https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk Hi! Can you give me some feedback on my writing pieces throughout my stories. As you comment please use kind words and don’t be mean about it. Thank You! en-us 2021-01-05 16:54:43 UTC 2021-06-18 15:03:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3c0.png 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1074865818 one thing i really liked about your writing is how you explained the smell of the place you went I also like how you describe the rainbow carpet by saying how you felt like a leprechaun one wish I have for you writing is to add bigger words ]]> 2021-01-11 16:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1074865818 https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1074942619 The 2 stars and wish is that i really loved how you described everything the smell to the waitress I also love how you started you story it caught my attention my wish is that you should have added a bit more sound because that was the only thing that you missed but although it was pretty good! Good work!]]> 2021-01-11 16:43:49 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1074942619 27nhomer https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1075039279 Hi I think you did really good with describing the restaurant because the more I read the more It started to put a picture in my head of the setting and I also liked how you made it relatable because when I’m hungry I eat my food really fast and then when I’m done I’m not full yet so I really like the relatability in your story, Good job]]> 2021-01-11 17:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1075039279 https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1509720051 Hi I really like your first warrant because it showed the great moments that sports can give you I also liked how you wrote with true feelings of how you don’t understand why people want sports to be banned and why you believe they should believe different. I have no wish because I didn't see any problems good job! ]]> 2021-05-10 15:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1509720051 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1518046585 HI MATT! One star of your essay was you intro i thought your intro was very good because it made me interested in the topic you choose i thought when used the word screech i thought it was a very good way to show and not tell us what the we are hearing. The way you center on the boy gives me a good perspective on that he really wants to make the team . And the questions at the end really made me think.in addition I thought your ending was very fantastic i thought it was good because the word choice you used really made the piece and strong espeashly when you disc that kids need to sign up for sports and make3 there point. Although i did think that you 3erd warrent could have had a little more meaning to it but overall very good i also really like you quote at the end]]> 2021-05-12 15:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1518046585 https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1612412685 Hi Matt one thing I really liked about you story was the log it was super hectic and made me excited for the rest of the story another thing I like was this sentence Imagine getting ready for a basketball game and you start to dribble your ball in the house because you're waiting for your parents to come and take you but then you realize, you just woke up your basketball, so you start to run. The reason I liked this is because the start was super relatable because I always dribble in the house while waiting for my parents to come and take me to a game or practice. My wish is that the character interacted with the reader more but other than that great job!]]> 2021-06-17 14:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1612412685 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1612414669 Hi Matt i really liked your creative writing peice because i thought it had a great plot and i thought it was funny. I also really liked the pictures.1 star i have for you is the jureul part because it is like a movie. I can see what is going on in my head because it is so well written and detailed.i feel the suspense of it all and it really makes me hope you escape.another star i have is how you explained there were nice and mean balls and how they acted differently i thought you peice was very good.And i have no wish for you because i thought the peice was very funny to fun to read.]]> 2021-06-17 14:45:46 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/ip361ncvt9havsgk/wish/1612414669