2. In the last sentence of the introduction, I think it looks a bit complicated and the expression is not very clear. Is there any way to make it more concise. (I meant to express definition/same/different and my opinion on its different limitations)
3. Can I use the official concept for my introduction to the definition of financial accounting and management accounting? Or can I only express it in my own language.
4. The Compare and contrast  are indicated in the title requirements. Does mentioning the similarities count as off-topic?
5. The order of my second part and third part, is it better to keep it as it is now or to change it? (If the answer to the fourth question is no, please ignore this question.)
6. My second and third parts respectively contain several small sub-points. Can the general sentence or transition sentence at the beginning of each paragraph be a separate paragraph? Or it would be better to put it together with the first small point.