This year, I want to improve my Maths, Physics, and English. I wish I would pass HCMUS or UEH, because those are famous Universities. It may be difficult but I believe I can do it. I hope I will have many good memories of my last year at THSG.

Well, I don’t know what kind of person I will be after 10 years. I hope I will be more mature, live better, and my friends will be too. I wish I would become an IT Engineer or Economic Master at that time. 10 years later, we may not see each other, but I won’t forget all of you.

This isn’t the first time we’ve met but i still have to introduce myself. Let’s start with my name. I’m Phương Quỳnh but you call me by the name Ngân, which my parents use to call me. So, I’ve been studying at THSG for seven years and I have spent three years of high school on being a part of A2. That means I’ve had a lot of great memories with all of us. When I was young, I used to be a imaginative girl, I had thought a lot about my future, and I’m trying my best to make it reality. I've been thinking about traveling to some wonderful areas: Tibet, Athens or Rome, Xian. But I haven't actually done anything yet, maybe. I’m harboring to be a multilingual girl, but it’s very hard to do. I’m in the age 17 and just know Vietnamese, English and just a little bit of Chinese. I’m also keen on Asian history and some Ancient culture, such as China and Greece. It motivates me a lot to be better. But that's not my only goal.  I extremely hope that I could be a person who love myself most. I always think that tommorow may be a better day, but also be a worse day, just be yourself and love yourself, that's the only thing you need to do. It's too early to talk about 10 years from now, but just remember that no matter what happens, we will be okay. 

In Chinese they have an idiom “来日方长”, it can be understood that the day of the future are still long, that means things can be done. It’s the last thing I want to say, and hope that we will try our best to make life better.

To introduce myself, I’m a cheerful, sociable, and optimistic person, I always want to bring a positive attitude to everybody, but I am usually shy with strangers or people older than me. Am I an ambivert?? I love to travel and explore new places, but I always want to go back home too. In my spare time – especially every Sunday not only do I like going to coffee to talk about everything on Earth and driving around Sai Gon with my friends, but also I love staying at home with my family, lying on my bed on lazy Sunday to watch movies all the time. What a contradictory person! Oh wait, does anyone have the same hobby as me? “Lying on the bed on a lazy Sunday morning” is so comfortable. In my opinion, I’m just a normal person who doesn’t have any talents. I am also very curious so I will try anything I’m interested in. I can play guitar but a little, can draw but not too good, I like playing sport like badminton, Inline skate, skateboarding, swimming… but not skillful at all. Sometimes, I admire people that good at something and concentrate on it. But no biggie, if somebody feels like me, doesn’t have a hint of self-pity, I believe we will find out our talent soon. Because each of us is the only one version and has different pros. Now I’m a senior in high school, I want to do a lot of things. Firstly, I’m gonna try my best to learn Maths, Chemistry, Biology well in this school year for passing in PNT University (Pham Ngoc Thach University of Medicine), my biggest dream. Although it is so hard, it will be worth it. Secondly, I’m not good at English maybe a little… scared, but this year I’ve met you, Ms.Anna. You make me feel more self-confident, so I will try to improve English skill bit by bit. And last, I want to make memories with my cute classmates and enjoy this year with them, wish Covid-19 would pass quickly. 

10 years is a period of time that is neither short nor long, but enough for us to imagine and decide who we are. Each of us has our dreams and aspirations. And everyone hopes that 10 years later they will be achieving that dream. Despite not ensuring anything, I believe I will be happy with all my choice in the next 10 years and become the best version of Kim Anh. All in all, thanks for reading this. All of you are doing great, I expect that you will be achieving all your dreams soon, guys. Give it your best shot! ^^

      He is studying in class 12A2 of Sai Gon Practice High School. In class, he has few friends but no closet to anyone. He study not good at during time before, that’s right. I bet he didn’t like to see that. But he has some interests and a few talent. I’ll talk to you :))

      At first, he like playing offline video games and had spent around 10 hours for play game in every day with his friends when he was a secondary student. Waste a lot time for it so crazy in the last but it give him a lots memories that now if I want, I wouldn’t have anymore. That’s a bad boy you see :)

      Secondly, he very like singing. But his introvert not show it out, piano talent too. He try to study 2 university at the same time. One is Ho Chi Minh music institude and one I’ll tell you below later.

      The next, I had told you that he like playing game upon. He in relationship with his gf. Especially is he meet her on game and start at that for now, September 18 this day is 1 year. In spite of his introvert, he very take care for his gf. That is the things I admired about him.

     At last, he really like physics and AI. Beside, he also interesting in playing basketball. He usually play that instead of workout every afternoon. But now city is locked down by COVID-19 so I don't see he hang out anymore.

     He objected that year is passed encyclopedia university. That is a big problem for him. He should try alots for that target. I thinks he can do that as what he do at secondary school. He confident that he can change himself in this year. I support him for that.

     In the next 10 years future, we also him want to have a good job at least, if a well-paid job is very nice for a life consume. Hope about famiily closet together. The future can't predict so we should enjoy ours life and do the best as you can.

     Thank dear for reading!

Last thing to say, i hope we will always respect each other and enjoy the time we spent together.

Honestly speaking, I’ve been feeling really depressed lately because of love. It is this relationship problem that makes my mind go completely blank. It makes me want to be alone. 

In this Covid-19 epidemic, I have to study online instead of going to school after summer holiday. Indeed, one drawback of engaging in the virtual learning environment is that it does not allow face-to-face interaction which plays a crucial role in my understanding of the lessons. Although online learning brings me a few disadvantages, I understand that we should have quarantine to keep healthy for ourselves and people around. Hence, I will try to balance my study and other aspects of my life. 

In my free time, I usually listen to music, do exercise to keep fit or learn whatever I like. I’m into exploring adventurous challenges or outdoor activities such as climbing, diving, surfing or logic problems. In addition, I have a thirst for fashion and the way designers create their styles. Therefore, I often learn about how to dress and invest in some fashion accessories to make myself look better. Sometimes, I think about my future, what will I do later? I don't know but what I do know is that I'm passionate about science, it’s very interesting, and it attracts me. Maybe I'll be a biologist in the future, maybe a psychologist or even an A-list star. I have a wish to go to Germany, which has many top-ranked universities in the world. It’s not a piece of cake, but I'll do my best to make my dream come true. Even if I cannot achieve my goals, at least I try my best and I will feel happy. 

I hope members of 12A2 will see each other soon. Thank you for spending time reading my statements. Love all.

I feel a little bit awkward writing this introduction because I rarely share about myself. (Even all my online accounts look like some random fake accounts). I’m a type of person who prefers observing than joining, which sounds not interesting. In my opinion, it’s more fun to be a reader than be a main character of stories. Besides that, I’m easy-going, calm and optimistic. Sometimes I suddenly zone out and be in a world of my own without reasons.

Since we are studying in grade 12th, my studies is now my priority concern. Unfortunately, I haven’t had any specific plan for my future after high school. The problem is I don’t have either favorite subjects or subjects which I’m good at. In our school days, it seems like some of you misunderstand that I study Literature well. Despite the fact that I can read books every single day without getting bored, Literature is still one of my worst nightmare. I think that English is my comfort zone. It doesn’t make me feel under pressure and I don’t have to worry about it too much. Although I don’t really like English, I will try my best this year because being taught by Ms. Anna is a biggest motivation for me.

And my goal this year, of course, is to graduate and go to university.

“Dear myself in the next 10 years, you’re still alive right?”. You can think I’m silly but honestly, I will be thankful if 10 years later I’m still alive. I can’t know if my future will be bright or full of troubles, however, it’s not a big problem. Life is still going on.

(My best luck in my school life is being a part of A2, seriously. Thank you!)

   In this universe, I'm just a normal star like other stars. But I know, I may have some mystery in my mind that makes me different. I'm a Pisces, so I'm probably a little more sensitive than everyone else. Because one of your words can make me sad in a day. It can be seen as pros or cons as you can be an emotional person or you are though over-reacting. Sometimes I feel guilty for being so sensitive, but I can't deny or hide it, because it's part of mine, it's something that makes me special. And if you're my BF, congratulations , you have a unique gift in your life. When you feel blue, I'm ready to make you laugh. Besides that, I am fascinated with drawing, reading, writing, and traveling around the world. In English, I want to improve my pronunciation and speak confidently with a foreign. Another goal is that I need to train to have a strong will, as "no pain no gain". Instead of feeling regretful about mistakes, I am going to learn from failure and take an opportunity to do it again. And who am I in 10 years? That's a quite difficult question for me to answer right now. Being understand myself clearly, it is demanded a rough journey to know what I actually want to be. 10 years later, I hope I will be more mature and have a favorite job, which can afford the comforts in my life. Also, it'll be great if I have a partner to travel together and share everything for the rest of our life. It seems unreality though, but I am interested in helping children study who are living in a remote village have a better life too

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Starting from the day I got this nickname, it was the most ridiculous day of my entire life which is 8 years ago! Well I am a sociable person so it is odviously to say that I have lots of friends and all of them are very nice. They recognized me as a clean-tounged guy, they hadn’t heard any bad words from me since the first day we met. However, things are always alter through time. At that day, my group invited me to play an Esport game, then I accepted immediately cause I am addited to these kinds of game, especially playing with my gamemate. I was immersing myself in to the champion I played and spread out strong enthusiasm. Finally, the time had came, I matched with a stronger opponents. They completely destroyed my team hard enough to activate my anger and I started to say my first “bad words”.  My friends were all shocked. They begin to say *beep beep* whenever I make obscene speech. Continuously, the name “Beep” was born and stick with me until now. Not just only a simple nickname, it is also a miracle power which helps me to connect to all of my friends. The name Beep is also stand for “ Beneficent Enthusiasm Empathetic Practical” which emphasize my personalities. 

Additionally, I am confident with my chess and Chinese chess skills because I had had many chance to contact with high technique players since I was a little kid. It paid me back with many achievements and medals. Once I luckily recieved a special tickets to participate in a chess championship series which is the biggest chess tournament I have ever had. Besides intellectual sports, I also dip myself in to football. I have a singular sentiment to football since playing this king sport helps me develop a better version of myself and it brings me closer to my friends. Ofcourse, it always comes with many unforgettable moments. Especially at the time me and my friends were trying our best to win a schoolwide tournament. It was so emotional, though we just won the second place.

Talking about my objectives this year, I am pretty sure getting high scores in group B in University entrance examination is my top goal. I am trying hard with Chemistry, Science and Math which are 3 of my best subject. Nevertheless, achiving a 7.5 to 8 band IELTS certificate is a condition to support my dream which is learning in a top medical school. Therefore IELTS certificate can also represent my strong point that can provides me a smoother path to success future.

10 years later, I hope that I will get a suitable job which fullfill my expectation and what I deserve for all of my hard-working period. In total, I will be a successful doctor. Furthermore, behind a successful man is a wonderful woman, so that I wish my current girl will follow me to the rest of my life and be my wonderful woman.

For the last, in spite of the distember pandemic, I believe our A2 family will keep union and construct memorable memories. Love you all <3
 
 

 About myself, I like math, chemistry and biology and they are my important subjects. They will help me for my future plants. I also like history and geography because they show many sides of things but i pretty bad at remembering.I hate english because i can't remeber the vocabulary .Fortunately,Ms Anna is my english teacher.I hope she will help me better.My hobby is playing games in my freetime. My objective this year is to graduate and get to a university. In the next 10 years, I can be different from now , but I definitely miss the attached memories with my friend. I hope my friends get what they want. Thanks for reading !!

Intro: Passion is the most important factor.

Topic sentence 1: Perhaps income is essential when peoples choose the occupation, that is not the most crucial.

 ->Job has to have positive influence -> development of human civilization

Topic sentence 2: Nevertheless, passion also performs the paramount role in choosing the occupation.

--Generate energy and motivation, happy -> hasten efficiency of working

Conclusion: In conclusion, all the arguments which are displayed justified that income is not the most vital in selecting a job. Moreover, passion is requisite when picking out the occupation in the modern-day.

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In the recent day, income is the crucial factor when choosing a job. Some believe that money is an indispensable element in working. From my personal perspective, passion is the most important factor that affects the way of choosing a job.

 

It is understandable that income is essential when people choose the occupation, however that is not the most crucial. Initially, high salary bring the good privilege life for people and they have not to worried about the life. However, a fundamental reason proves for this point is the occupation which is chosen has to have positive influence and bring value on society. Because this eventually leads to the development of humanity civilization. On the contrary, the career violates to criteria of society generate some boundaries of evolution of human society and entire income which is earned is meaningless. For instance, the nepotistic people who take advantage from authority will cause significant repercussions as brain drain, promote corruption, hinders growth and so on. Consequently, those problems generate the regression of society. 

 

Nevertheless, passion also performs the paramount role in choosing the occupation. Firstly, passion will generate an enormous energy and motivation assist people sort the problems out. If people do not have motivations from passion when they have to run up against problems, capitulating to difficulty will be their choice. Furthermore, it will be effortless to lose direction if passion do not support the mentality to aware the street they are going. Not only stimulating people to break through difficulty but passion also create joy and happiness in working. As it makes people more comfortable and this thing will lead to the efficiency in working.

 

In conclusion, all the arguments which are displayed justified that income is not the most vital in selecting a job. Moreover, passion is requisite when picking out the occupation in the modern-day.

Intro: Passion is the most important factor in choosing career.

First problem: Passion is the most important factor. Working with happiness can lead to better performance. You not only pursue your passion but also contribute to society. But  career must match your abilities. 

Second problem: Income is an important factor in choosing a career but it's not the main issue. The main problem is that the career you choose must be suitable for the needs of modern society, have a definite contribution to the development of human civilization.

Conclusion: Passion is the most important factor in choosing career. But it must bring income,contribute to society and match own ability.

                         ESSAY:

Nowadays, development of science and technology  lead to development of society. The concern about income is no longer as important as before. That's why passion is what many people pursue. But it’s a dream, not power illusion.

In my opinion, passion is the top consideration in choosing a career. At first, working with happiness can lead to better performance. Because when you do what you love, you won't easily get bored or give up halfway, problem-solving ability is also higher. Secondly, not only pursue your passion but also contribute to society. Nevertheless, your career must be suitable for you. For example, you can't sing well but you want to be a singer or you are not pretty enough but want to be a model. It’s impossible! When you become a disaster, you will only get more confused in your passion.

On the other hand, income is also a very important factor in choosing a career. We know every job has income so that the urgent problems of society that need to be solved should be paid more attention. Because those problems have an effect on development of the socio-economic development of many countries. Nevertheless, career that violate law and human morality will cause unfortunate consequences for many people,families and countries. Like theft, corruption, brain drain, Illegal trade in smuggled goods,……

In my conclusion, passion is the most important factor in choosing career. But it must contribute to society and match own ability. Any impact can become a factor on choosing career . But I believe that if working without good purpose and the impulse of passion, everything is meaningless.

 

 

 

2. Body:

- Para 1: Topic sentence: a steady income = happy life.

​+ Supporting idea 1: a generous salary package → have a sense of job satisfaction. If the salary is too low or average→ unhappy. 

​​E.g. Many employees in Vietnam → work hard all day long at their company, but they just earn a meagre salary → feel disappointed and give it up.

​+ Supporting idea 2: a steady income reflects wealth →show off their social status.

​​E.g. Receiving high salary → buy whatever he likes without hesitation such as a luxurious car.

- Para 2: Topic sentence: Passion and working environment also play an equal role in choosing a career.

+ Supporting idea 1: Choosing a job that matches employees’ interests → feel contented.

​​E.g. An employee chooses a job according to their parents’ wish → no motivation to remain in that career path for long periods of time.

​+ Supporting idea 2: Most employees hope to climb the career ladder and have trussted colleagues.

​​E.g. When employees get on well with one another → enhance their relationship → improve their mood, outlook at work and their performance → more chances of getting a promotion.

 

THE ESSAY

Many people believe that salary is the first priority when looking for a job. Personally, I disagree with this viewpoint because other factors are also equally crucial.

On the one hand, there is no doubt that a steady income helps employees to lead a happy life. Firstly, it is a generous salary package that enables employees to have a sense of job satisfaction. On the contrary, if the salary is too low or average, employees may feel unhappy. For example, many employees in Vietnam have to work hard all day long at their company, but they just earn a meagre salary. As a result, they feel disappointed and have to give it up. Secondly, many people believe that monthly salary reflects wealth and they want to show off their social status. For instance, receiving high salary means that an employee can buy whatever he likes without hesitation such as a luxurious car which is sold at an exorbitant price. 

On the other hand, despite the foregoing justifications, I would argue that passion and working environment also play an equal role in choosing a career. In terms of passion, Choosing a job that matches employees’ interests is a way for them to feel contented. For example, when an employee chooses a job according to his parents’ wish, he will definitely have no motivation to remain in that career path for long periods of time. Regarding working environment. In fact, most employees hope to climb the career ladder and have trussted colleagues. To illustrate this point, once employees get on well with one another and enhance their relationship, they can improve not only their mood and outlook at work but also their performance., which results in more chances of getting a promotion.

In conclusion, while it is understandable why many people think salary is the most vital element before applying for a job, I do believe that people should also take passion and working environment into consideration.

 

Intro: Passion is the most important factor in choosing a career.

Problem #1: Passion is the most important factor.

-> Choosing the right career -> having passion -> enjoying the job, having the opportunity to develop capabilities, can lead to the best performance.
-> Not only pursuing your passion but also contributing to society.
-> But the profession must match your ability.
-> Choosing the wrong career will lose opportunities work becomes a burden

Problem #2: Income is a very important factor in choosing a career

-> The career you choose must match the needs of modern society
-> Having made certain contributions to the development of human civilization.

Conclusion: Passion is the most important factor in choosing a career.

-> It must bring income, contribute to society and be suitable for their own ability.
-> …


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Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, society also develops. Worrying about income is not as important as it used to be because income can be earned from many types of jobs. That's why passion is something that many people pursue.

In my opinion, passion is the first consideration in choosing a career. At first, if we choose the right career, we will have passion, interest in the work, have the opportunity to develop our abilities, which can lead to the best performance. Because when you can do what you love, you will not feel discouraged or give up halfway, the ability to solve problems is also higher. Not only does it stimulate people to overcome difficulties, but passion also creates joy and happiness at work. Second, you should not only follow your passion but also contribute to society, but the profession must match your abilities. If we choose the wrong career, we will lose opportunities, work becomes a burden. That will make you gradually lose direction. For example, you can't draw, but you want to be an artist.

Nevertheless, income is also a very important factor in choosing a career. We know that every profession has income, so urgent problems of society that need to be solved need more attention. Because these issues affect the socio-economic development of many countries. Because this ultimately leads to the development of human civilization. However, occupations that violate the law and human ethics will cause unfortunate consequences for many people, families and the country. For example, neoliberalisms who take advantage of their positions of power will have significant consequences such as brain drain, promote corruption, hinder growth, etc.

In my conclusion, passion is essential when choosing a career in modern times. But it must contribute to society and match its own ability. Any impact can become a factor in career choice. But I believe that if working, thinking with a clear purpose and the urge of passion, everything will become extremely meaningful and can help a lot for myself, my family, and society. 

+ You are more passionate when working.
+ No matter how much money you make, the job you work until 8 hours a day is still the job you hate.
+ We only live once and work will take up most of our lives so let's do something we enjoy.
+ When you complete the work, you will feel more received than doing it for money.

+ Increasing wages and increasing labor productivity are closely related.
+ Salary is a powerful motivator.
+ Salary will be come with work responsibilities.

+ Working for passion is not wrong, but when you are young, passion must be recognized by everyone.
+ So work with passion in a smarter way, that is, work for money with passion.

Life is a long series of choices especially young people. At the age of 20, people often have funny questions about choosing love or career, or more seriously, it can be a career in the city or in the countryside. And a very interesting question today is pursuing work because of "passion or finance".

In my opinion, passion is the first consideration in choosing a career. When you do what you love, surely you will be more passionate about it. The sad truth is that no matter how much money you make, it's still a job you hate. You cannot reach your full potential.

No one knows what will happen to you in the future. You can only try to create your future by trying to work with passion. But I think if you work for money, your future has nothing special to remember. When you get the job done, money isn't everything, it's also fun, inspiration, and a sense of accomplishment. Above all make sure it's your dream.

That said, the salary is neither important nor true. If you keep talking about passion and forget about the role of money, it is difficult for a person to survive in this fiercely competitive society. The salary is a tool to evaluate yourself. It is also a motivation and responsibility for people to work. Most of all, money feeds your passion and family. Mabye those who believe that youth should work for passion never knew that the king of Apple - who called for "follow your passion, success will follow you" did not start with a love of technology. But he became the legendary founder, making Apple a leading company in the world. Steve Jobs used to study Western history, dance, etc. If he himself is the person he said, perhaps his name at present is not associated with the Apple brand but a famous teacher in any center in the world. So it can be said that the fact that Apple computer company is not born out of passion, it is the result of chance and luck, but the end result is that it is "for money".

There is no answer that a salary is more important in choosing a career. Once you have money, you can do whatever you want. Once you have the money, you can move on to a job you really enjoy. Most people seek personal fulfillment in a job thinking they'd rather be "happy" than rich, but if you have a job that pays well for a certain amount of time, then you can switch to a job that's right for you. That way, you can be both rich and happy.

2/ Body:

*Para 1:

-Topic sentence: Passion is the most important thing when choosing a job

+ Idea: Benefits of choosing a career according to your passion ion -> Help yourself overcome all difficulties at work

*Para 2: 

-Topic sentence: To receive a high salary, what is the price you have to trade?

      + Idea: The price of a high paying job ->Working 12 hours a day, loses time with family and joy in life 

3/ Conclusion: 

Everyone will have a different opinion about what is most important when choosing a job, but through the above sentences, it can be said that passion is the most important factor.
Essay:
As a student, everyone thinks about what they will do in the future. Everyone wants to live a life without worrying about 4 words: rice, shirt, rice, money. Therefore, there is an opinion that: "When choosing a job, salary is the most important consideration". That is not true at all. 

    It's good or bad when you don't see that salary is the most important thing when choosing a job. Sometimes passion for a new job is the most important factor when choosing a job. It is the passion for the profession that will help you mentally to overcome dozens of difficult things at work. A young Korean friend dared to give up the dream job of many people at Samsung Group with a salary of 57,619 USD to pursue his passion to open his youtube channel. Many people have asked that young man: "Are you crazy to do this?" But with his passion, he ignored everything to pursue his passion and succeeded in life There is an old saying that "One job for nine is better than nine". This lesson teaches us that it is better to put all our heart into pursuing and striving to accomplish a single thing than to do one thing after another without achieving anything.

  To receive a high salary, what is the price you have to trade? is a job with 12 hours a day, constantly meeting and discussing, negotiating, going on a business trip, you don't even have enough time to sleep or rest for yourself, rush to complete the work you have to do. right? You become a valuable asset to the company because you bring a lot of productivity to work. Think again about what is important to you, besides the money you also need health benefits! There have been many people who have to pay the price because they only worked hard to choose a high-paying career. They had to be disillusioned because they chose the wrong industry, always had no vitality, and felt bored and tired. Every day for them, facing work is just the responsibility to complete it without any enthusiasm. Every day going to work without a happy smile on their face is the price they have to pay for their high paying job

     It would be a lie to say that salary is not important, but it is not the most important. Everyone will have a different opinion about what is most important when choosing a job, but through the above sentences, it can be said that passion is the most important factor.

Topic 1 : Income is an important factor in choosing a career.
      +Money ->  imperative need (food, water, house, ...)
      +High income -> enjoy life (travel, hobby, health, ...) / can help people (help them when they are in trouble, ...)
Topic 2 : Passion is an important factor in choosing a career.
       +Passion -> happy at work -> mental comfort.
       +Passion -> work motivation -> work effectively / creative
Conclusion : Income and passion are important factors in choosing a career
  Essay :
        Nowadays, many people are still confused in choosing a career because they do not know which profession they are suitable for. In my opinion, choosing a career should be based on two factors: passion and income.
        On the one hand, you can't live without money. Unless you have money, you can't buy food, water, house ... You couldn't do anything unless you could live. As society develops, everything we need can be bought with money. Having a high income can positively affect our morale and physical health. For example, you feel good when your hard work is well paid, you can eat delicious food, get health care, participate in many activities, and satisfy your hobby. In addition, you can also help others when they are in trouble.
        On the other hand, passion is an important factor in choosing a career. If you can do what you love, you will feel happy and excited to work. " You only live once, so do what you want ". This is a saying that I have heard many times from many people. Life without happiness is meaningless. 

You will be motivated to work if you like your work. For example, you can spend all day thinking about your work, you work more efficiently, you can create many ideas because of your passion.
         In conclusion, income and passion are important factors in choosing a career. You should choose a career based on those factors.

      

2. Main Body:

Para 1:
topic sentence: a variety of elements which are essential to be considered when people decide to local into companies.

supporting idea 1: their morale, as well as their health => Eg: the adultness of workers, can choose other options

supporting idea 2: their passion => Eg: artists follow their passion

Para 2:
topic sentence: other considerations are very important

supporting idea 1: personal relationships and the vibe during a workplace => Eg: an honest manager or friendly colleagues

supporting idea 2: people’s feelings of job satisfaction => Eg: a person becomes a doctor as same as the dream

3. Conclusion: job satisfaction and career growth should be seen => equally evaluating all aspects of the work

  Many people presume that pay is the most prominent factor which applicants must take into account when they bear any position. In this essay, I'll say about other factors that are more important than salary alone.

 

 First, there are a variety of elements that are required to be considered when people decide on companies (work time, distance, etc.). Because those could touch on their morale as well as their health. In this case, if people work in mines, they will take a good payment. However, the adultness of workers can choose another option in that time to protect their health. Except there are a radical number of people choosing their job because of their passion. For artists, don't get attention to plutocrats when they complete their shop, what they want is to live as themselves and save their lives to art.

 

 Moreover, I think that other considerations are even as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the vibe during a workplace are extremely important when choosing employment. For example, having an honest manager or friendly colleagues, for instance, can make an enormous difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from the talents they learn, and so the position they reach, instead of the cash they earn. Likely, a person becomes a doctor as same as the dream, this person can help lots of humans.

 

 In conclusion, I completely disregard the salary aspect of employment while choosing it. In my view, job satisfaction and career growth should be seen because the most important aspect while choosing between jobs. Within the times, it's advisable to become circumspect about job choices by equally evaluating all aspects of the work, which is fairly significant

1. Intro: passion is most important

2. Body: +Para1: money is important

- need money to survive

- earn respect

 +Para2: passion is more important

- quality of life

- motivation->achievements

3. Conclusion: passion>money
ESSAY:

Without any doubts, people work to make money. A steady income is always one of top concerns when selecting a career. However, there are more factors to be considered, especially interests and passion. In my opinion, despite the importance of a high payment, passion should be the top-priority.

On the one hand, everyone agrees that salary must be cared about when we looking for a job. Firstly, money is a vital factor which we depend on to survive in today’s expensive world. People have to use money every single day, in plenty of situations, from the daily bills to some more personal interests. The more steady your finance is, the more stable and comfortable your life is. Furthermore, a person who makes big money tends to effortlessly earn respect of the others. For instance, many people, especially in Asian countries, believe that salary represents levels of success. Therefore, a high salary not only satisfies your parents expectation, but also makes other people admire and appreciate you more.

On the other hand, there are values which a well-paid job cannot bring to your life, but your dream job can. High-paying jobs raise your standard of living, but they don’t increase your quality of life. “Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life”. Doing favorite occupation means working with happiness. Your life will be more enjoyable and meaningful if you can freely chase your dream and let passion drives you. Moreover, passion is enormous motivation for people to develop skills, proficiency and reach pinnacle of career. For example, the greatest scientists are people who spent almost their lives in laboratories. If they are not passionate and, they will not have enough patience and strength to follow these complicated and exhausting works.

In summary, I strongly believe that both money and passion play important roles in making decision about occupation. However, passion leads to effectiveness and enjoyments in working, which I lean towards.

2. Body : Para 1 

- Salary is essential effect when choosing a job 

Supporting idea : Salary affords needs ; Improve quality of life 

=> Eg: Give the best for myself ; Not under pressure about salary 

                 Para 2 

- Skills are important effect when choosing a job 

Supporting idea: Have skills = feel more confident 

                             Have skills=feel more passion 

=> Eg: - Finish work, handle situation, avoid miserable time  

            - More training, more love it  

 3. Conclusion: Fulfilling job combines salary and income
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Essay
   Choosing a career is always a crux of the matter for students, even adults. In my opinion, a fulfilling job for me is to make me profit and the opportunity to demonstrate skills and experiences. Putting your passion aside for a moment, we have to put food on the table first and then find your calling again
   To begin with, salary is the most important effect because without it we aren't able to afford all our needs in life and also cause the mediocre quality of social life. Generally speaking, some people wouldn't hesitate to change if they are offered a higher salary. For example, having earned lots of money, you can pamper yourself with the best condition. Moreover, unlike someone having struggle with income, you hardly feel depressed about finance.
   However, getting a high salary, you must do your best at the workplace building around your strengths and experiences. For instance, your strengths may help you finish the assignment well and be able to handle the situation or avoid some bloody miserable case, etc... Besides the importance of being passionate about work, it seems easier to grow your passion by being a master of the craft. The more you invest in training, the more you feel passionate.
   In brief, abilities make us get a high and steady income, which benefits you in following your calling. I strongly believe that a fulfilling job must combine profit and strengths.

-  A salary is a measure to present your expertise. 

- The higher salary makes motivation for working (A gift for your efforts). 

Topic sentences 2: By contrast, passion also has a big influence on applicants. 

-             The preferred job more inspired to work => Finding the joyfulness in working

-             It is also properly your strength => work efficiency is larger.

Conclusions: Both money and passion have a key role to play in choosing a job.   

                       Essay

 In the contemporary world, money plays a crucial role financially when selecting a job, especially in many developing countries' overgrown cities. While I advocate the idea above, I am also of the opinion that passion in working is also the same priority.

To begin with, I am inclined to believe that money is a crucial factor for keeping the wolf from the door, which attracts much more in many applicants. At first, the income is a capacity measure to evaluate your job qualifications, it does not only manifest the expertise. On the contrary, it also makes yourself self-aware, to be more valued. Moreover, the higher salary they get, the more motivation they have, which is a gift for their endeavor. For instance, a plethora of outstanding people has tended to apply to foreign companies that pay high pays, which is worthy of their genius and diligence.

On the other hand, passion also has a vast influence, which is a sovereign element when seeking a job. The preferred job is more inspire and excited, leading to finding out the joyfulness in the occupation. Besides, passion helps to present own strength, making people much more self-assured with themselves. Hence, the work efficiency is larger, getting the compliment from colleagues and recognizing yourself. In practice, Billionaire Bill Gates had supposed that passion is a key to success, indeed, it is exact with a plethora of situations. For example, in the world has the numerous people who gave up the unsuitable major in the university or recent job and starting up with their passion. Subsequently, several guys succeeded with this decision.

All in all, although I show my support for passion, I also reckon that we should not downplay the role of salary. While passion makes us gain the achievement in working, income is also essential for the service of life in recent years. 

Intro: choosing a career is dilemma, base on salary or passion?

Body: Para 1: pursuing your dream is the most important

          Para 2: which choice is the right one?

Coclusion: believe in your choice and try your best

ESSAY:

"To be or not to be". Have you ever heard that adage? Although this phrase is not entirely true in this case, imagine that one day you will be Hamlet, not torn between living or dying. Then you will be able to choose a career based on salary or passion for it. In my opinion, the most crucial factor in determining your future purpose is to believe in yourself.

First, let’s talk about passion, the top consideration in choosing a career. That is what keeps you motivated and enthusiastic at work. Working joyfully will allow you to gain more experience and enjoy your life more fully. Then, if you are passionate about your work, you will be able to complete it to the best of your ability. This is your life; live it your way. Don’t be worried that your enthusiasm will be too extravagant or unrealistic; just remember that Rome was not built in a day, and perhaps, one day, your dream will come true, as Bill Gates did with Microsoft.

On the other hand, people said that salary was the most important. Have a lot of money and enjoy your life. It’s many people’s dream life, but is it truly true if your passion conflicts with your financial goals? What would you think if this happened to you? In this case, just remember that what makes you happy, what motivates you to work harder?  I’m sure your response will be driven by passion. Because passion is the goal and money is just a means to an end.  However, some people will choose salary, which is also a requirement for a full life. So don’t be anxious, just believe in yourself.

In conclusion, I just want to say that you should respect your own decision. Passion is limitless, but living a full life is also beneficial. So, if you have chosen one of the two, hope that you can do the best.

 

 

All things considered, I truly believe that both money and passion are equally important. So you should be careful when choosing a career!

->Topic sentence: Passion is important
Supporting idea 1: higher job efficiency
Supporting idea 2: less stress

->Topic sentence: Income is important
Supporting idea 1: cost of living
Supporting idea 2: enjoy life
3. Conclusion: Both income and passion are important factors.

Essay:
Nowadays, many people consider that money is the main factor when deciding on a career. I agree with this statement but on the other hand, I believe that passion is also important and necessary in work. From my point of view, income and passion both influence our choices.

First of all, the selected career will likely follow you for the rest of your life so you need to have a passion and make choices carefully. A proper job will keep you motivated at work and improving your skills. It will be more interesting to do the job you like. Life without pressure makes your day. There is nothing happier than living for passion.

Nevertheless, money is definitely a powerful factor determining whether or not our lives are happy. People need money to pay for their daily living and entertainment expenses. Thus, the more income you earn, the more easier your life will be. For instance, a steady earnings give you an opportunity to travel around the world and purchase many brand name clothings. Life will be more enjoyable and meaningful if you have money.  Without doubt, richness also makes your day.

In summary, I strongly believe both money and great passion are critical when making a decision on the path we want to follow.

Intro: Payment=necessary/however/suitable qualification=important

Para1:-Topic sentence: High salary can lead a good life

-eg: pay for health, bills, education,...

-With Great Power, Comes Great Responsibility-->Choosing gigantic payment need an impressive skill-> if you can not afford-> be eliminated from work

Para2:-Topic sentence: with a valuable ability you can be invited to a high-class company.

-eg: university has an internship program collaborate with the business for accomplished student 

-qualification-> good environment ->job satisfaction->build up your skills ->make more income.

Conclusion: Salary is an important factor when choosing a job but suitable qualifications play more vital roles than money.

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In today’s expensive world, payment is a necessary factor when choosing a job. However, I strongly believe that a suitable qualification is the most important consideration to take a job.

First of all, a high salary can lead to a happy life. For example, with a steady income, you can pay for bills, your family health, or even a good-looking car. On the contrary, the more you earn, the more responsibility you take. Choosing a great-paying job, you need an impressive ability to be a good employee. If your skills can not meet the employer's expectations, you will be eliminated. Furthermore, the repercussion of a well-paying job is stress. According to some research, people in big cities have to work twelve hours a day for a stable job. Working overtime can be harmful to your health, mind and maybe affect your family. 

Secondly, with a valuable qualification, you can be invited to a high-class company. For instance, the university has an internship program to collaborate with the business for accomplished students, that environment is the best place to sharpen your skills. After that, you can even start your own business and make more income than people who chose earnings at the beginning. Moreover, if you have a good performance you will easily have an opportunity to promote. 

       To sum up, salary is an important factor when choosing a job but suitable qualifications play more vital roles than money, without it, we can not have a long term career path. 

Intro :Chose a right occupation leading to your achievements /but / stable salary is the most important consideration.
Body : -Topic sentence: money is the key which will effect on your quality life.                                                                                -Eg: pay for food,healthy,clothes, bills/ have a reasonable quality life like eating delicious food ,own a beautiful house or live comfortably and raise a family.
- Besides: people choosing passion is good/ have more motivation and increasing work productivity.
Conclusion : Overall,nowadays,everything are very necessary but also very expensive , therefore,pick a occupation with high or stable salary is the most important consideration.
ESSAY:
Nowadays, choose a job is very important because it leading to your success in the future.Beside a plenty of people that they don’t care about choosing a career and how their future occur or how many money they will obtain for their family ,hobbies ,lifestyle ,and so on.Therefore,choose a right occupation leading to your achievements and success you will get.In the other hand,choosing  job which have a stable salary  is the most important consideration.
In my point of view,money is the key which will effect on your quality life.For instance,you need money to pay for essential things such as food,healthy,clothes, bills or if you have family you will earn more for children care fee,their education and of course if you have the big size of the salary offered,you will have a reasonable quality life like eating delicious food,own a beautiful house or live comfortably and raise a family.Besides,the amount of people choosing occupation which is related with their passion.In my point of view,this choice is good because choosing a career which you have a passion with will make you have more motivation and increasing work productivity but you must pick a high-paid job .For example,you know about the cooking , you can pick chef job which work you will be earned a plenty of money now or if you have enough capital,you can also open a restaurant for business and satisfy your passion if you do a good business,you can earn a lot of profit ,in order to meet your basic needs and high quality life . Nevertheless,I strongly believe that we must choose a work have a high salary and that salary must worthy with what we earn in our jobs.
Overall, nowadays ,everything are very necessary but also very expensive, therefore ,pick a occupation with high or stable salary is the most important consideration in order to get high quality lifestyle and survive in the long run.

Intro: salary and passion are both important factors in choosing job.

Body:

Topic sentence 1:  income is the necessary factor on career path => benefit of high salary

Topic sentence 2: passion also take a major role in selecting the occupation => more joyful

Conclusion: both money and passion are essential roles in choosing job

Nowadays, some people believe that the stipend is the essential factor when choosing a job. However, in my personal attitude, passion is the most critical thing, impacts forcefully on the career path.

 

It is believed that if people have a high income, their life will be fantastic. Firstly, people don’t have to aggrieve the living expenses when their salary is high. For example, if the earnings are low, you will not able to pay for their housing, utility bills, food, treatment, travel, education, and so on. In addition, when you get a high wage, it will push us to work harder and opens an opportunity to get into higher positions. However, most of the people get higher payment on their career is the one who has got outstanding education and a huge level of technical skills.

 

On the other hand, passion also has considerable influence, which is the most crucial factor in seeking the occupation. At first, if your industry is on your favorite job, you will become more joyful and lead to discovering the enjoyment in occupation. Moreover, it also serves as your strength that helping you overcome difficulties and have huge efficiency at work. For instance, a number of people have given up their inappropriate specialty at university and seizing this opportunity to pursue their passion.

 

In conclusion, the salary is considered as a critical factor for people to choose the job. In addition, everyone has a various way to choose a suitable task, but passion is the most essential element in selecting the job.

Introduction: Money is not the only essential substance, other factors are equally important.

Body:

Ex: money is needed for daily payments.

Ex: Workplace, passion, …

Conclusion: both money and other issues are important for a satisfaction occupation.

ESSAY

 With the development of society, many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. However, I realized that money is not the only essential substance while selecting a job, other issues are equally important. 

On the one hand, it can not be denied that salary is the first consideration when we first think about the profession. No other impacts are more enormous than money in your life. For instance, money is needed for daily payments such as food, healthcare, education. Furthermore, the living standard in the world is being elevated higher and higher through the years. Due to that reason, it is easy to understand why some people would prefer to find a high-paying occupation. 

On the other hand, I believed that other factors are similarly vital with the earnings you have. In my opinion, a harmonious workplace and relationships are played an important role in occupation choice. For example, a suitable atmosphere, friendly colleagues and good managers are directly affected to the enthusiasm in your work. In addition, some people choose a career because they want to contribute positive things to society. This can be seen when being firefighters, have to confront many sudden problems related to fire, disasters, and rescue the victims. Last but not least, passion can not be indispensable for having a stable career, that is the motivation for us when facing difficulties.

In conclusion, the salary is certainly influenced by the business selection but I am convinced that wage is not the unique deliberation. Finding a vocation that appropriates for yourself and satisfying your passion.

Body: 

    Topic #1: Salary is one of important factor. 

      Ex: When you have a high salary, you can affort for what you need in your live. 

    Topic #2: Passion give you effort to get better in your career. 

      Ex: When you have a job you like, you won’t be bored and your job performance will get better through the time. 

Conclusion: Salary is essential but if the most important factor is passion.
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  Money is definitely important in human life because it is the method for people to exchange so many things. Therefore, many people nowadays take the salary the top priority when choosing a job. But in my opinion, passion is more important than salary.
   Firstly, we can't deny the importance of the high salary. When you have a high salary, your life will more comfortable. You can afford your food, your clothes, your house, and more. Spending problems don’t have a serious effect on you. But that is the props of the high salary give to you. On the opposite side, you have to work harder than many people and your job is more stressful than others. 
   Secondly, passion is the most important factor in deciding to choose a job. If you work without passion, your work efficiency will be worse over time. The stress of the work will make you lose your effort to work. Therefore, I think passion should be given top priority. You definitely work better when you have a job you like.
   In conclusion, salary and passion are important factors in choosing a job. Each factor has a different role in career and has a different effect on our life. You should choose a job based on those factors.
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Intro: The salary is the most important element in deciding on a career. I disagree with this concept.

Body:

·        Paragraph 1: There are numerous reasons why I am not inclined to endorse this notion.

+ Sp idea 1: job satisfaction will motivate employees

+ Sp idea 2: when your pay increases, you may experience more stress.

+ Sp idea 3: money is not everything

·        Paragraph 2: Making a living with a career offers certain advantages

+ Sp idea 1: Money effects our quality of life

+ Sp idea 2: A greater pay motivates us to work more

+ Sp idea 3: A big income signifies achievement in our lives

Conclusion: I do not feel that income is the most important aspect to consider when choosing a profession 

 

 

  ESSAY

 

 

Most individuals feel that the salary is the most important element in deciding on a career. As I shall explain in the next paragraph, I disagree with this concept.

There are numerous reasons why I am not inclined to endorse this notion. To begin, I believe that job satisfaction will motivate employees to work more efficiently and productively. Second, when your pay increases, you may experience more stress. Most vocations, for example, a doctor or a pilot, have a greater income. However, because they are dealing with people's lives, they are taking on greater responsibility in their positions, thus they may make a lesser error or no mistake at all throughout their work. Last but not least, money is not everything. Some people are addicted to money and spend a lot of time working without recreation or socializing with other people such as friends, parents and the loved one.

Considerations in making a living with a career, on the other hand, it offers certain advantages. To begin with, money is not everything, but it does affect our quality of life. With a large sum of money, we may buy a larger house, a fancy automobile, and other items that make our lives more convenient. Another reason to consider salaries is that a greater pay motivates us to work more, which increases our chances of getting a higher promotion. Furthermore, a big income signifies achievement in our lives. Most individuals who earn more money in their careers have a good education, a high degree of technical abilities, or have engaged in a variety of activities that benefit the society. 

In conclusion, I do not feel that income is the most important aspect to consider when choosing a profession; rather, job satisfaction should be the first factor to consider when choosing an employment. Without it, we will be unhappy with our responsibilities and would be unable to advance in our careers.

body: 

-para 1: - salary will help us to see the value of people

+ salary will be the level to evaluate the ability as well as the quality of people's work

+salary will be in the average level

 

-Para 2: salary will be a priority factor over passion

+ choose salary first, passion later

+ often graduated student do odd jobs, because they prioritize making money first, or currently there are still some people doing the wrong job as expected

Conclusion: salary is the skills, experience and passion that will bring us the right and desired salary

essay:

Nowadays, in the world that is operating in a modern way, salary is one of the important factors in choosing your profession. In my opinion, I agree with this statement. 
To begin with problem ,salary will help us to see the value of people.Because, salary will be the level to evaluate the ability as well as the quality of people's work. If your ability is high, then the salary will increase with it.On the other hand, if your work ability is not good, as well as your experience is not much, then the salary will be in the average level.For example, if you are a fresh graduate, you will not be able to get a job with high salary right away, but have to start with low to medium salary jobs to improve your experience and capacity. Friend.

In addition to that, salary will be a priority factor over passion. If you pursue your passion, but that passion does not have a suitable salary, it is not enough for your finances, then you must prioritize another job, when we are financially stable, then we will choose our passion, so salary is also a decisive factor for you to choose a job in the future. That's why often graduated student do odd jobs, because they prioritize making money first, or currently there are still some people doing the wrong job as expected. 
All in all, it's not the salary that matters most when we choose a job, it's the skills, experience and passion that will bring us the right and desired salary.

1. Intro: Both salary and passion are important when choosing the job.

2. Body: 

- Para 1: Having a high salary is the beginning of motivation to work 
Supporting idea: Having money -> nothing to worry about, focus on work with all effort.

Eg: improve a quality life, help our parents, buy everything we want, travel around the world by salary we get. 

- Para 2: Passion is also one of the most important factors.
Supporting idea: Having passion make us happy when we working. 

Eg: Like drawing -> Comics author -> Happy when working. 

Supporting idea 2: Having passion makes us feel works easier. 

Eg: A doctor without passion will make you feel tired.

3. Conclusion: Having a high salary, and passion for work both important when choosing a job.

Nowadays, life is more advanced, people have many problems to care. Most people believe a steady income is the most important factor to choose a job. In my opinion, I agree with them but passion and salary should go together.

On the one hand, having a high salary is one of the most factors when choosing a job. There’s a fact that money has an effective power in our life, money can’t buy happiness but we can’t happiness without money. So having a job with a high salary, we have nothing to worry about, we can focus on work with all effort to make that income worthy. For example, we can help parents from money we get, take care of ourselfs. If we have depressed, we can go shopping buy everything we want, travel around the world then come back to work like normal days. 

On the other hand, passion is also one of the most important factors when choosing a job. If you have passion for your work, you will feel happy at working. Having passion makes us feel less stress and worry. For instance, if you like drawing comics and want to be a comics author, even deadline puts pressure on you, you can still be happy because you enjoy that. Beside that, having passion make us feel works easier because that job is what we love and want to learn more. By loving job, we can easily learn new things, improve our skills day by day and do it better. As a doctor, spending 7-10 years studying and usually working overnight. Without passion you can’t follow it to the end even you can earn much money in future. 

In conclusion, having both a job with a high salary and passion will give us a more comfortable lifestyle. I strongly believe not only high salary, but also passion are necessary when choosing job.

As we know, before choosing occupation, we need to know our abilities, passions, talents or the job which is necessary and useful for our country. Arrcording to the passion, each of us have our own excitement, like some of people like to play sport but another person love to sing and play guitar. Therefore, they can choose the job which can connect with there passion. For example, Ronaldo, who is extremely famous and have talent, ability and passion in playing soccer. That is why he chose playing soccer is his job and he became the successful person nowadays. In general, if we keep an eye on passion, we can choose the suitable job.

On the other hand, if we just pay attention to passions and salary are not enough, before choosing the job, we need to research which profession is useful, necessary to our country and have enough salary to our life. For example if we choose the job, but it is not really required, it will be excessively difficult to finding the company need us and after all we won't have enough money to cover our parents. But if we choose the job, which have high salary, we won't worry about the quality of our life. Therefore, we can say that sometimes we need to put the salary is the main priority when choosing the profession. 

Choosing the occupation is the most difficult thing we must do, without job, we won’t have any money to make our live better. Therefore, we need to be careful in choosing the profession.

Salary definitely will be the first consideration. No other factors have a greater impact on a person’s life or lifestyle than their income. The cost of living keeps increasing year after year and people are living under considerable financial stress these days. Everything from education and healthcare to food and housing has become expensive. If the salary is not adequate enough to meet the expenses, all aspects of a person’s life will be severely affected. In addition, if people are paid well, they will feel that the company appreciates their contribution. A good salary even elevates a person’s self image and social image. Obviously, it is not hard to see why most people give so much importance to the pay packet.

Having said that, salary cannot be the only consideration when choosing a job. Job satisfaction is equally important. The job should pay well; it should provide satisfaction as well. In addition, the work hours should be reasonable. Employees are also human beings and they seek work-life balance just like everyone else. A job may pay an astronomical remuneration, but if the working conditions are pathetic, it is foolish to take it. In my opinion, choosing a job that pays a little less but offers satisfactory working conditions is a much better idea.

To conclude, remuneration should definitely be the first thing to consider when choosing a job because it is impossible to lead a comfortable life without a decent salary. However, money alone cannot make people happy and hence other factors like job satisfaction and working hours too should be considered before taking up a job.

Para 1: Salary is important effect

-to pay for.

-to cover these needs.

-live comfortably and raise a family.

Eg: need money for paying bill

Para 2: Making contribution is also essential effect

- you will do your best and improve yourself
Eg: give you motivation 

Conclusion: Both salary and positive contribution are important effect

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Essay
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered.  However, besides the salary we earn, we also look for the contribution to the betterment of the environment and humanity

On the one hand, I believed that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family.

On the other hand, I am convinced that contribution is also the essential key when choosing a job. As you know you are helping others and society, you will do your best and improve yourself. For example, doing something for people will give you motivation. 

In conclusion, I strongly believed both salary and making  something positive contribution are important when making a decision on choosing job

1 Intro 

- Job = money sources

- Passion > money

2 Body

 P1 : salary is essential 

- Pay for living -> Ex : revenue < spending -> borrow, thief 

- Savings -> Ex : must work after retired

P2 : Passion is as important

- Passion can lead to increasing salary -> Ex : manga writers -> anime adaptaion

- Enjoy the work, reduce stress -> Ex : Bill Gate

3 Conclusion

- Incomes < Passion

 

Essay : 

    In the modern days, jobs are one of the constant and effective money sources. Some may argue that salary and incomes are the only things to consider. However, I think passion should have a bigger role in finding a job.

    On the one hand, salary is an essential factor in job-seeking. Firstly, salary should be high enough for a person to pay for living. For example, if the person has the revenue lower than the money paid for rent, student debt, and food; that person must borrow or thief, cause many more problems in society. Secondly, every one need savings when they retired or go to the university. For instance, many people in Viet Nam don’t have savings and cause them to work in the 60s. 

    On the other hand, passion is as important as salary. Firstly, if a person loves the job and work hard they can easily increase in salary. To illustrate, many manga writers in Japan only work because of they like that type of magazines so they work really hard and many have even had the films adaptation. Secondly, passion can help a person to enjoy the work and reduce the stress. For instance, more and more people work for their own just like Bill Gate he just invents Microsoft because he loves technology.

   In conclusion, incomes are important as for spending and savings while I will argue that passion is also the big factor with hard-working and enjoying the works.

-Para 2: passion is needed when choosing a job

+bring more successful in our career 
 +avoid of being depress and pressure 
 
ESSAY

Finding a job at the time that multiple countries are developing every single day is not as simple as you think. Some thoughts show that money is the most important factor when choosing a job whether in the city or countryside. From my point of view, there are lots of elements affect your choice such as: passion, distance, and so on, but two biggest factor that need the most that is : salary and passion. 

Firstly, money can not be replaced by anything else because it is the necessity in our life. For example, we need money too pay for our needed as food, electricity, bills, tax, to made it easy to understand that means money is not everything but we need it to operate everything. Most people put salary as the most important consideration because they believe that high salary can solve all their problems in life. According to that thoughts numbers of employees becoming unemployment just because of their high expectations of the job they choose.

Secondly, employees need passion in the job they choose. Job satisfaction will motivate employees and bring more successful in their career. Beside that, working with the job you likes hardly ever make you feel depress or feel under pressure. That is the best thing when working for the job you wanted. On the other hand, working like that still have some risk factor that you do not have enough salary to take care for your own life.

 In conclusion, choosing a job always have advantages and disadvantages so we need to take a serious time to select the most safe and effective one to do in a long amount of time. 

1 Intro

-       Money is the most important thing when choosing a job

-       Disagree 

2 Body

-       Para.1: why money is not the most important thing ?

 . supporting idea: + money can not buy everythings.

                              + a lot of money doesn’t mean happy.

-       Para.2: if we lack of money, so what happened ?

 . supporting idea: + if somethings suddenly happened, we can not handle it (ex: health, food, entertainment,…).
                               + less choice than other people.

3 Conclusion

We should choose a jod that we are passionate about.



Essay



 
 

Some people feel that the salary is the most important element in there job. Frankly I think, money is good but is not the best thing you have to care about.
 So why I think that money is not the most important thing. Firstly, money actually can’t buy everything. No mention about some limited production, some rich people couldn’t improve their health which they lost in trying to earn that money.  Secondly, they absolutely need to spend their time to earn the salary so they don’t have enough time for their family. They may have a lot of money, but are they happy with their family like others ?
 However, lacking money may bring to us some disadvantages. To begin with, if somethings suddenly happened, we can not handle it. For example, in HCM city recently, some heads can not go outside to work so they don’t have enough money to pay the tax, buy food, take care for their health and so on. Moreover , if we don’t have money, we just have to buy something more cheaper for life, health, entertainment. 
 Overall, income is not the most important but if we don’t have enough money, we can’t improve our life. Therefore, we should choose an occupation that we are passionate about and our life will be more easier.

Some people feel that the salary is the most important element in there job. Frankly I think, money is good but is not the best thing you have to care about.
 So why I think that money is not the most important thing. Firstly, money actually can’t buy everything. No mention about some limited production, some rich people couldn’t improve their health which they lost in trying to earn that money.  Secondly, they absolutely need to spend their time to earn the salary so they don’t have enough time for their family. They may have a lot of money, but are they happy with their family like others ?
 However, lacking money may bring to us some disadvantages. To begin with, if somethings suddenly happened, we can not handle it. For example, in HCM city recently, some heads can not go outside to work so they don’t have enough money to pay the tax, buy food, take care for their health and so on. Moreover , if we don’t have money, we just have to buy something more cheaper for life, health, entertainment. 
 Overall, income is not the most important but if we don’t have enough money, we can’t improve our life. Therefore, we should choose an occupation that we are passionate about and our life will be more easier.