All About Me Slide Shows by Jeanne Mayers

Tristan Acosta

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Alex Aime

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T J Beeson

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Gavyn Boucherie

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Noah D'avy

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Kayden Delatte

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Gibson Hopp

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Cecilia Kitchens

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Joseph Lejeune

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Jamie Neuschafer

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Kade Penalber

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Mia Poche

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John Rodriguez

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Harlie Stricklin

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Kamile Thacker

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John

2024-08-20 18:26:50 UTC

While some aspects of the rubric were missing from Noah’s presentation, there were a multitude of positive aspects to his slideshow. This includes his use of many pictures that can be appealing to the audience, his music choice which captivated listeners, and the order of the slides to present them in a sensible manner. However, he could have also improved by including a video in his presentation and making it longer to allow viewers to further enjoy its magnificence. I would consider this presentation to be a solid B+ performance.

Tj Beeson

2024-08-20 18:27:18 UTC

Joseph LeJeune, my critique on your video is you may could of used less white. I did like just about everything else within the video. Especially the music was just classic. I would think a B may be appropriate.

2024-08-20 18:27:22 UTC

Hey Harlie, it's Tristan. I thought your slideshow was one of the best detailed ones. The best about it was the animations and the music fit the slides very well. The only critique I would say is capitalize your "i." I mean this is AP class and can't even capitalize the I. ^😡

Gavyn Boucherie

2024-08-20 18:27:29 UTC

Joseph your slide show was fun to look at, but there are some things that can be improved. You forgot to make it a video and just put it as a slide show, also you didn't have any actually pictures of yourself. I liked how you gave many of your interests. I would give you a B-.

Cecilia K.

2024-08-20 18:28:11 UTC

Tristan provided an excellent slideshow. I don't believe any improvements are needed due to the fact that nothing was misspelled and her grammar was great. It was a fun experience to watch and overall very easy on the eyes. If I were to grade her for it, I would give her an A.

Jayme Neuschafer

2024-08-20 18:28:57 UTC

Harlie, I believe that you could've improved with your grammar, mostly when it came to capitalizing your I's. My favorite part of it was how it was full of personality. Overall, I really enjoyed it and I would give you an A.

John

2024-08-20 18:29:19 UTC

Gavyn’s slideshow presentation followed all of the criteria previously mentioned in the rubric. It successfully contains three main topics, includes a video, is the proper time, and contains all the other criteria. The audio provided a tone fitting to the bouncy, somewhat chaotic behavior of his presentation yet still flowing well enough to be understood by the audience. However, he could have improved by including more pictures of himself from more recent times and possibly spent more time further elaborating on his uncle. I would give this presentation an A.

Harlie Stricklin

2024-08-20 18:30:06 UTC

Jayme, I think your slideshow was really cool. If I could change one thing about your slideshow I would have changed the music. You could have used more happier music like something more uplifting. The music was really depressing. However I would still give you an A because it was really fun to watch.

Cecilia K.

2024-08-20 18:30:35 UTC

Joseph, Please use your words correctly. This was a fun experience to watch the first time around but I feel as if it would get boring very quickly. Add some personality! The white was harsh on the eyes and NONE of the photos were of you. Last time I checked, you do not look like any of these people! I would give you a D.

2024-08-20 18:30:54 UTC

It's Tristan, I mainly liked your slideshow. It was very well done and gave many laughs to us with your pictures. The music was also a classic and obviously the best one here. The only critique I have is more color. There was little to no emotion behind everything in the slide, except the pictures. I can tell you really like purple. Plus only a few pictures had some animations. Other than that it was good overall.

Mia

2024-08-20 18:31:48 UTC

Harlie this was a good slideshow, and I really liked the detail. I really enjoyed finding new things out about you. My favorite was the Starbucks, because I also really love Starbucks. The one thing that should have been changed would be the bad word in the song. Overall, this was very good, and that was the only thing I would have fixed.

Gavyn Boucherie

2024-08-20 18:32:07 UTC

Noah you made a great presentation but it was lacking in a few areas. You did not meet the time limit of 3 minutes by a long shot. You also did not have enough pictures. I liked how you had a good amount of time per slide to view it. I would give you a C.

Gibson

2024-08-20 18:32:27 UTC

I believe that Noah did all right considering his pictures. I would have given him a C do to him not hitting the time given and not having 3 topics like in the rubric. On the other hand I did like the pictures of his friends and brothers.

2024-08-20 18:32:34 UTC

Joseph I don't think you completed your video with everything that was asked. I definitely thought your slideshow showed your true colors about you. I did not like hoe you did not put any pictures of you because I feel it's more about the stock photo than you, but overall I think the video covered enough but it was very basic. I give this video a c-.

Jayme

2024-08-20 18:32:50 UTC

Cecilia, your video was one of the best that I watched. If there was one thing I could improve about it was it should've not included as many pictures of me because that was horrible 🤮. Other than that I would give you an A.

Alex

2024-08-20 18:33:01 UTC

Noah, your slideshow didn't come to the 3 minute mark. There wasn't any color throughout the slideshow. All though throughout the slide show the pictures was good. There wasn't enough text slides. Overall I would give this presentation an C. Lots of room for improvement.

Noah D'avy

2024-08-20 18:33:53 UTC

Gibson, this slideshow was life changing. It was so thorough, you touched on each aspect and made very well. There was a ample amount of pictures and the videos were very good. The only take away is the last "i" was NOT capitalized. I would give him a A.

Kade

2024-08-20 18:34:17 UTC

oseph I don't think you completed your video with everything that was asked. I definitely thought your slideshow showed your true colors about you. I did not like hoe you did not put any pictures of you because I feel it's more about the stock photo than you, but overall I think the video covered enough but it was very basic. I give this video a c-.

Harlie Stricklin

2024-08-20 18:34:23 UTC

Joseph, your slideshow could have been better. You should have used real photos and not stock photos. The music choice was really different than actual music. It sounded like a funeral. Did not even include at least one photo of yourself. However 10/10 bc I'm being forced to.

Mia

2024-08-20 18:34:52 UTC

Kamile I loved your slideshow. It was really good and I loved your friends slides. It had a lot of details. I would not change anything about your slide because it was very detailed, with many pictures.

Tj Beeson

2024-08-20 18:35:10 UTC

Hey Kade, I enjoyed your video that was previewed in class. I do think that you could of made some slides more appealing to your audience. Much like Joe's there was a lot of white. To make it more appealing to your audience you can better make color balance, or create more contrasting with colors. This is a great attempt. I would give this a A.

Kamile

2024-08-20 18:36:34 UTC

Harlie, this is by far my favorite slideshow. I loved how your transitions made the video even more intresting than with just the pictures. I wouldn't change a thing about your video. I give your project an A+!!

Alex

2024-08-20 18:36:40 UTC

Gibson Hopp, you slideshow was really good. The song went perfect with your slideshow. I like how you had a build up to the trio. Overall I would give this presentation an A. Even though you didn't show the fish you caught.

Harlie Stricklin

2024-08-20 18:36:51 UTC

DEAR TRISTEN, your video was okay. Your video could have been a lot better if I was not being pointed out and targeted for not capitalizing my "I's". However since I'm a nice person I'm giving you a 10/10 because of your dogs.

Joseph LeJeune

jlejeune6 — 2024-08-20 18:36:56 UTC

Harlie, overall, your slideshow was good, but it could've been better. The music wasn't the best, but it was good, I guess. I loved the part about me though. A, 10/10

Kade

2024-08-20 18:37:12 UTC

Noah I think you had some good ideas but you didn't meet the qualifications for the video. You didn't have the time or the pictures to ensure you had enough time. But overall I give you a C because you would've met the qualifications if you had enough pictures.

Noah D'avy

2024-08-20 18:37:24 UTC

John, this was very well made. Between the many pictures and great song choice, it was thorough and each text slide was well made and made sense. From what I see, there is not much to nothing to take away from this. I would give him an A.

Gibson

2024-08-20 18:38:03 UTC

I believe that your grade should be A+ 100. Your music choice instantly hooked all viewers. And I loved seeing all of the pictures of your family :). Your use of witty banter and use of words in correlation to the pictures was top tier. The best part of your slides was the silly billy photos of you and all of your friend.

Harlie Stricklin

2024-08-20 18:38:47 UTC

Kamile, your slideshow was really cute and fun to watch. I loved the song choice a lot and it was very detailed. I would give you a 10/10!!

Joseph LeJeune

jlejeune6 — 2024-08-20 18:39:08 UTC

Thomas, your slide show was really good. The best part was the little animations and details you added, but the only bad thing was the fact that it was too dark. Overall, A or 10/10.

Kamile

2024-08-20 18:39:16 UTC

Joseph, your project was unsatisfactory. Your project was supposed to be a video but instead it was a slideshow. I belive you have the ability to make it much better. Therefore, your grade from me is a C.