when she got caught stealing - eyes, nose, mouth, ears, hair, neck, legs, feet, etc]]> 2018-03-29 05:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247143499 Mihika Mihika6C https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247172589  I changed the storyline a lot :

:Jade's head felt hot and thick, filled with smoke of guilt. She was not yet ready to face the music. Kayley's words echoed in her head. " its easy! Its Easy!" Oh, why did i trust her? Jade whined.She trembled like a leaf as her eyes darted around the shop frantically searching for some magical fairy that would save her by turning her invisible. her nose flared as the Mrs.Hall snatched the calculator out of her pocket.' she had no right to touch my jacket!' Jade said, her mouth agape. Then again, she had no right to steal. the hairs on the back of her neck  were standing upright like soldiers in a army . Her brain was not functioning like it was supposed to. It was as if someone had glued her eyes to her eyelids and her mouth to her chin. her legs were trembling. Her knees buckled and she fell onto a display of notebooks. she lied still like a corpse which was what she had wanted to be right there, dead, invisible,unnoticible. she was so thankful that there were no other shoppers that day to add to her humiliation. Ignoring the mess, Jade stood back up almost immediately and ran as fast as her legs could carry her after Mrs Hall, hot tears streaming down her face like a waterfall. don't look at me ! don't look at me ! she thought, when the other shopkeeper saw her.she was as pale as a ghost. her emotions were iso uncontrollable that she locked herself in the washroom next to the storage room and sat there, rooted to the ground,in complete silence.Her toes were sweaty under the warmth of her socks and her tongue   as dry as sandpaper. " why did i trust her ?" T hey say the eyes are windows to the soul, so jade shut her windows when she heard knocking on the door.' Don't see me cry!" After a moment of hesitation, she opened it only to find a policewoman. she looked as fierce as a tiger yet as gentle as a swan. Her eyes shot daggers, but they were made of feathers. she was on the brink of a smile until she saw her hands. they were red and bulky, capable of knocking down a sumo wrestler. to make matters worse one of her hands were wrapped around a gun like she wanted to shoot her down .Jade was tempted to stay inside until she saw her dad. the hot tears came back like rivulets as she ran towards him and clinged onto his arm. To her surprise, he was not as mad as a bull, but very concerned, as if Jade was badly injured . Just then, Mrs.Hall approached , her frown as tilted as the titanic before it submerged. Her mouth was visible, her teeth grinding toghrther like a shark before an attack. Jades skin was not thick enough to accept all the cold stares from the policewomen and the shop owners. A tsunami of guilt washed over jade and before she knew it, her brain was flooded with questions . " Jade, which secondary school do you go to?" " jade! are you alright!" " have you stolen anything else from my shop? " they loomed over her with their horrifying questions .her ears were bursting with words of complaint.she tried to reply but couldn't . it was as if the guilt had chopped off her vocal chords. She shivered from head to toe as if regret had transported her to antartica,where the ice bergs were questions and the snow,fear . she covered her face with her long, lava red hair, and sat on the bench and cried. she cried until she couldn't cry any more. her eyes were red and puffy and her  shirt soaked with tears when she finally stood up , Dragging her leaden feet , with her arms and legs shaking in sheer trepidation and beads of sweat gushing from her forehead like a waterfall she answered most of the questions, still clinging to her dads arm as if it was the only . thing that kept her in reality .Despite her condition,  the policewoman with her same mundane expression, still asked Jade to follow her to the police station. her dad let go of jades hand and stared at jade as if he was wondering if she would disappear into thin air and save him the humiliation. unfortunately she didn't and the policewoman whom she saw first grabbed her hand and yanked her towards the  exit. after a moment of hesitation, Jade shook their hands off and really let go of all her emotions." IT WAS ALL  KAYLEY'S FAULT! '']]> 2018-03-29 08:42:18 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247172589 Riddhima https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247185214 Jade's head felt hot and thick and she momentarily felt giddy. As Mrs Hall reached for her jacket pocket, she thought of running away as fast as fast as lightning. However, she thought the better of it. If she ran, more people would chase after her and she would eventually be caught. Moreover, people would think of her as a cowardly thief. The hairs on Jade's neck stood up and her nose flared as Mrs Hall produced the calculator from Jade's pocket. As Jade saw the customers in the shop look at her, her eyes darted around in search of a magic potion that would make her invisible. She covered her face with her long hair in order to avoid her face being stored in the cameras of a few very inquisitive customers. Her knees were as wobbly as jelly as Mrs hall, on a phone call, beckoned Jade to follow her. Her ears were as red as tomatoes as she could not bear the guilt of what she had done. "It's easy." Kayley's voice rang in Jade's head. Why,oh why, she tried to be like Kayley? What had she been thinking? Her toes were sweaty under the warmth of her socks. She was told to wait in the storeroom until the police officer came. Jade locked herself in the storeroom and cried her heart out. She cried until she could cry no more and her eyes were extremely red and puffy when she heard knocking on the door. When she came face to face with a tiger-like fierce looking policewoman , Jade really let go of all her emotions. ]]> 2018-03-29 09:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247185214 Amy https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247199020 At that instance, Jade truly wished she could find a hole in the ground and squeeze through it. Her skin is not thick enough to hold all the cold stares and complains spilling out of the two strangers looming over her. Jade's ears were full of words of complaint and felt like it was bursting. Her eyes could not help but dart around every corner of the shop with guilt and regret. She bit her lips, trying to hold back her tears. The back of her neck felt cold. "Oh no! A ghost must be after me!" Jade thought with a bee in her bonnet. She completely lost touch with her legs and arms, and her whole body felt like it was turning into a lifeless zombie. She hoped she could travel back in time and start all over again.]]> 2018-03-29 10:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247199020 Asma https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247213066 Jade knew that she could not escape. Her palms started sweating and the only thing she was thinking about was the consequences of her actions. She stood there frozen, although she knew many pairs of eyes darted towards her. Her face turned as pale as a blank piece of paper. Her eyes darted everywhere around the shop with regret and folly. She could not move her legs and she could not move her lips as though it was like papers being glued and stuck to each other.Goosebumps appeared all over her arms as she got more and more nervous. The only thing she could ever wish for was to turn back time and forget about the whole incident that happened.]]> 2018-03-29 12:13:05 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247213066 Clarabelle Goh https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247220051 Jade froze as the store’s alarm went off. She knew there was no way she could get out of it. It all went well till now. Why must the store have an alarm? How did Kayley get past the alarm without getting caught? She wished she could dig a hole in the ground and crawl right into it. Her eyes farted around the store, hoping that her fairy godmother would magically appear right in front of her and let her get out of this mess. “I thought you said that whatever was on the counter was whatever you had?” the shopkeeper interrogated, staring right into Jade’s teary eyes. A chill that ran down Jade’s spine made Jade’s teary eyes explode. Tears ran down her soft cheeks like rivulets. “I’m sorry! I won’t do it again! Can you please let me off?” Jade pleaded, tears flowing down her cheeks. “I’ll need to report all shop thefts to the police,” the shopkeeper whispered, sotto voce. That statement made Jade bawl her eyes out.]]> 2018-03-29 12:38:37 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247220051 https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247230367 2018-03-29 13:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247230367 Min Jia😝 https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247254368 Jade knew that she had been discovered. She stood there, frozen to the spot. She did not dare to even move a single ankle. How she wished that there was some "Super Man" to save her from the trouble. Trembling from head to toe, she looked timidly at the shop owner and then tried to talk as calmly as she could. She was breathing hot air out of her nose like a dragon. Her mouth opened and closed, but no words came out as if she had lost her own voice. Her legs were trembling as if hr human legs turned into legs of a jellyfish. She felt as if she had lost total control of her body and was about to fall. In her mind, she wished that she could eat up all her actions and her words, so that she would not get in hot water, like now.]]> 2018-03-29 13:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247254368 Janya https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247429706 Jade's head felt hot as a tsunami of guilt and fear washed over her. As Mrs hall reached into her jacket, her heart pounded in her chest as fast as lightning. Her eyes scanned her entire surrounding staring deeply into the souls of everyone,s eyes hoping that no one would judge her. The familiar smell of guilt greeted her nose hoping to be friends with it as the policewoman's loud yet gentle voice rang in it. Her hairs on her neck stood on its ends as her hands and legs trembled in sheer trepidation. She opened her lemon like mouth but no words came out as she was fearful beyond words 

]]> 2018-03-30 04:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247429706 Nazeerah https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247442877 When I turned around quickly to face Mrs Hall as she called me,I froze in guilt and was anchored to the ground like a plant rooted to the soil as she asked me what was in my pocket.I stammered while replying with a simple 'nothing' as if my vocal cords had been chopped up. She reached into my pocket as if her hand was a shovel digging into dirt.She took out the calculator and stared right into my soul with her fierce eyes that could snap at you at any time.Beads of sweat slid down my face like a child on a slippery slide.When she grabbed my elbow and dragged me into a room,all of the other customers' eyes were glued to the scene .]]> 2018-03-30 07:34:44 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247442877 Zoe Tay https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247445053 There was fear in Jade's eyes and she bit her lip as she realized she was caught. Her ears were hot and red and her arms were stiff. The owner of the shop saying Jade's name brought the gloom of the night and the grim of death upon her. Beads of sweats gushed from Jade's forehead like a fountain and a cold feeling of impending doom coursed through her spine. Jade trembled like a leaf in the wind as her legs wobbled unsteadily like jelly fish, almost making her drop to the floor like a rag doll.]]> 2018-03-30 07:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247445053 Asha https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247451846 The hairs on the back of her spine stood up straight,and her tongue felt as dry and parched as sandpaper.Her entire face flushed as red as a tomato and the tips of her ears burned.Her legs felt heavier than lead,and her arms felt numb as she removed the calculator from her poclet]]> 2018-03-30 08:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247451846 hannah https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247572976 fear overtook her senses. she stood frozen like a rock as Mrs Hall walked toward her. without any other choice, her hands moved toward her pocket. her eyes darted around the shop, looking for an escape route. her legs trembled like jelly, and her toes were numb with fear. slowly, her hand drew the new gleaming black calculator from her pocket and reluctantly placed it in the hand of Mrs Hall. dragging her leaden feet, she slowly made her way after Mrs Hall into the storeroom.]]> 2018-03-31 04:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247572976 Nurul Huda https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247576012 Jade chided herself for replying to the woman from behind the counter, the moment she said " Nothing! ". If she had simply pretended to ignore the lady, she would not have been forced to surrender like a caught thief in a jewellery shop. She was as scared as a jack-rabbit that has heard the howl of a wolf. Her body shivered like a delicate leaf in a raging storm as she turned around to face the music. She silently prayed that her father were to not know about her theft. After all, ignorance is a bliss. With a heart as heavy as lead, she took the calculator from her pocket and faced the woman with guilty eyes]]> 2018-03-31 06:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247576012 Desiree https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247576264 Her legs were as stiff as an old grandmother dancing to hip-hop for the very first time. She stood rooted like a tree planted to the ground. Her limbs were feeling more numb as every second passed. 

She did not know what to do.

Kayley told it would be as easy as going to bed to sleep. Well, easy for a dishonest pig like her. 

To Jade, falling asleep was uneasy, especially when her brain was overloading with unwanted stress. It turned out, Kayley’s use of words did not apply to Jade at all.

 The moment she got caught, she definitely knew that she was dead meat soaked with boiling hot water. 

A million questions were riding on cars, racing through Jade’s mind, pestering her by asking what would happen to her next. Her eyes, on the other hand, were stuck open. Her brain was not functioning like it was supposed to. The cars the questions were riding on had crashed into the machine in her brain called ‘relaxation’. The machine was spilling out toxic chemicals named ‘panic’. 

Alas, the cars had exploded, making the questions the loudest it had ever been. The mind was in a mess, and her body was not cooperating well, either.

Jade’s stomach felt like a sack filled with a heavy load of stones. She did not not what her father was going to say about this, and she desperately hoped that he would not be angry with her.



]]> 2018-03-31 06:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247576264 Resham https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247579160 Her knees buckled , her head swimming . Everything was a blur after her arrest, her shoulders slumped lower than the Mariana Trench.Moments before she almost passed out, a flashlight brighter than her future shone in her face.Fear overtook her. What was she going to tell them. Kayley said it was going to be EASY, perhaps only for dishonest, uncultured swine like her. Why, oh why had she caved in to peer pressure. She would have preferred staying in a cave than in a police station. All that time, she could only think about how stupid she had been to trust Kayley.]]> 2018-03-31 07:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247579160 Clarabelle Tan https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247579520 [I changed the storyline and used the first person perspective for Jade] My head felt heavy, like burdens made of my conscience were laden on my head. They say the eyes are the windows to your soul, so I averted the woman’s strong gaze and looked at my feet. My mouth opened and closed like a goldfish, deciding whether to tell the woman the truth or not. “T-there’s nothing in my pocket.” I fibbed, my ears turning as red as blood flowing out an open wound. With my head still lowered, I slowly lifted my hand and stuffed it in my pocket and lifted it out again, still not taking the calculator out. I wanted to try to show the woman that my pocket was empty. Big mistake. When I stuffed my hand into my pocket, I had accidentally pressed the calculator in the front of the pocket. The woman could then visibly see the shape of the calculator in my pocket. She shook her head and stretched out her arm, with her palm facing directly at me and her fingers apart. “Show me, please.”She stared me right in the eyes. It was as if there were daggers made of fire that were shooting into my eyes; hot and unbearable. It was so unbearable that I had to look down again. On the outside, I looked normal and still in control. On the inside, it was the opposite. My conscience and the fear of the consequences were battling like soldiers in a war. Each of them had built up a wall at each side of my mind to block the other one’s attacks. The walls prevented me from thinking straight since it was like a blockage in my brain, causing me to suddenly break down because of the stress. Brick by brick, the walls that hold me up crumble as I continue to be in a dilemma. My emotions swirled like tsunamis building up, with no sign of ending. Like grey clouds filled with rainwater to the brim, waiting to pour down all the rain, the tsunamis inside me reached a point where it could not get taller. It needed an outlet to release all the water and it chose my eyes. Tears came rushing down my face. Without thinking, I reached into my pocket and lifted the calculator out. With my trembling hands, I handed the calculator to the woman.]]> 2018-03-31 07:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247579520 Jaania https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247587401 The moment Jade saw the shop owner, her legs and arms froze. The fear of getting arrested ruled her thoughts. Her hands turned clammy as she stared at the shop owner, thinking of what the consequences could have been. She immediately regretted her decision. ]]> 2018-03-31 10:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247587401 Delaney https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247642618 Jade froze on the spot as her mouth dried ,her eyes darted around as if trying to find a way out of this mess.Her feet turned into jelly and was getting cramped as she dared not move a muscle.Her hands trembled as she slowly stood upright ,her ears twitching as she walked over to the counter.She wished she could just turn back time and pretend she never stole,but it was too late ,what has been done has been done.The lady at the counter told her to come to her in a booming voice that scared Jade out of her wits.]]> 2018-04-01 04:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247642618 Noorul Hakeema https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247642653  Her face was as pale as a sheet. Her legs and arms trembled like jelly and her feet was numb .Jade was at a loss for words.Her eyes widened and her jaw dropped.She hung her head low in shame as she wondered what her parents would think of her. 

]]> 2018-04-01 04:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247642653 Drishyaa https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247645777 Jade's head felt hot and thick as she saw Mrs Hall approach her,asking if she had anything in her pocket.Her stood on end and she broke out in cold sweat.All was well until then.She knew she couldn't escape.“Do you have anything young lady?What's in your pocket?”,Mrs hall asked.”No..not..nothing,nothing at all",Jade mumbled.Her heart was pounding in her chest.However,knowing tht Jade took something,she reached her hand into Jade's pocket and thereit was,the shiny black calculator.]]> 2018-04-01 06:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247645777 Angel https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247661301 Jade shivered feverishly as she heard Mrs Hall’s high heels go click clack on the floor coming closer and closer to her. Beads of sweat started to stream down her neck down to her back. What almost stopped her from breathing was when Mrs Hall approached her and questioned, “What are you hiding in your bag young lady?” Her head felt so hot she could have fried an egg on it. “N...Nothing..” she stuttered as she gulped heavily. Jade’s hands trembled as she dug into her bag and gave Mrs Hall the shiny black calculator she swiped. She could not pretend any longer as keeping that shiny object in her bag was against her principles. She was afraid things would become big and it will even get her Father involved. ]]> 2018-04-01 11:50:55 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247661301 Calista https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247661951 Jade's legs shivered like a leaf as she wringed her hands in anxiety now that she was caught. Her eyes widened in shock as she licked her lips in fear of what the lady would do to her. Her nose tingled as she instantly regretted stealing the calculator. ]]> 2018-04-01 12:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247661951 AMIRAH amirahsunar21 https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247665731 2018-04-01 13:10:11 UTC https://padlet.com/misssylvianne/iwdzv1wwt8yi/wish/247665731