https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw Time's up! Now you can check your grade. Thank you for the hard work and efforts that you have made so far. ;) en-us 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC 2022-03-29 10:01:40 UTC hello@padlet.com paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268048 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268048 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268050 Use red post for those who have not presented their works on the consultation day.]]> 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268050 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268054 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268054 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268055 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268055 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268056 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268056 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268057 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268057 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268058 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268058 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268061 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268061 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268062 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268062 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268063 2022-03-07 09:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081268063 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081776747 2022-03-07 14:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2081776747 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082784475 2022-03-08 00:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082784475 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082988772 2022-03-08 02:18:59 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082988772 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082989647 2022-03-08 02:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2082989647 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2083131408 2022-03-08 03:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2083131408 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2083133999 2022-03-08 03:38:03 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2083133999 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085489057 1. The body and the headline are nice and connected one another. Good job for the brand awareness!

2. follow the step by step in making the elements for direct selling, ok? ;)

Thank you & keep the spirit on!]]> 2022-03-09 06:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085489057 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085514763 1. brand awareness: I do love the way you observed the references, but the offering (body).
The body is connected to its target audience and well represented by its headline, so.. good job!
You can complete the visual support for brand awareness.

2. Body - direct selling --> grammar check:
With this phone camera, we can made a Hollywood film quality with an easier way without buy a proper camera, besides that the features that Apple gaves can made our life easier.

Correction: can +v1, without + v-ing, how many features? I think you just mention its camera, so it's only a feature, not using a plural form (s).
1. can make
2. without buying
3. the given feature can make our lives easier.

3. The CTAs are clear and persuasive! nice moves!

4. Headline: The Powerful! what powerful? remember that "powerful" is an adjective and therefore it should be followed by a noun. 

The rests are great!

You deserve an A for your progress!
thank you!

]]> 2022-03-09 07:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085514763 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515220 2022-03-09 07:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515220 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515654 2022-03-09 07:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515654 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515732 2022-03-09 07:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085515732 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085520009 a very excellent and representative headline!
the headline represents its body.

next, please continue the progress and follow the step by step process in making advertisement elements (from value - media).

Keep the spirit high!
Cheers!]]> 2022-03-09 07:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085520009 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085542878 Thank you for submitting your progress.
1. The body is clear, but my best suggestion is to reconsider the headline, for the word 'satisfy'. Are you sure that the word 'satisfy' represents the body offering?

2. from the possible target audiences you may pick one / some so that it will be easier for you to arrange the ad.

3. Worksheet 1 refers to brand awareness
Worksheet 2 refers to direct selling
please separate the two. Remember that you have to make 2 products: 1 advertisement for brand awareness and 1 advertisement for direct selling.
So which one will use the poster and which ad will use mini video?

Thank you!]]> 2022-03-09 07:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085542878 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085547613 It's recommended to make the elements step by step which from the value and the last step is to decide the media, biar nyambung antar elemennya.

I think there are still lots to catch up! Go complete the elements soon then..

Please read the criteria, guides, rubric, steps, and my general feedback.

Cheers!]]> 2022-03-09 07:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085547613 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085553804 before making the script you can check the detailed guide.
there are several elements in the advertisement.

please check the element for each type of advertisement.

Check the advertising project slide and the other previous slides.
Remember this project and materials give significant contributions to your midterm test and the final assessment (PTS dan Ulangan Harian).]]> 2022-03-09 07:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085553804 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085560406 Appreciated much the completeness of worksheet 1.
Recommendations:
1. You still promote Nike's brand, therefore, it will be better to mention their product, logo, etc. on your brand awareness ad with emphasis.

2. make the headline of the brand awareness more persuasive.
for example:
Adventure further with Nike
(then you give the body to support your headline, as you have made).

Please continue the progress! follow the step to make significant progress of direct selling ads.

Thank you!]]> 2022-03-09 07:48:11 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085560406 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085563097 You have chosen a brand, it's a good start followed by knowing its value and underlining your reason.

but there is still a lot to catch up on.
Please read the criteria, guides, rubric, steps, and my general feedback.

Go complete it soon!]]> 2022-03-09 07:49:45 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085563097 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085599090 Aloi/4
Danis/15
Ben/16]]> 2022-03-09 08:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2085599090 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088533665 Turu Wae Ra Resiko : 
Gerard/18
Evan/19
Bastian/20]]> 2022-03-10 15:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088533665 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088537060 2022-03-10 15:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088537060 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088538410 2022-03-10 15:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088538410 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088541291 2022-03-10 15:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088541291 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088542350 2022-03-10 15:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088542350 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088814435 2022-03-10 17:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088814435 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088815664 2022-03-10 17:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2088815664 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089109465 2022-03-10 20:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089109465 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089138386 2022-03-10 20:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089138386 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089456146 2022-03-11 01:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089456146 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089458034 2022-03-11 01:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089458034 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089458903 2022-03-11 01:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089458903 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089463809 Final Project

Partai Demokratik Sosialis Rakyat Semesta:
- Tetuka/08
- Arpe/10
- Dion/11]]> 2022-03-11 01:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089463809 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089466482 2022-03-11 01:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2089466482 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090458691 2022-03-11 13:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090458691 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090472838 2022-03-11 13:54:13 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090472838 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090476326 2022-03-11 13:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090476326 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090477038 2022-03-11 13:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090477038 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090486553 2022-03-11 14:01:49 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090486553 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090487403 What If? 
Alex/03 
Boni/09 
Rafael/30]]> 2022-03-11 14:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090487403 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090559946 Mbuh :
Gading/02
Adit/26
Marcello/27]]> 2022-03-11 14:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090559946 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090577654 2022-03-11 14:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090577654 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090581055 2022-03-11 14:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090581055 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090581876 2022-03-11 14:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090581876 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090585244 BAGAS 22
CALVIN 32
KEANU 24]]> 2022-03-11 14:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090585244 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090585681 2022-03-11 14:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090585681 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090740247 Members
Karel/23
Lintang/28
Samuel/31]]> 2022-03-11 16:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090740247 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090772944 2022-03-11 16:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090772944 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090791419 Grub Who Am I: 
1. Albert Chaderick Fanegilmore/01
2. Christopher Ethan Wibowo/12
3. Felix Dunan Wisesa/17]]> 2022-03-11 16:59:27 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090791419 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090797915 2022-03-11 17:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090797915 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090807548 2022-03-11 17:10:41 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090807548 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090823756 2022-03-11 17:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090823756 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090824361 2022-03-11 17:21:49 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090824361 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090824920 2022-03-11 17:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2090824920 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092222753 where are the updated brand awareness and direct selling ads?]]> 2022-03-13 10:56:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092222753 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092235359 where is the brand awareness ad?]]> 2022-03-13 11:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092235359 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092236557 where are the updated brand awareness and direct selling ads?]]> 2022-03-13 11:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092236557 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092237989 where are the updated brand awareness and direct selling ads?]]> 2022-03-13 11:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092237989 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092239758 No CTA on direct selling ads?]]> 2022-03-13 11:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092239758 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092242201 2022-03-13 11:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092242201 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092270839 2022-03-13 12:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092270839 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092271346 2022-03-13 12:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092271346 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092964926 2022-03-14 02:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092964926 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092971480 2022-03-14 02:49:45 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2092971480 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2111925651 2022-03-24 14:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2111925651 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2111931109 2022-03-24 14:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2111931109 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112252032 2022-03-24 16:39:42 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112252032 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112252634 2022-03-24 16:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112252634 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112266798 2022-03-24 16:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112266798 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112268048 2022-03-24 16:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2112268048 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2113848024 2022-03-25 13:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/iuq3cwqh0ryrgwrw/wish/2113848024