https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7 Made with a stroke of good luck en-us 2017-09-05 19:40:31 UTC 2017-09-29 23:11:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088364 Have a strong evidence for your citing evidence.]]> 2017-09-06 12:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088364 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088379 don't assume 

]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088379 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088457 Don't use second person]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088457 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088475 use a leadin

]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088475 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088531 Try turning multiple sentences into one complex sentence.]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088531 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088533 Don't preach and a tag is needed.]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088533 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088543 Don't do run on sentences. ]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088543 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088558 Don't forget a tag.]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088558 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088584 Unclear/Run on
]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088584 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088590 dont be repetitive]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088590 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088593 Include title of passage and author.]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088593 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088639 Always have the title and author in the R section]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088639 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088644 2017-09-06 12:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088644 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088667 Summary only gets 1st person. ]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088667 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088771 Tag needed]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088771 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088791 Do not use the word 'there'.]]> 2017-09-06 12:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185088791 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089132 The C and the E of RACES was unclear.]]> 2017-09-06 12:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089132 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089297 Period after MLA even if there is punctuation at the end of the quote]]> 2017-09-06 12:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089297 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089334 Don't forget to use tags.]]> 2017-09-06 12:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089334 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089491 Summarry was all over the place.....]]> 2017-09-06 12:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089491 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089714 The lead in is confusing and the C is too wordy.]]> 2017-09-06 12:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089714 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089765 Do not be too wordy.]]> 2017-09-06 12:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089765 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089772 use a lead in

]]> 2017-09-06 12:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185089772 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090223 Always put the title and the author.]]> 2017-09-06 12:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090223 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090228 Do not do run on sentences.]]> 2017-09-06 12:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090228 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090308 The lead in was confusing and the C was to wordy.]]> 2017-09-06 12:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090308 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090381 Be specific, no repeating]]> 2017-09-06 12:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185090381 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185191272 Need to use MLA]]> 2017-09-06 16:07:43 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185191272 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185191481 Restate the question]]> 2017-09-06 16:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185191481 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192180 Have a strong text.]]> 2017-09-06 16:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192180 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192372 Make sure to include a lead for the quote]]> 2017-09-06 16:09:57 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192372 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192491 site the authors name in quotation marks with the page number. ]]> 2017-09-06 16:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192491 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192500 Cite evidence and use a tag]]> 2017-09-06 16:10:11 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192500 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192912 use tags, check your work

]]> 2017-09-06 16:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185192912 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193488 need to work on run-on's ]]> 2017-09-06 16:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193488 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193547 use tags, MLA 

]]> 2017-09-06 16:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193547 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193568 Re-read before turning it in

]]> 2017-09-06 16:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185193568 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185194236 capatilization rules]]> 2017-09-06 16:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185194236 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185194962 Don't forget races, needs lead in                                                  


]]> 2017-09-06 16:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185194962 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195449 Run On]]> 2017-09-06 16:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195449 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195589 Avoid 1st person         ]]> 2017-09-06 16:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195589 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195747 combine sentence, put a period after MLA]]> 2017-09-06 16:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185195747 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185196066 no run on sentences

]]> 2017-09-06 16:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185196066 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185196463 CANNOT USE A SECOUND PRONOUN "YOU"












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Need a better tag]]> 2017-09-06 16:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185197414 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185198820 ..]]> 2017-09-06 16:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185198820 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185252053 Don't be too wordy]]> 2017-09-06 17:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185252053 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185252499 always tag an author and tag the quote]]> 2017-09-06 17:58:14 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185252499 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185253203 Charlie Griffin ]]> 2017-09-06 17:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185253203 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185254006 Don't say un-needed phrases.]]> 2017-09-06 18:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185254006 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185254665 Not to say "this quote" and just start with what you are going to say.]]> 2017-09-06 18:02:16 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185254665 bess_manning https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185255887 don't ever use the word quote 

]]> 2017-09-06 18:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185255887 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257047 Don't forget to add comma after lead-in and before quote]]> 2017-09-06 18:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257047 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257688 No Long closings ]]> 2017-09-06 18:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257688 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257726 "Don't make assumptions"]]> 2017-09-06 18:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185257726 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185258671 A tag could shorten the quote]]> 2017-09-06 18:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185258671 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185258983 Make a tag and know how to put the title down]]> 2017-09-06 18:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185258983 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259008 Tag needed and not to be redundant]]> 2017-09-06 18:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259008 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259065 no run-on sentences and no periods in the quotations.]]> 2017-09-06 18:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259065 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259238 Be specific to the story]]> 2017-09-06 18:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259238 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259469 Use tag, don't assume]]> 2017-09-06 18:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259469 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259619 To use a better tag, don't be redundant, and to avoid restating things.]]> 2017-09-06 18:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259619 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259703 Capitalizing the title ]]> 2017-09-06 18:12:28 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259703 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259799 Run-on. Did not follow RACES.]]> 2017-09-06 18:12:40 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259799 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259863 Work on a better tag.]]> 2017-09-06 18:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185259863 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185260547 Put a quote in the body]]> 2017-09-06 18:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185260547 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185260701 Need tags]]> 2017-09-06 18:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185260701 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185262626 Do not be redundant.]]> 2017-09-06 18:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185262626 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185281393 NO FIRST PERSON!!!

]]> 2017-09-06 18:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185281393 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185281808 summarize better, have a good lead on

]]> 2017-09-06 18:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185281808 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185283380 don't be wordy]]> 2017-09-06 19:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185283380 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286546 2017-09-06 19:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286546 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286869 2017-09-06 19:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286869 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286994 2017-09-06 19:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185286994 https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185291975 2017-09-06 19:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/courtney1130/inyn6im5o5o7/wish/185291975