Interactos 2017 - ENG3 G2 by VANESSA LISSET ECHEVERRIA MAQUILON https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5 Write about one Interactos 2017 event applying FUTURE and PAST TENSES. Give feedback to a partner, too. en-us 2017-10-18 21:56:36 UTC 2023-05-03 16:17:04 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Optimplaces.png Vanessa's Example vanessa_echeverria https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198497177 I am a super fan of Adelhaid so I am going to attend their rock concert on sunday afternoon at 16h30 with some friends at south campus. 
I know that Adelhaid will play their new CD album because I have checked their social networks and they did that last month in another concert. They might sing my favorite song which is "Ni un segundo". Also, I might ask the main singer, Denisse Lalama, to sign my t-shirt at the end of the performance. For sure, it will be awesome! ]]> 2017-10-19 00:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198497177 ROGER = 8,5 lokorog https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198859783 I'm going to attend the play "A dead man at the end of the foot." I have a lot of expectations about this event. Many say that it is an interesting MONOLOGUE monologo, based on a literary story, and I imagine that, if this is a theatrical genre, the character would have to show much more scenic presence. I have no information about the story, and I decided not to look for it or read it until I WILL SEE saw the staging. Hearing the name, I can convince myself that there might be A some story about death in the plot or maybe the title is totally misleading. This afternoon is the premiere of the show. Sure, I will be excited.

The show was incredible. People thought the seats FILLED would fill up quickly and some people STAYED would stay outside. There was something that bothered me, was that someone from the public did not turn off their HIS / HER cell phone. People have to understand that entering TO a theater to contemplate a work, is like being part of a ritual. The acting work was very good.

REMARKS:
1. Great comments on David's writing.
2. As Jesus wrote, it is not necessary you translate events' names.
3. You barely use future structures in the first part  and there are some grammar errors.]]> 2017-10-19 20:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198859783 DAVID = 6 david_caleropin https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198929374 I am going to attend "siguiente round". I just choose this event because it's not toO early (11am). I don't know ANYTHING nothing about this event, but I'm going to attend it because I want to finish the homework.
I might go to the rock concert on sunday. It's going to play "Adelhaid" they just play really cool and I would like to buy their new single, but I'm not really sure if I can go there because this weekend I'm not going to be in Guayaquil.

REMARKS:
1. You did not write the second part in PAST SIMPLE. So, there are only 85 words of 150.
2. Do not forget first personal pronoun (I) is always in capital letters.
3. You did not write any comments on a partner's writing.]]> 2017-10-20 03:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/198929374 Jesus = 7,50 israeljesu https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199129129 I like to listen to all kind of music so, I AM going to attend the concert “El animal más bonito” that will perform on Saturday morning FROM at 10:00 Am TO 11:00  AT “mini teatro” at IN THE south campus.
I don´t know about them but I imagine that will be a VERY GOOD concert very good so, I will tell my brother to go WITH whit me but I am sure HE I can’t so, I will have to go alone. I like to LISTEN lisent to bands because I can criticize musicians as a music producer.

Interactos WAS A TIRING went a taired week. I attended to event "El animal mas bonito". This event was very nice, It WAS went a live  concert where the musical inStruments were the protagonists.
I liked the song that talked about the animal and each instruments represented an animals. I didn´t  like THE SINGERS' PERFORMANCE BECAUSE I DID NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY SAID. the sound to singers because it was not understand that the wewe sainging.
I would liked to go with my kids beCAuse the concert was for children also THEY them would have liked to go to see the concert.

REMARKS:
1. Content is appropiate but several grammar and spelling errors impede effective communication.
2. I deleted your last comment on Roger's writing because it was not correct.]]> 2017-10-20 16:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199129129 Carlos Mera = 8 coma26 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199283239 I am a very curious person therefore I am going to go to the concert of guitar and charango of the master Jeronimo Rachjemberg, on my expectative I THINK Jeronimo will play a new music for me and my ears. Maybe I MIGHT ask the teacher for an autograph. I will arrive early at the concert, with this concert for I am still standing all concert, (THE IDEA IS LOST) with this concert I would like to learn to play the charango, I AM sure it will be awesome or it might get boring me, I don't know exactly WHAT this is going to happen.

Well, finally I decided to go to the concert of the master Geronimo. I saw the concert standing in a corner of the auditorium, this concert expanded my musical ear, it was an hour and a half of music with strings, after Geronimo dedicated a song to the disappeared students in Mexico. Finally, Geronimo finished playing the charango and gave thankED to the public assistant.

REMARKS:
1. Good sentences applying required structures but in first paragraph some words did not connect properly losing idea.
2. You should have provided more feedback on your partner's writing.
]]> 2017-10-21 16:45:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199283239 steven Valenzuela = 8 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199298359 I'm not a fan of Adelhaid , but I love the song called “Me voy”, this song is awesome, then I'm going to attenD their rock concert on Sunday from at 16:30 to 17:00 WITH wiht my family at south campus of UNIVERSITY OF ARTS. Arts's univeristy. I don't know how the weather will be, it might BE sunny, so I will carry a sunblock and a cap to protect MYSELF me from the sun. I hope they play a new song. I would like them to give me an autograph. I'll see Denisse, I would like to take me a photo with her. Without a doubt, It will be incredible.

The concert was so great, it WAS NOT BAD didn't make a terrible WEATHER climate, I was late for the concert, because my car was damaged. I could only hear the "Ningun segundo mas" song. I took a picture with Denisse, she was a very funny and kind person, she gave me the autograph, I liked the song, it was a very fantastic concert.

REMARKS:
1. Well developed content but some spelling and grammar mistakes affect communication.
2. Your comment was not clear on your partner's writing.]]> 2017-10-21 20:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199298359 Daniela Buitron = 9 danielabui034 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199416707 I'm going to the panel of dialogue "100 posters for independence" on Wednesday morning at 11h. At night, I will go to the INAUGURATION opening in the civic center. On Thursday, I will not attend any event because I have classes all day, but on Friday I might go to “next round” at 10h. After that, I think I will go to the “shared learning experiences”, and then I will go to the projection of  "the clock of Velasco Ibarra", next FINALLY, I have to go to the dialogue panel on arts research.

I attended the panel of dialogue "100 posters for independence" on wednesday morning. I COULDN'T can't go to  interactos on Thursday because I had classes all day. On friday I can watched "El reloj de Velasco Ibarra" documentary and next I can go to attendED the dialogue about investigation of art. In the evening, I attended the experimental music concert. On Sunday, I attended the Salsa music concert and I danced with my friends.

REMARKS:
1. It is not necessary you translate names of events and in second paragraph, past simple was not written properly.
2. There are some punctuation errors which interrupt the streaming of the text.
3. Good feedback on your partner's writing.]]> 2017-10-23 00:56:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199416707 Peter Tufiño = 8 andres_tufino91 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199659559 I like the music of Los Corrientes I think it's an innovative band from the Ecuadorian music scene, they have an important originality in their lyrics and music, I'm going to go to their concert on Tuesday, they could play "when you start to hate Me" that is a song very well produced.
I would like to make a song for them in the meantime I must continue studying and acquiring more musical knowledge to be able to work with them in my recording studio.

I had the opportunity to attend the event called creative readings about Ecuadorian literature, the event was held on Thursday at 5pm in the agora, my expectations were high but the truth I felt that IT I lacked more dynamics and creativity WHEN at the time of reading of several Ecuadorian authors READ, it might have been better to make a different version of the selected readings.

REMARKS:
1. As your partner's comment below, you did not apply future tenses as much as it was required.
2. You did not give feedback on a partner's writing.
3. It is not necessary you translate names of events.]]> 2017-10-23 16:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199659559 Carlos Avendaño Galarza. = 9,5 Carlosproduction https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199687674 1.  I As a future musical producer, I would like to participate in events projects, so I am going to attend on Thursday the presentation of the concert "The most beautiful animal" with some MUSICAL PRODUCTION partners of the musical production. I might SEE me to observe the moment they perform WHEN THEY DO the installation of equipment and the sound test, as this will help me in my professional life, since it will allow me to know the interaction, coordination and teamwork that is needed when organizing a concert. It will be interesting to attend the event.   

2.- The day of the presentation "the most beautiful animal" held on Thursday I had the opportunity to observe the organization at the time of assembling, preparing and placing the necessary equipment; I also learned with them the necessary steps and communication when setting up a presentation. Observe the sound test, the communication from producer to musician and animator, which resulted in a good event.

REMARKS:
1. Good content applying required tenses with few errors but it is not necessary you translate names of events.
2. Great comment on your partner's writing.]]> 2017-10-23 17:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/199687674 Diego Zambrano = 8 diego_zm94 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/200506851 I might go to interactos depending on how MUCH many homeworks I have to do, the concert of  “tayos tayos tayos” and “los corrientes” look fine for me, music for having a little bit of fun. I would like to see Huaira´s interactive music performance on Sunday, she is well known for her concerts and her mix between ethnic and contemporary music, really inspiring, but Sunday IS are quite busy for me. On Sundays usually I go to shopping some art supplies for the week and do my personal artworks.

I never expected to attend any activity of interactos (because the centro civico it´s too far from my home) but my girlfriend told me that she would like to attend to the concert ON of the Wednesday at night (in which played two “bands” called “tayos tayos tayos” and “los Corrientes”). So I went with NO any expectationS, and well, the concert was awful in every way (music, sound, crowd). I was going to the performance/concert of Huaira (a singer) but was impossible for me to go, a lot of traffic at 6pm, and go from villa club to centro civico it´s not funny.

REMARKS: 
1. You should have used more future forms in first paragraph.
2. Good feedback on your partner's writing but no photo as required.]]> 2017-10-25 16:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/200506851 KAHOOT WINNERS UNIT 10 EXTRA POINT FOR TEST vanessa_echeverria https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/200646899 1. David Calero
2. Daniela Buitrón
3. Pedro Tufiño]]> 2017-10-26 00:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/ivyr2y62g9e5/wish/200646899