12th Grade Monologues by Lauren Ritorto https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1 Macbeth en-us 2019-01-25 16:02:53 UTC 2025-11-30 17:41:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Monologue de Cendrillon par Lauren Arcusi https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331433548  
Oh là là là!  Qu’est-ce que je suis contente que la marianne est venue me changer en jolie robe et pantoufles de verre.  Elle m’a tout donnée pour aller au bal.  Je ne me suis jamais si bien habillée dans ma vie!  Je préfère ma robe bleue, même si les souris m’ont faite une jolie robe rose.  Elles sont très mignonnes mes petites souris.  

Je suis si impatiente de voir qui est au bal et de faire la connaissance du prince!  Je n’ai jamais fait la connaissance du prince avant!  Je ne suis jamais sortie de cette maison.  Quel malheur ma vie!  Quelle chance que j’ai d’avoir une marianne si généreuse et sympa.  Je me demande aussi qu’est-ce qu’on va manger.  Peut-être qu’on va manger de la bouillabaisse!  J’adore le poisson!  

 
]]> 2019-02-14 17:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331433548 Monologue for Footman https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331433757  Today has not felt quite right.  The sky has been a bit too blue and the scent of the air a bit too crisp, but foraging was fruitful.  I even found some extra crumbs in the castle not swept away by those god forsaken maidens who are forever whisking away the scraps that would content my belly.  What?  Wait?  What is that tingling?  My toes feel odd, and my whiskers are quivering. They haven’t quivered like that since I met my beloved Annabella by that discarded loaf of bread. Yes, I like this feeling buuuuuuuttttttttt, whoa!  My feet are...are...HUMAN!  My whiskers are...are HUMAN!   My soft, furry, brown fur is...is...now a blanket of green velvet.   What, am I wearing the grass?  I...I can see more clearly with these spectacles.  And, this pumpkin is now a carriage.  I AM a human. I am a HUMAN. Ahhhhhh, do my eyes deceive me?   Cinderella even looks different. ]]> 2019-02-14 17:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331433757 Monologue: Drizella: the mean step sister from CinderellaThe nerve of that brat! She thought she would take mother’s old tablecloth and somehow turn it into a dress. She thought she looked so beautiful in those scraps. I can’t believe that she would believe she’s worthy enough to meet the prince and go to a ball. Who does she think she is? She’s a peasant, not even good enough of to clean our house. Well, we showed her. I saw that she used my old hair ribbon for a sash and I ripped it right off her skinny little body. After Anastasia and I got done with her, there was nothing left to that homemade hand-me-down. https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331434763 2019-02-14 17:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331434763 Meredith, https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331435717 I like the tone that you create in the first sentence.  I can hear the character's internal voice clearly.   

I also use a rhetorical question that reveals Drizella's self-important self-perception.   

I wonder if Drizella is really envious of Cinderella's skinny little body?  
You also nicely create a villainous character that makes me want to root for Cinderella and can't wait to celebrate her defeat of the mean sister.  Ah, revenge will be sweet!

I wonder...you channel her tone so well. Any Drizella in you???? :)

Lisa]]> 2019-02-14 17:57:52 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331435717 Lisa, https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331436281 I noticed your very descriptive language you used to describe the mouse's transformation, my favorite was the brown fur turning to green velvet.  
I also noticed how the metaphors you used helped the reader understand the full extent of the mouse's transformation, the mouse had not felt a tingling since he met Anabella by the bread.  
I wonder how the mouse will feel after midnight
I wonder how the mouse will interact with his mouse friends who also turned into footmen or horses to take Cinderella to the ball]]> 2019-02-14 17:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331436281 Laur, https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331436431 You can tell how starstruck Cinderella is by  your first paragraph.  I ilke how you portrayed her as very excited to meet the prince but still humble at the same time by stating how grateful she was for her mice.

I was wondering if you think she was nervous or anxious at all considering they don't let her out. ]]> 2019-02-14 17:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/pennsaukenhighschool1/inivupi4g4q1/wish/331436431