EBI: Choose a different font to make it clearer, Put more than 1 example of a target audience, Choose a more complimenting but attracting colour scheme as it is a bit bright.

Www: Josh’s colour scheme works really well because he put a black background around his boxes which make them really stand out also I like the pictures that went with the text.6/10 

 

Ebi: I think josh should add some effects to his text e.g fade. And change the heading of your text as it doesn’t match the other text writing. 8.5/10.

Aidan Ruxton 

 

WWW: it has a good background and the small words around the work are informative.

 

EBI: your work has very little information filling the power point which leaves a lot of space surrounding the small amount of information as well as the little information  has very little context if I didn’t know what the homework was about I wouldn’t understand the random words. The only two pictures were not that good either there should be more of them to show examples of the types of audience.

WWW: It has a nice, vibrant colour scheme that will attract the reader’s attention. I also like how the images match each other so they look professional. Lots of good information aswell. 

EBI: the font used for the information is not easily readable so maybe change it to something that has a block colour. You could also maybe put the text in the middle so it doesn’t look too randomly placed (no offence). For the headings you could make the text all the same size so they look more even??

WWW: Good use of images also the title of the homework stands out also good use of colour scheme to make the homework eye-catching to others, the images match the text well, it explains what ‘target audience’ is in good detail. 

EBI: The text could be more of a vibrant colour, it’s sort of hard to read with the green background, also make the background more lighter so it’s not hard to read the text. 

EBI: Although it looks good it could use different colour shades or some complementary colours to make it pop. You could add an outline for each section and a different text font to look better. 

WWW: You have used a good range of images to aid the text well. Your colour scheme  fits together and your text is very detailed, as it stands out. 

 

EBI: You have a bit too much whitespace and should cover it with more information or images 

WWW: Your text is very clear to read and you have added good images to support your text. A lot of information was added but it wasn’t too much. The color of your images match each other in the same sort of color scheme. 

EBI: Change the text color to make it stand out and match the color of the images. Maybe use like a light or dark orange. 

WWW: He clearly showed the different sections of information. 

 

EBI: There was no colour scheme so he could use colour on the background and the pictures aren’t similar, there was very few pictures so you could add some pictures for each of the parts of info, there was no information so you could say what a target audience is and some examples, the numbers all need to be the same size. 

 

Overall there needs to be improvement. 
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WWW: there was a good variety of section such as gender, age and family friendly. He has put enough space between each tittle he was describing and has used a good colour palette. 

 

EBI: one of the images he has included doesn’t match with any of the titles so he could change it by using an appropriate image for each section but you have to be careful when using images because the images colour scheme might not blend in well with your blue/ purple background.