佳作1：分析內容 by 溫老師 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m en-us 2020-12-10 10:38:13 UTC 2025-12-23 08:18:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Winniewan https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1005641364 ✓ 具體例子]]> 2020-12-10 10:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1005641364 Winniewan https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1005642494 ✘ 例子錯了，蔬菜是濕貨]]> 2020-12-10 10:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1005642494 3A 05 莊錦鈺 s20180244 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008513144 我認為整個主意很好，扎染的確是現在的潮流，可以吸引不至年老人和青年也喜歡]]> 2020-12-11 01:01:36 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008513144 3A20 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514119 同意，能砟]]> 2020-12-11 01:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514119 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514601 具體，因為切合環保同時也美觀]]> 2020-12-11 01:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514601 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514687 這個想法很新奇，可以吸引人購買，還可以達到環保的目的。帶出的方法也合理]]> 2020-12-11 01:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008514687 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516658 idea不錯]]> 2020-12-11 01:03:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516658 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516707 說明牛油果的顏色如何，染的顏色怎麼好看，如何受歡迎，受歡迎的程度，具體描述一下。因為雖然例舉的合理，但美中不足的是沒有具體描述方法。]]> 2020-12-11 01:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516707 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516853 用牛油果、藍苺一些水果，就不需要用到色素，便較為環保。而且顏色美觀，受歡迎，吸引更多人來買賈這種環保的袋，便能更環保]]> 2020-12-11 01:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008516853 3A 14 s20180603 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008517065 具體，因為既環保又實用。]]> 2020-12-11 01:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008517065 s2018114 https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008518981 具體，因為我認為這個設計款式十分有創意，而且十分實用]]> 2020-12-11 01:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008518981 Winniewan https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008540750 ✘ 髒布不會時尚美觀，應將效果改為「環保」]]> 2020-12-11 01:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008540750 Winniewan https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008544008 ✘ 未解釋紮染如何環保（免去工業程序？廚餘？）]]> 2020-12-11 01:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008544008 Winniewan https://padlet.com/Winniewan/in9pmsf18mh1ro6m/wish/1008546876 ✓ 層次分明
✓ 用語富變化（佳詞：乾濕分離、拼貼、時尚、流行）
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