Week 10 by ISC all users https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9 Made with big dreams en-us 2021-08-03 08:17:10 UTC 2024-11-21 18:25:47 UTC hello@padlet.com Notes for Writing sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667641083 Intro: Background 

Thesis: tech neg impact health 

Main Body 1: tech good health 

Nelson (2017) – Smartwatch good for health 

-        Figs on health – understand progress 
-        tracks heart rate 
-        sets goals and targets = motivation 

Main Body 2: tech neg impact health

Nelson (2017) – 

Conclusion: 





]]> 2021-08-03 08:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667641083 shahzaib https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667643136 Intro: Background 

Thesis: tech neg impact health 

Main Body 1: tech good health 

Nelson (2017) – Smartwatch good for health 

-              Figs on health – understand progress 

Enabling self-monitoring of personal activity

Promotes a healthy life style

Main Body 2: tech neg impact health

Nelson (2017) – text while driving

]]> 2021-08-03 08:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667643136 Nasim Sikdar Rahi https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667644882 The essay is about we are socially, physically, and cognitively weaker as a result of technology. I’m agree with this statement because now a days day by day we are depending on technology.

Main body 1

Nelson (2017) – Smart watch is good for health.
·       It is connected with our body.
·       Smart watch give us information about our health activity to keep us fit.
·       It is advance technology watch with amazing feature for medical activity.
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Nelson (2017) – Smartwatch good for health

Main Body one-
There plenty of points to favour that smartwatch is good for health.First and foremost, samsung company design a smartwatch samsung galaxy watch 3 which has fairly decent activity, fitness, and sleep tracking. It has also other benefits for health. Secondly,it can gives us health advices and protection tips.Thirdly,just about every smartwatch out there will warn you if you’re spending too much of your day sitting still. Being hunched over a laptop all day with little to no exercise has been directly linked to severe health issues such as diabetes, obesity,Nelson (2017) 

]]> 2021-08-03 08:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667645935 Done by Hifzur & Aminul 2597962 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667686241 2021-08-03 09:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667686241 Updated version by Hifzur & Aminul 2597962 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667713094 2021-08-03 10:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1667713094 REfutation paragraph sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668751671 Some people claim that technology can good for our health. For example, according to Nelson (2017), there are plenty of points in favour that smartwatch which can be good for health. First and foremost, samsung company design a smartwatch from samsung galaxy watch 3 which has fairly decent activity, fitness, and sleep tracking. It can give us health advices and protection tips. Just about every smartwatch out there will warn us if we’re spending too much of our day sitting still. To summarise, these smartwathes can provide plenty of health options.  
 
REFUTATION - tech neg impact health
 
¢  It may be true that {summarise and acknowledging the counter argument}; we need to consider …{present your thesis and reject the counter}. 
]]> 2021-08-04 09:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668751671 kim https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668760750 On the other hand, It is argued that Technology can bring some disadvantages for people’s health. In fact, Nelson (2017) believed that it is extremely easy to neglect Individuals’s duty when using smart technology. For example, accident victims who texting messages by smartphone or using Tesla autopilot which lead to the result of crashes. Another compelling reason why is that Using smart technology as tablet, laptop, smart phone too much, Residents are able to decline about the mind and body mainly because of less conversation and socialize directly with other people]]> 2021-08-04 09:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668760750 Daniel https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668761291 -          Social medias create an unrealistic standard for young people, which can lead to insecurities and, as a result, cause depression. Technology also leads to less physical interaction which can lead people into not developing social skills which are needed for work, school, relationships, etc… Another factor that is online harassment, which can affect people to the point of depression, and worse in some cases (Nelson, 2017). Nelson (2017) also mentions the use of smartwatches to keep track of our lifestyle, however, it is proven that not only the blue light from smartphones but also from smartwatches can cause negative impacts on our sleep patterns, thus affecting our physical health. 

]]> 2021-08-04 09:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1668761291 Write a Refutation for Hifzur - Animul sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669863027 Many people claim that there are benefits to our health when using technology. For example, Nelson (2017) states that the Smartwatch provides many of these benefits. We may also comprehend our health, such as physical activity and nutrition. The device can also track our health. For instance,  if required, it is possible to share our condition with our healthcare doctor. We can also set the goal with smart watch, for instance, 10,000 steps a day for our excellent health care, and smart watch may assist us. We can also set a specific amount of required sleep. In many respects, watch can guide us in an intelligent way.

 

¢ It may be true that {summarise and acknowledging the counter argument}; we need to consider …{present your thesis and reject the counter}. 

]]> 2021-08-05 09:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669863027 Ryajul https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669868000 Plenty of people state that there are benefits to our health when using technology. For example, Nelson (2017) declare that the Smartwatch provides many of these benefits. It may also comprehend our health, including physical activity and nutrition. The device can also track our health. To begin with,  if required, it is possible to share our condition with our healthcare doctor. Another point is that we can set the goal with smart watch, for instance, 10,000 steps a day for our excellent health care, and smart watch may assist us. We can also set a specific amount of required sleep. In many respects, watch can guide us in an intelligent way.]]> 2021-08-05 09:39:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669868000 Reading sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669870890 2021-08-05 09:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/iv2t33hxfhj2l0c9/wish/1669870890