Remember the verb form used after the word love.

You used past perfect only once.

Great thoughts on your expectations.

You used tag questions but not correctly.

Perhaps the music was too loud :p

You have very good fluency and pronunciation.

Very good job.

At times you were looking at where I suppose you had your papers to remember information.

You used all the necessary elements.

You had a couple of sentences that weren't finished: 1. It was a catastrophic _________?

2. They had been spending time ___________?

Be careful with those things.

Maybe you can create a simpler outline so you don't depend a lot on a paper.

Don't forget to check and verify the pronunciation of all the words before your video.

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