B6. Các môn thể thao trong nhà trường đóng vai trò quan trọng vì chơi thể thao giúp trẻ tạo dựng mối quan hệ với bạn bè cũng như phát triển kỹ năng làm việc nhóm.
Sport in school plays an important school because 
create a bond 
build relationship 
not only .... but also

B7. Các sinh viên cần phải tập trung vào việc phát triển các kỹ năng mà nhà tuyển dụng đang tìm kiếm thay vì quá tập trung vào kiến thức học thuật.  

rather 

Always check that your ideas are RELEVANT to the topic sentence.
A --> A1 --> A11 

**2. Try to create a better connection between sentences **(COHESION) - tính liên kết 

· Ideas

· Use transitional words

Firstly/Secondly/ Finally

The major reason is that/  Another reason is that/ In addition

Do NOT use 'Besides' (speaking) 

**3. Examples **REALLY need to be SPECIFIC enough (TASK RESPONSE) and relevant to the supporting idea (COHESION)
ví dụ cụ thể 

4. Do not use - không dùng chỉ từ 

· YOU

· etc

· ...

· :

5. Limit the use of the following words. Try to express your idea in another way or, if possible, use specific words

· I ==> in my view/opinion ; it seems to me that

· They ==> school students/ school-age children / young learners overseas/international students

6. Do NOT say: They will. Say: They **will be less likely to **OR They may/might not …

7. Remove any unnecessary sentences whenever possible.

Do not just repeat what you have said in the topic sentence. Always try to provide something NEW in a supporting sentence! Do not waste any word!  

There are several benefits of online education.  Áp dụng cấu trúc This is particularly the case for /  This is beneficial, especially when…. 

Viết thêm đúng 4 câu. Tránh viết 5,6 câu. Viết thêm số từ dưới 100 từ.
Note A, A1, A11 
15 mins 

This is particularly the case for archiving study materials (A). For instance, you can have huge source of knowledge or lectures about your major (A1), you have not to carry a lot of heavy books (A11) but instead of you can find a lot of documents more easily when you have the internet to access(A12). Another reason is that create independence and self-discipline for students ( B). Because there is no one around you to remind regularly(B1), you are responsible for your own learning process and results (B11).

- and explain Why you were unhappy with the service.

Intro: What the service was
→ direct answer: I’m going to describe a time when I experienced poor service from an online car booking
Set the background for the experience: When ? Who? What?
This happened 2 months ago, when i book a motor bike by Grab, the rider behaviour was unexceptable.

Body:  Who provided it

+ Create a story with a sequence of actions: Where? cheaper, faster, First, then, after, so, but,...
home --> school, important test 
rider came late, worried abt the test
asked --> rude to me
previously, riders were friendly but this time ....
+  Add something surprising:

Conclusion: