Room 4 Writing Sample Brainstorm by Guanny Liu-Prosee https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug Choose A MOMENT. Briefly explain the senses in that moment: 1. SEE 2. HEAR 3. SMELL 4. TASTE 5. FEEL Describe: 1. Who 2. What 3. When 4. Where 5. How/Why en-us 2018-03-11 22:08:27 UTC 2018-03-11 23:01:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs LP: The moment I walked into my new classroom this year g_liu https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240641679 1.see: grey carpet. chairs piled up. push-pins dotted around the walls. empty shelves. a rubber mat piled in the middle of the room.
2.hear: birds chirping around. 
3.smell: paint, rubber mat. stale carpet
4. taste
5. feel: heaviness of the door. wave of excitement
6.who: all alone
7.what: new classroom
8. when: middle of a warm day
9. how/why: setting up for the new year.]]> 2018-03-11 22:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240641679 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240642659 2018-03-11 22:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240642659 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240642971 2018-03-11 22:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240642971 1. See: 2. Hear: 3. Smell4. Taste5. Feel6. Who7. What8. When9. How/Why https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643009 2018-03-11 22:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643009 1.see 2.hear3.smell4. taste5. feel6.who7.what8. when9. how/why https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643043 2018-03-11 22:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643043 holding/choosing a kitten - Amy and Georgia https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643046 1.see - the big overly cute eyes of the kitten
2.hear - mewls 
3.smell ?
4. taste?
5. feel - a little delicate ball of fluff shaking in your hands
6.who -boots the kitten
7.what
8. when
9. how/why]]> 2018-03-11 22:31:36 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643046 Jessie: The moment that the roller coaster went upside down. https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643053  1.see:The rest of the park go blurry
2.hear:Everyone screaming 
3.smell:the wheels rubbing on the metal.
4. taste:The air rushing into my mouth cause I was screaming.
5. feel: Fear take control of my body
6.who:My family
7.what/ 
8. when
9. how/why 

]]> 2018-03-11 22:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643053 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643088  
The moment I walked into my new classroom this year
 

]]> 2018-03-11 22:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643088 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643103  

]]> 2018-03-11 22:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643103 Miro: The time Chewbacca had his first bite of a porg. https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643105 It was juicy. Tasty. Smelt nice . Like chicken. Salty. His teeth soaking his teeth into the juicy body. It tasted so nice. Ripping and tearing it apart, It was so yummy.

1.see
2. hear
3.smell
4.taste
5.feel
6.who
7.what
8.when
9.how
10.why]]> 2018-03-11 22:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643105 The moment you get your dog. https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643113 1. see a cute puppy
2. hear your dog panting
3.smell your dog
4.taste nothing
5. feel warm fur
6. who my dog
7.what a dog
8.when 5 years ago september
9.how/why we bought a dog, we wanted a dog
- Hannah]]> 2018-03-11 22:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643113 The moment I walked into my new classroom this year1.see 2.hear3.smell4. taste5. feel6.who7.what8. when9. how/why https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643131 2018-03-11 22:32:09 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643131 the day i broke a record in athletics by joshua ingham https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643138  i see my shinny medal in the distance.
smell the victory in the air
taste nothing
feel the sadnnes in the opponets
who
what 
when
how long will it stand for ]]> 2018-03-11 22:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643138 The moment i walked into my new classroom this year 1 see 2 hear 3 smell h https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643142 2018-03-11 22:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643142 classroom new my into walked I moment The https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643263 2018-03-11 22:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643263 The Mon https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643392 2018-03-11 22:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643392 Shruthi. The moment I feed the fish and ducks https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643397 See 
Hear
Smell
What
Feel

]]> 2018-03-11 22:33:32 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643397 Jamie https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643407 1.see :The ocean,
2.hear :Waves,
3.smell :Salt water,
4.taste :Salty air,
5.feel :A dragons back,the wind against my face
6.who :Myself and my dragon,
7.what :Flying,
8.when :One million years from now,
9.how and why :Flying back home on my dragon.



]]> 2018-03-11 22:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643407 the moment I started heroes and generals1.see 2.hear3.smell4. taste5. feel6.who7.what8. when9. how/why https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643517 2018-03-11 22:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643517 Maxgoing to the top of the empier state building https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643624 2018-03-11 22:34:56 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643624 Flynn C (Don't get confused) https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643665 When an alien abducted me >: )]]> 2018-03-11 22:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643665 Liam https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643671 dabbing on tv

]]> 2018-03-11 22:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643671 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643773 2018-03-11 22:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240643773 CARA https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644049  In the middle of the star Wars Roller coaster at disneyland
See nothing because it was pitch black 
Hear my sister screaming get me out of hear
Smell people farting because they were so nervous
Taste
Feel my family grabbing a hold of me
Who w2
What
When]]> 2018-03-11 22:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644049 top of empire state building https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644065 MAX macleman  how 
                                   when
                                who
]]> 2018-03-11 22:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644065 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644245 2018-03-11 22:39:02 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644245 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644312 2018-03-11 22:39:29 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644312 The moment I..... https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644369 1. The moment I discovered roblox
I saw fun games
I heard crazy musicĀ 
I smelled my computer
I tasted computer screen
I feeled the keyboard keys
-annoamus šŸ¦Š]]> 2018-03-11 22:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644369 The time I went on the Guardians of the Galaxy drop Tower in California Land by Jessica https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644606 1. See A loooong line ahead of my nervous soul
2. Screams coming from the building
3. Smell food from the corndog cart
4. NothingNothingng 
5. . Adrenaline rushing over e]]> 2018-03-11 22:41:26 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644606 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644667 2018-03-11 22:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644667 jahsiah when i first went to school https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644763 1. when i went in everyone was animals 

]]> 2018-03-11 22:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644763 the moment opened roblox https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644817 1.see
2.hear
3.smell
4.taste
5.......................................................................................... ]]> 2018-03-11 22:42:44 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644817 Niamh E https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644837 1. See a long nicey organised class room.
2. hear a lot of noisy people
3. Smell the fresh air
4. TasteĀ fresh air]]> 2018-03-11 22:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240644837 The moment I walled into my classroom https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645104 1.see
2.hear
3.smell
4.taste
5.feel
6.who
7.what
8.when
9.how/why
hee hen hen hen  en   n                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          henee   hee                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           enee enee enee enee                                                                       henee hnee hee he h  h  h                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        enee]]> 2018-03-11 22:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645104 The Stuff https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645740 The Moment I....
1. See
2. Hear
3. SmellĀ 
4. Taste
5. Feel
6. Who
7. What
8. When
9. How
10. Why
-Kind Helpe]]> 2018-03-11 22:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645740 Caleb https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645957 In futsul we were a goal down in the final moment someone from my team shot down the middle
i knew it was saved i dived and redirected the ball into the goal]]> 2018-03-11 22:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240645957 https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240646348 2018-03-11 22:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240646348 Rainbow? https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240646875 '-']]> 2018-03-11 22:56:56 UTC https://padlet.com/g_liu/ir5zkdt6dhug/wish/240646875