https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7 en-us 2023-01-10 21:08:34 UTC 2023-01-11 20:07:31 UTC hello@padlet.com cbarrett19 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441146161 2023-01-11 17:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441146161 riveracl1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441364911 It gives a bias free statement and shows how effective the ad was without being biased. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:39:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441364911 riveracl1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365107 Being honest]]> 2023-01-11 19:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365107 riveracl1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365776 Probably I would cite more rhetorical devices]]> 2023-01-11 19:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365776 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365799 both of my peers' samples were unbiased and showed me exactly what the ad was about ]]> 2023-01-11 19:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441365799 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366123 Having your own opinions]]> 2023-01-11 19:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366123 pottsc11 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366162 Because it is a critique, you have to be overly critical and look for things that should be there or are missing from the ad that could help it to be more effective.]]> 2023-01-11 19:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366162 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366308 an unbiased accurate opinion ]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366308 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366358 These analyses focus more on sensory effects of the ads than other types of writing.

]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366358 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366805 It showed the overall effectiveness of the ad while staying unbiased and really playing on the emotion or Pathos aspect. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366805 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366809 In my rough draft I almost felt like I just put all of my thoughts onto the page without working on structuring it. This made for a good start or body of work but I would like to restructure it to talk more about individual points. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366809 alexh919 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366855 Providing accurate statements that are less subjective and more factual]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366855 ramkumai https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366896 The way the critique was structured is different for every ad depending on what was the most prevalent part of the ad that needed to be critiqued/analyzed such as the cultural significance]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441366896 sommern https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367002 I noticed that my partners used ads that were related to things that mattered to them or were about sports that they played. My partners also wrote from an unbiased perspective which made it easier to analyze with them. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367002 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367218 i plan on making sure that all of the sponsors that were involved are spoke about ]]> 2023-01-11 19:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367218 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367598 Giving good, honest, productive feedback.]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367598 tagardas https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367689 My peers' examples were showing effectiveness of the ad by not being biased by its context.]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367689 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367698 2023-01-11 19:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367698 pottsc11 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367815 Something that is unique to this type of writing is getting to see a certain ad through your own eyes but also through the eyes of people who have different opinions or experiences than you.]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367815 alexh919 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367846 my peers' examples were very well written and critical without seeming biased or overly harsh/kind]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367846 ramkumai https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367929 Making direct statements that are not opinion based.]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367929 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367937 These critiques look at how the writings affect people rather than their contents exclusively]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367937 sommern https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367970 A strong critique is made by being unbiased and using strong evidence from the ad to show how it is biased (ex. the colors, music, voiceover, etc.)]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441367970 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368015 Making an unbiased statement, while still having it retain all necessary and true facts. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368015 villegag https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368167 All the analysis focused more on the effectiveness of the advertisement than why they were made]]> 2023-01-11 19:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368167 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368177 2023-01-11 19:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368177 cliburnl https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368357 2023-01-11 19:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368357 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368684 The sample writing had a more straightforward approach by not using a lot of emotion, but the peer writing had more emotion and original thoughts]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368684 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368795 2023-01-11 19:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368795 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368900 They summarized while also giving feedback.]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441368900 alexh919 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369095 I plan on reorganizing my paragraphs and re-formatting my introduction to more clearly highlight my thesis statement]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369095 tagardas https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369109 A strong critique consists of an unbiased opinion. It is also strong when they judge the what they are critiquing beyond the surface.]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369109 ramkumai https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369185 I need to add more critique to mine as I feel that I am mostly analyzing the ad.]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369185 sommern https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369237 I plan on reading over my critique and seeing if I have an surface level errors like spelling and/or grammar. Then i plan on making sure every sentence flows together and my critique does not sound choppy.]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369237 villegag https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369245 Not stating the obvious, and keeping it separate from personal emotions]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369245 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369350 I plan to make it flow better, break it up, and add to more and more to my existing points so they cover an overall better view of the ad.]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369350 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369429 A strong critique is made when the critique is able to look at all parts of the ad in an objective manner]]> 2023-01-11 19:43:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369429 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369745 I plan to change the structure of my paragraphs so they make more sense]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369745 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369756 Give more feedback instead of just summarizing.]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369756 pottsc11 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369851 I hope to look for a way I can make my information flow any better than I organized it the first time. I also hope to dig deeper on visuals and descriptions so the reader can get a better understanding of the ad.]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441369851 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370078 Not being biased and looking at it like you have never met the person before. Also not holding back but not being super mean]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370078 boehlc1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370126 What I found unique about this type of writing was that both of my peers' examples focused heavily on what was being perceived and what effect that would have on viewers. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370126 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370399 I am going to work on ensuring the writing flows correctly, as well as integrating more information into the text to get my point across better]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370399 villegag https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370413 I plan to add a few more details about the ad, and maybe a paragraph on the overall effectiveness of the ad. Also, there are a few grammar issues that need fixing, but that later wait it can.]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370413 nguyens7 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370769 I noticed a very objective, straightforward, and reasonable tone in the samples and my peer's examples which aren't necessarily unique to the art of critiquing but very suitable. Critiquing focuses on how well something, in this case, an advertisement, fulfills the intended purpose, of being sold to the consumer. My peers did a really nice job explaining what was or weren't effective and why it was that way.]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370769 tagardas https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370879 My ad was all over the place and I didn't have a specific format. I had an idea but I also didn't know how to write it down because it was difficult for me to understand what we were doing. I can use my peers comment to improve the format and its context to make it much more clearer.]]> 2023-01-11 19:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370879 cliburnl https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370980 2023-01-11 19:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370980 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370983 The ad that everyone chose was very dependent on what type of media they were consuming. Whether it be Youtube, Instagram, or live TV. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441370983 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441371211 I wont use words like I,Me, and My. Also I will use the word audience more.]]> 2023-01-11 19:45:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441371211 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441372547 It is more laid back and you can go in almost any direction you want]]> 2023-01-11 19:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441372547 nguyens7 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441372935 Being objective and willing to weigh in the effectiveness of the product's design in regards to everyone.]]> 2023-01-11 19:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441372935 boehlc1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441373180 Making sure to take multiple viewpoints and perspectives to find reasoning, how effective it was, and how it could possibly be more effective]]> 2023-01-11 19:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441373180 nguyens7 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441374864 I plan on finishing answering all necessary bullet points of the ad critique and working on the flow and structure afterwards. ]]> 2023-01-11 19:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441374864 boehlc1 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441375281 I would want to clean up some areas and probably add some more detail]]> 2023-01-11 19:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441375281 https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441376362  ]]> 2023-01-11 19:49:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441376362 cliburnl https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441379662 2023-01-11 19:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cbarrett19/ir4g2ni9cm4faas7/wish/2441379662